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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear...

Sorry dear for commenting late...read it once posted...

Nice update...
Ram was tensed and priya wore his fav color to ease his mood.,sweet of her..:)
So neha and vik finally arrived...And all those scenes followed were nice..
The tension on vik, raya scene of handling gussa,mirch,then side hug with priya broking into tears, raya comforting each other, bf-gf idea..all nice..

Vik neha was given forgiveness so easily..even priya isnt actually angry..okkk...i thought and expected its going to be tough for them..ok chalega, then how else can raya endup together..lol

So ram trying to tk this relationship forward and gv idea of bf-gf since priya wanted a love marriage,
Then priya asking him for a dance then to prove his point... hmm..raya scenes ahead.,waiting to read...

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls pls, can u write this in english, am really interested but I don't understand Hindu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 9


Next 4 - 5 days normal to all, Priya in garden with her lappy, Krishna came there with 2 mug.

Krish- Priya.

Priya- maa aap, mujhe bula liya hota Mai Chali aati.

Krish- thik hai beta iss me konsi Badi baat hai.

Priya only smile.

Krish- kuch kam kar Rahi hai ho.

Priya- Haan maa wo thoda SA.

Krish- thik hai.

Priya- maa Mai ghar par kam Karti Hun toh chalta hai na.

Krish- chlta hai, kiu?

Priya- maa Papa ke ghar par thik hai lekin ye toh sasural hai na toh.

Krish- toh Kya hua ye ghar bhi toh tumhara hai.

Priya- 2 mugs.

Krish- chai.

Priya- Mai le Sakti Hun.

Krish- Haan hum dono ke liye hi hai.

Priya take one sip of tea- aadrak wali perfect.

Krish only smile.

Priya- maa ek baat bolni hai.

Krish- bolo.

Priya- Neha ko rasoi ki rasam mat bolna usse khaana banan ata hai lekin only 25%.

Krish- tum toh Neha se naraz ho.

Priya- maa aapko pata hai phir bhi.

Krish- aisi narazgi achhi nahi hai beta.

Priya- Haan maa, thode aur din.

Krish- hmmm waise hum sab soch Rahe hai tum sab ka reception rakhe.

Priya- reception!

Krish- Haan.

Priya- OK, aapne ram se baat ki.

Krish- ram bol Raha hai tumse Pucho, aur tum ram se.

Priya- maa agar reception party hum naa rakhe toh bhi chalega.

Krish- kuch baat hai beta Jo tujhe acchi nahi lag Rahi hai.

Priya- Haan maa.

Krish- bolo.

Priya- maa reception rakhe aisi shaadi nahi hai lekin hum reception naa rakhe Valentine ki party rakhe issye kuch alag bhi hoga aur reception bhi lagega.

Krish- tum iss shaadi se Khush nahi ho.

Priya- dukhi bhi toh nahi Hun.

Krish- ye kaisa answer hua.

Priya- Mai aapko as bahu jaada pasand hu ya Beti.

Krish- Beti.

Priya- waise hi ram mujhe as pati nahi ek acche dost lagte hai, shaadi kaise bhi hui hai, lekin wo AUR Mai accept Kiya hai, Rahi baat Neha AUR Vik ki toh hum sab ki shaadi ek dusre se Hoti toh life spoil hoti, ye baat mujhe ram me samjhyai itna samjhdaar pati mujhe mila, meri jaisi ladki ko Jo haar ek baat par gussa Karti hai, usska gussa kaise gayab karna hai ye pata hai, wo ladki Khush nahi bahot Khush Hoti hai n she smile.

Krish- ram ko bahot pyar Dena coz he deserves you.

Priya only smile.

Krish- aaj tak sirf family ke liye jita aaya hai, family important hai usse.

Priya- ram ko Jo important hai wahi mujhe important hai.

Krish- ram ne Neha ko Vik ki patni hai ye dekh kar..

