FF: The Last Wish, Pt 14, pg 20 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Nice update.
And you revealed Ram's secret too and
Somehow I feel he's bluffing.
The story is really progressing well.
So we're in for more raya time now as they're
Heading to Chandigarh.
What is with Sid?
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
With planning to confuse more the evil trio awesome foursome having some night out too. This has brought these four more close to each other. With dadi too know about the plan to trap the evilness living in their house it will be more fun to see. Thank you for the pm dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Very nice
Changed avtaar of Ram
Please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
hope k this truth from ram doesn't affect Raya's relationship.
I loved this part.
pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Plz continue it soon
waiting for it
Hope Raya will be together
I loved this part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96


aww so good to know that... RaYa is so attached to each other they can't stay away... so Nik don't know abt Sid is in jail... but happy to know RaYa are making plan & getting stronger against trio... the way Ram made plan for outing & his past coming out was really cute to know he is so honest wow awesome I want Priya to tease him in future for this it will be cute so plz post next soon will be waiting for it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-11

Just before they are about to head home, they hear familiar voices from the booth behind. Ram gets up to see who it is.

Ram: Choti aur Kartik!! Good to see you guys!

Natasha: Bhai, aap yahan? Don't tell me you have come alone or with Vikram.

Kartik: Jiju, you look very different in the polo. Never seen you in anything other than a suit or traditional wear you wore for the shaadi.

Ram: Thank you Kartik. Dekho, designer biwi tumhari ne Abhi tak notice nahi kiya. Nahi main akele nahi aaya hoon, Priya, Neha aur Vikram bhi Hai. Join us na.

All the three head to the bigger booth.

Natasha: Oh my god! It must be raining today. First Bhai in casuals, and now Priya in a dress! I'll faint.

Kartik: Kya baat Hai di? I haven't seen you in one for years now.

It's a "U shaped booth, Vikram is sitting on one end, next to him Neha, next to her Priya, before Natasha or Kartik could scoot in, Ram makes his way, slightly pushing them, which shocks and surprises Natasha and Kartik completely.

Natasha: Bhai! Ho Kya raha Hai?

Priya, embarrassed and blushing.

Ram: Kya kiya Maine? Sab apni biwi ke bagal Mein baith rahe Hai, main Kyun nahi?

Kartik: Di, seriously! Are you blushing?

Ram: Bahut ho gaya, ab aur mat tang karo mere biwi ko!

After a lot of taang-khichayi,

Natasha: Bhai, and Priya, good that we met you here, we are actually moving out of Sharma house tomorrow.

Kartik: We have rented an apartment for the time being, we will start shifting in he morning.

Everyone becomes silent. Ram puts his shoulder around a tear eyed Priya.

Ram: Priya told me, bit I was busy in my own thing, I forgot to talk to you guys about this. How are your parents taking it?

Kartik: They understand, this is the best for everyone.

Ram: Ok. We will stop by first thing in the morning. Also, we couldn't make it for the dinner we promised.

Priya: You both are happy na?

Kartik: Di, I want everyone to be happy and more so Natasha. And we are not leaving the state or country, just moving across neighborhood.

Priya: Neha, Vikram itte chup Kyun ho?

Neha: Chup nahi hoon drunk hoon. Mujhe mere bache yaad aarahe Hai.

Vikram: Woh shaitaan toh mujhe bhi yaad aarahe Hai. Ram, ek kaam kar, jaate- jaate humen Neha ke parents ke yahan chod de, Aaj raat ko hum wahi rukh jaayenge.

Ram: Theek Hai. Ab hum sab ko nikal na chahiye.

Everyone gets up slowly makes their way out of the booth. Neha was already leaning on Vikram for support. Priya who is tipsy too, was about to fall, when Ram puts his hand across her waist, makes her put her arm across his shoulder for support. Martin and Natasha notice this and smile at eachother.

Everyone disperses.

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Kartik: Natasha, I'm very happy.

Natasha: Me too!

Kartik: Why are you happy?

Natasha: I always felt guilty that because of us, we forced our siblings for marriage, but what I saw today, welled me up.

Kartik: Exactly. Did you notice the change in both their body languages? Dressing up. And the comfort and warmth, your brother was displaying for di.

Natasha: True Kartik. Are you happy about moving out only for me?

Kartik: No nuts, I love you, but I love my parents too. Staying together was not helping you or my mother. So, a little distance will solve a lot of problems. Relax I'll with you.

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Ram drives to Neha's parents house and dogs them off and they head to KM.

Ram is still giving support to Priya, he holds her closely until they get to the stairs.

Ram: Aise, I can't help you climb the stairs, you have to try to walk a little Priya.

Priya with great difficulty, makes halfway and was about to fall, Ram holds her.

Ram: Ram beta, gym jaa raha Hai na, chalo Abhi weights uthane Ki baari Hai.

He scoops Priya into his arms and makes his way to the bedroom. He places Priya on the bed and locks the door. He looks at her lovingly.