Priya cut her middle- na maa unnki aankho me aisa kuch nahi dikha wo khud mujhe samjha Rahe hai, jaane do sab.

Krish- Neha se.

Priya- maa jaise mera routine hai waise hi ram ka, kam se Fursat hi nahi milti.

Krish- iss liye office join karne kaha Tumhe.

Priya- Maine nahi kaha wo khud mujhe bol Rahe the office join karo lekin Maine naa kaha mujhe aap sab ke Saath time spend karna hai.

Krishna only smile.

In office, ram restless about priya's bf wish.

Ram- bf banane ka safar itna mushkil hai, itna tha iss liye Priya ka koi bf nahi tha kaise hoga combination Doo song ka, dono song itne hit hai ke inn dono ko ek song, Kya yaar office aaya hai, office ka kam kar song ke baare me itna mat soch, n knocked on door.

Nuts came with file- Bhai Singapore se call hai aapko Jaana hoga 4 din ke liye.

Ram busy in his thoughts.

Nuts continue- waha par phir se wahi workers ki problem hui hai, AUR wahi and she saw him & his busy mind.

Nuts seat Infront of him and make some noise but no use, she make a video of him without permission & send to Priya, then she jerked his thoughts.

Ram came in reality- tu kab aayi.

Nuts- 23rd year pehle.

Ram- chup kar.

Nuts- itne hi doobe ho toh ghar Jaao.

Ram- aisa kuch nahi hai hai.

Nuts- aapko Singapore Jaana hai.

Ram- kiu?

Nuts- same problem Bhai.

Ram- how much days.

Nuts- 4 days.

Ram- kab.

Nuts- I said them next week.

Ram- Kal nikalta Hun, ussme konsi Badi baat hai.

Nuts- nahi ho sakta.

Ram- kiu?

Nuts- parso Valentine ki party hai.

Ram- yaar aise Bich me party.

Nuts- reception ki jagah.

Ram- suggest Karne Wala Kon hai, 100% Vik hoga.

Nuts- no.

Ram- rishi.

Nuts- nope.

Ram- Neha.

Nuts- Priya babhi sab ki baat ko samne rekhte huye, ye thik laga aur kuch nahi.

Ram- thik hai.

Nuts- sirf thik hai, 15 din me itna change.

Ram- aisa kuch nahi hai.

Nuts- thik hai.

Ram- party ke next day ki ticket kara de.

Nuts- lekin.

Ram- jaldi kam sort karke aana hoga.

Nuts- OK done deal, waise ek video viral hua hai, Shaam tak aapko pata chalega.

Ram- konsa.

Nuts- wait for evening n she leave.

Ram's mobi ring caller ID biwi.

Ram pickup- boliye biwi ji.

Priya- hayy mera pati itna dooba hai meri yaad me koi Kya bol Raha kuch pata bhi nahi chal Raha hai.

Ram- Kya bole jaa rahi ho.

Priya- kuch nahi pati ji, khaana hua.

Ram- hwww iss baat ke liye call Kiya.

Priya- nahi ji Maine toh avaiye call Kiya, time nahi jaa Raha tha.

Ram- aacha ji! Ye party ka khyal kaha se aaya hum dono naa bolne wale the.

Priya- reception ke liye toh naa hi tha, Valentine ke liye Haan kaha hai.

Ram- kiu?

Priya- arrye aise thodi naa bolti maa ko naa nahi bolte.

Ram- hum Kya karnge USS party me.

Priya- party enjoy karnge sab karte hai waise.

Ram- Priya that is Valentine, couples ka din hota hai.

Priya- Haan toh we both are couples.

Ram- sirf dost banni ho.

Priya- party venue ghar se Bahar hai, Mai toh mere bf ke Saath rahungi AUR aap aapke gf ke Saath, lekin n she stop.

Ram- ab Bich me kaha se lekin aaya.

Priya- lekin mere bf ko shurt yaad honi chahiye toh hi sab kuch possible hai warna jaane do.

Ram- yaar itne jaldi kaise ho sakta hai.

Priya- parso Shaam tak ka wqat hai, bye khaana khaalo, jaldi aana n she cut the call.

Ram- Kya yaar ab waqt bhi nahi hai, kaise hoga.


At home, knocked on door, Priya turn, Neha on door.

Neha- aandar aa Sakti Hun.

Priya didn't say any word, Neha came in.

Neha- baat karni hai, pata hai gussa hai ghar par Badi maa aur maa bhi nahi hai Shaam ko aane wale hai AUR Vik office gaya hai, baithe baithe bore ho Rahi thi iss liye tere paas aayi.

Priya cross her arms near chest n look at her, give a angry look.

Neha continue- plz ek baar meri baat toh Sunn plz.

Priya only look n say- aaj mera mood bahot accha hai issliye tum bol Sakti ho, plz continue.

Neha- thank you, thank you, thank you, very much.

Priya little rude- itna bhi thank you mat bolo ke welcome naa Sunn paao.

Neha- itna rude behave mat karna hurt hota hai.

Priya- hurt hota hai? She question her.

Neha- Haan bahot jaada.

Priya smile in angry- mujhe bhi hurt hua jab tera letter padha, bahot jaada hurt hua jab tujhe Vik ke Saath dekha iss wajah se toh bilkul nahi ke wo mera hone Wala pati tha, balki iss wajah se tune mujhse ye baat chupai, you hide everything from me, Jo har ek baat aapni life ki haar ek choti baat mujhse share Karti aayi hai wo itni baadi baat mujhse chupai gayi.

Neha- Maine ye baat tujhse boli Hoti toh bhi Papa ye shaadi nahi hone dete Priya.

Priya- tujhe yaad hai after 10th you wanted join piano classes, uncle was said no, you remember, OK wo choti baat hai, Haan uncle tujhe bol Rahe the MBA kar lekin tujhe fashion designer banna tha tab bhi Mai hi thi uncle ki naa ko Haan me baddl Diya tha, yaad hai Tumhe, chalo ye baat bhi hum jaane dete hai, tujhe Paris Jaana tha konsa toh show dekhne ke liye tab bhi Mai hi thi, iss baar bhi Mai hi thi Neha Jo ye sab sort Karti, ye...Ye sab tune Kiya hai na inn sab ka ek hi matlab hota hai tu mujhe dosti ya koi rishte ke kabil nahi samjhti.

Neha- Priya shut your mouth.

Priya- kiu, tujhe pata hai, jab first night ko mujhe pata Chala ram mera pati ban gaya hai AUR Vik aapni shaadi se bhag gaya, ohhh sorry ram ne bhagaya kiu ki wo tujh se pyar karta tha, ram ko nahi pata tha ki wo aapne Bhai ko tere liye bhaga Raha hai, ram ye soch kar Vik ko bhagaya kiu ki meri life spoil na ho lekin ek baar bhi tune ye socha ram ki shaadi mujhse nahi Hoti, toh Kya hota, socha hai wo kis bhi rishte par vishwaas na karta ya phir... Tujhe bas aapni padhi thi, Neha tum dono be shaadi ki iss baat se Mai upset nahi hun, Mai iss baat se upset Hun ram ne aaj tak mujhse ek baar bhi aapne dil ki baat nahi boli, wo hurt hua hai Neha, ye baat naa tu samjh Rahi hai naa Vik tum dono ne naa bata kar galti ki hai, jis din ram ne Vik ki biwi tum ho ye dekha tab se Maine usse dekha hai, shayaad wo rishta compare karta hai, Yaa ye sochta hai galti ki hai Vik bhagakar, agar wo ek baar puchta Vik ko toh bhi wo Kuch karte, Mai tumse naraz nahi Hun neha lekin ram tum dono ko ek Saath dekhte hai toh unnhe lagta hai, unnhone mere Saath galat Kiya hai, guilt ke Saath jee Raha hai, Vik ram ko pehechn pata hai toh ram se baat Karne bolo, Neha tum dono ki galti ki saza wo khudko de Raha hai, Abhi tak hum dono ek ajnabee ki Tarah jeete hai, masti Mazak karte hai kiu ki jaise-taise din nikal jaaye.