Ram: how are you so cute? You look so hot, already I find it very difficult to stay away from you, when you look like this, I have such a tough time controlling myself.

Saying this, Ram leans over Priya, starts smelling her hair and slowly starts kissing on her neck. Priya, who until now was acting as if she dozed off, unable to control, turns her head and kisses Ram on his cheek.

Ram: So, somebody was awake!

Priya: Yes!

Ram: So, now that I know, you are awake and I am not taking fayda of your drunken state (moving his finger from her cheek to her neckline), do you realize, your brother and my sister know about us now?

Priya: I was so embarrassed, I was in this dress. What would Natasha think?

Ram: Like I already told you, you look hot, irresistible, and Priya at this moment the last thing I want to think is what would my baby sister think. It's been so long, I got some action. Really, I have been a good boy for so many years, then you came along aur mere bramhacharya ka dhajjiya uda diya.

Priya: really? Bramhacharya? You? Linda?

Ram acts as if he can't hear anything and slowly pulls his polo off his head, revealing his bare chest, and continues to kiss Priya all over. Before Priya can speak anything else, he seals her lips with his. His hands slowly undoing her dress.

He breaks the kiss for a bit and again continues to kiss her, letting Priya give up on her taunts. Priya, pushes Ram on his back and like a hungry tigress pounces on Ram and kisses him madly, biting his lips, leaving bite marks on his neck and other parts of the body. It was Ram's turn to take control, he pushes her back and after a lengthy foreplay, the rest of the clothing discarded with, both move rhythmically and reach climax. Both stay motionless for a while.

Priya: you know what, yes I did realize you have lost weight. Not because of Vikram or Neha, but I knew you were working out. I have seen your workout clothes which you used to handover to bansi kaka after work.

Ram: Oh my ACP Pradhyumn, why did you tell me the truth? Can'tyou be romantic and say, you are lighter than the previous time?

Priya: nahi, seriously what's with Linda?

Ram: I am sleepy.

Priya: Ram

Ram: I wasn't lying and remember, mera na sirf naam "Ram hai. It wasn't love with Linda, I can't believe, I am saying this, it was physical.

Priya: what? You said you were sad etc?

Ram: yes, but that was because we got physical.

Priya: so you lied?

Ram: I lied to Neha, not you. I was very fit back in college days and was pretty good looking, I never followed or fell for a girl because of the circumstances at home, not because I wasn't attracted to or something else. You seriously want to know details?

Priya: yes.

Ram: ok, so the library part was right and after that hanging out was right too, but we started flirting with each other over emails and other wise, slowly we shared a kiss and we got physical and I used spend most of my time with her. But please understand, I was just being a guy and I knew there was no future.m

Priya: I can't believe you were in a relationship for selfish reasons!

Ram: Are you angry?

Priya: No. Just shocked, but you never lied to me, I never asked you and never spoke. That's it.

Ram: But, let me tell you one thing madam, with you, it is all about love, even sex. I can't believe, we are the same persons, who couldn't stand each other until we confessed love, we fought for something or the other, but after the confession, it's like 360 degree turn.

Priya: we used to fight because we weren't confessing. I love you Ram, I love you when you look at me with love, passion. I love you when you place your hand on my shoulder as assurance. I love you when you place your hand on my waist to mark that I belong to you. I love you the most because you are making all possible efforts to lose weight, change yourself for me.

Ram: Baap re itne Saare reasons! But, I wanted to talk to you about kids.

Priya: what about kids?

Ram: you want kids right? I mean our kids?

Priya: I haven't thought about it.

Ram: really? Then what was your last wish about? "Kisiko zindagi dena chahti hoon?

Priya: Woh, I was trying to express that I was ready for being actual husband and wife.

Ram: Ok. Now you are worrying me, do you want to have kids? Because I understand our age and you having kids at this age, there is no pressure from my end. Because, we have been having unprotected sex, if you don't want kids, then we could use protection and I am completely ok with that too.

Priya: Maine Kabhi kahan, mujhe bacche nahi chahiye? I just said, because, we just started our married life, I didn't want unnecessary pressure on our heads. Seriously, mere liye you want to use protection? I know how much you wanted to have kids of your own. Don't ever get that thought.

Ram: So, now that, it is clear that you want to have kids, lets speed up the process and let'sgo for round two?

Priya: Kal subah, maa-papa ke yahan jaana hai na?

Ram: ok. Ok. I was just kidding baby.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04



aww so good to know that... RaYa is so attached to each other they can't stay away... so Nik don't know abt Sid is in jail... but happy to know RaYa are making plan & getting stronger against trio... the way Ram made plan for outing & his past coming out was really cute to know he is so honest wow awesome I want Priya to tease him in future for this it will be cute so plz post next soon will be waiting for it...


I am trying my best not be predictable and mould my story as per the expectations. I would personally want more RaYa moments out of the story, so can't deny that!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear, that's such a wonderful part. I like the pace at which you're taking the FF...love to read about our fav Raya!!! Keep writing more.

Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful part... looking forward for the next update

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