Neha- I m sorry Priya meri ek galti ki wajah se ye sab, Vik ko Maine kaha that hum dono ke baare me mat bolo iss liye itna sab Kuch hua.

Priya wipe tears n say- ab thik lag Raha hai, bahot Dino se sab dil me...

Neha- I m sorry Priya.

Priya- ram ke dil se ye baat nikalo ke USS ki koi galti nahi hai, tabhi ye sorry accept hoga now plz leave.

Neha leave her room with sad face, Priya close the door and started crying coz her rude behavior.



Ram in study room Vik & Neha enter with knock on door.

Ram divert his mind towards them- tum dono.

Vik- Bhai Mai Kya Sunn Raha Hun.

Ram- Kya? Ab Mai office se late aaya ye breaking news thodi hai Bich me ek meeting aa gayi iss liye late hua ab tu bhi toh jaanta hai wo meeting jaruri thi.

Vik cut him middle- Mai office ki baat nahi kar Raha Hun.

Ram- toh phir.

Neha- you both are stop, Mai bolti Hun.

Ram- OK bolo.

Neha- Mai Priya se baat Karne gayi thi aaj noon me.

Ram- Priya ne galti se Kuch kaha hoga toh I m sorry.

Vik- Bhai tu gussa hai mujh se.

Ram- nahi toh!

Vik- you compare our relation with yours.

Ram now understand who say all these- neha Priya ne kaha ye sab.

Neha nodded in yes.

Ram- I feel guilty for all Vik tu mujhe baata deta toh ye sab nahi hota, iss wajah se gussa Hun aur compare toh... rishta compare nahi karta, but Priya ko samne rakhte huye sochta Hun toh khud par gussa AUR galti Nazar aati hai.

Neha- aisa nahi hai, Priya tumhare baare me soch Rahi hai AUR tum Priya ke, actually tum dono bahot galat direction ke me soch Rahe ho.

Ram got confused.

Neha- she observed ur all sadness.

Ram- engineer hai na.

Neha- rishton ko nibhana jaanti hai, samne Wala Kya sochta hai ye bhi.

Ram- iss liye tumse naraz hai.

Neha- wo tumhari wajah se naraz hai kiu ki tum khud ko...

Ram- Haan aisa hai.

Neha- to wahi baat hai narazgi ki.

Ram mumrmur to himself- engineer be bahot saare software bitha diye hai.

Neha- yahi bol Rahi Hun Mai.

Vik- bhai tu gussa hai mujhse.

Ram- Haan Priya jitna nahi Mai iss baat se gussa Hun kiu ki tune Neha ke baare me batana mujhe jaruri nahi samjha.

Vik & Neha both say sorry.

Vik- hum dono ki wajah se ye sab hua, hum dono ne Jo Kiya hai wo sorry se nahi kum ho sakta lekin hum dono dil se maffi mang Rahe hai.

Ram- it's OK, chalo jaane do Jo hua so hua aage se ek baat yaad rakhna aise Kuch bhi ho toh share with us.

Neha- Haan lekin Priya...

Ram- chalo mere Saath tum dono.

They trio came to room, Priya reading a book on Kindle, she look at them in mind- ab Kya hua, ye ram na bahot jaada sweet baan Rahe hai, Neha se naraz nahi Reh Sakti ye pata hai phir bhi baar-baar samne lekar aa jaate hai.

Ram- book close karo.

Priya- kiu?

Ram pull her Kindle from her hand- sab khatam.

Priya- Kya?

Ram- tum ho Kon?

Priya- ladki Hun! Aap ko Kya lag Raha hai.

Ram- mazak ke mood me nahi Hun.

Priya- OK.

Ram- why are you check out me daily.

Priya- aapka room hai aap iss room me hote hai toh aapko hi dekhungi na.

Ram- not like that.

Priya- then?

Ram- how did you know about that I m in guilt.

Priya- ohhh itu si baat.

Ram- itu si baat nahi hai, Puri baat bolo.

Priya- mujhe books padhna pasand hai toh ho jaata hai jaadu.

Ram- Tumhe Mazak lagta hai ye sab.

Priya- Mazak nahi hai ram tum insan ho bhagwan nahi insan ko emotions hote hai aur usska button, "she signal to heart", yaha hota hai, aur bhalehi heart blood pumping ka kam karta hai lekin yaha, "she signal to face", par dikhta hai, insan kitna Khush hai aur kitna nahi.

Ram- OK.

Priya- ho gaya ab mai read kar Sakti Hun.

Ram- nahi.

Priya- ab Kya?

Ram- inn dono ka Kya?

Priya- jab tak tum hum dono k rishta compare karna band nahi karte tab tak yahi hoga.

Ram- ho jaata hai mujhse.

Priya- toh mat karo jaane do, Vik tum aapni biwi ko lekar jaaon yaha se.

Ram- no...No..Stop.

Neha- ram ye galat baat hai.

Priya- Kuch galat nahi hai, Vik tum baatao may be jaise family ne Jodi banayi thi waise humari shaadi Hoti toh tum Kya karte.

Vik- Mai rishta improve Karne ki sochta.

Priya- see ram.

Ram- OK...OK ab lecuter mat do.

Priya- Mai lecture nahi deti bas Tumhe aisa lagta hai.

Neha- toh meri maffi..

Priya- sorry who are you.

Neha- hwww Priya not fair, itna Kiya phir bhi tu nahi samjhti Teri maffi mere liye kitni important hai, plz maff kar de na.

Priya- Valentine party me piano play karna hoga toh hi warna, who are you.

Neha- OK done jaanu.

Priya give her irritating look.

Vik to ram & priya- aap dono sach me iss shaadi se...

Ram- we both try.

Priya- yes we both try.

Neha to priya- sorry...

Priya- Jaao ab soo Jaao aur mujhe read Karne do.

Vik- Yaa good night!

Neha- good night.

They both leave the room.

Priya- toh kaha tak aaye.

Ram- Kya?

Priya- meri shurt yaad hai na.

Ram- tumhari shurt ki wajah se aaj Pura din kam me dhyan nahi tha.

Priya- pata hai mujhe mere paas proof hai.

Ram- kaisa proof?



Continue very soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg omg...sista... ummah...kya story hai ye.. haee...raya!! there pati biwi conversation...stole the show :-D omg...itna sweet...jaan hi nikal gae... meri...the length the content... everything was superb...now u r really improving... superb...and plz next soon bohot maja araha hai mujhe...is raya k relation me :-D deserving comments...i'll try to improve the length of my comments :-P next soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very sweet n awesome update alag hi hai yeh story loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
so sweet. I think Priya KO pehle pyaar ho jayegi ram se jaise BALH me dikgaya tha na waise. and after that ram will realize k he also love Priya
nice convo of Priya n Krishuji, RaYa, neha Priya.
thanks for pm pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update...really enjoyed reading the complete update...
Priya aur uski conditions :D

Par ye golu ko samaj kyu nahi aa raha kaisa puri kare shart...

I hope priya also accompany ram to singapore for a mini honeymoon

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
Superb Priya and Ram.
Really enjoyed reading.
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
Waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice... pls continue soon...
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awesome update...
Krishna ji is trying to understand priya nice bonding...
priyas anger shows how much concern she has for ram maybe she is accepting...
loved both raya...
plz cont soon

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