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Part 10


Priya- toh kaha tak aaye.

Ram- Kya?

Priya- meri shurt yaad hai.

Ram- tumhari shurt ki wajah se aaj Pura din kam dhayan nahi tha.

Priya- pata hai mujhe mere paas proof hai.

Ram- kaisa proof?

Priya- 1mins n she unlock her phone n show the video of his, which is nuts send her.

Ram shock to see his video- kisne send Kiya.

Priya- humare jaasus bahot saare jagah hai.

Ram- Kahi tumne Kuch ... Delete it.

Priya- no way Mai aisa nahi Karne wali.

Ram go near her- delete it.

Priya hide her mobile back, ram want her mobile.

Ram- delete karo issey.

Priya- bilkul nahi she started run.

Ram follow her- Priya ruko warna Dekho Mai Kya Karunga.

Priya- Kuch nahi kar sakte tum n she show him her thumb.

Priya came in balcony n ram also, she wanted save her n same time her leg hit by chair she lost her balance, ram catch her hand pull her by his chest, a sweet eye lock between them, Priya hold his kurta by one hand other hand on his shoulder.

Ram break the eye contact- pagal ho gir jaati toh, Kahi lagi toh nahi.

Priya nodded in no.

Ram- pakka.

Priya nodded in yes.

Ram- leave my kurta.

Priya nodded in yes n small smile create on her face & ram turn to go for bed 4-5 step n he turn.

Ram- video delete karna.

Priya nodded in no.

Ram- OK toh puja karo usski.

Priya only smile n say yes & she started walking but could not walk coz her leg muscle pull.

Ram saw these- Kya hua.

Priya- nothing.

Ram- are you lie n he again get up from bed came near to her.

Ram- kitna chal Sakti ho ye dekha hai Maine, n Priya wanted to say but ram didn't give any chance to her n pick her in his arm.

Priya- niche utharo mujhe.

Ram- iss liye bol Raha tha video delete karo.

Priya- muscle pull ki wajah video delete nahi hai tum mere Piche pade the video delete karo karke.

Ram put her on bed- tum jitni halki fulki dikhti ho waise ho nahi.

Priya- Mai moti Hun.

Ram- Maine kab kaha aaj tum yahi par soo Jaao Mai spray lekar aata Hun.

Priya- nahi..

Ram- spray nahi chahiye.

Priya- nahi wo Mai bed par nahi soone wali.

Ram- arrye Mai bol Raha Hun na.

Priya- phir bhi.

Ram- Mai nahi uthane Wala Hun phir se.

Priya- Maine kab kaha uthane ke liye tum hi super hero Bann Rahe the n she again stand n started walking.

Ram seat on bed n saw her walking.

Ram- wah...Wah...Kya baat hai.

Priya- chup karo tumhari wajha se hua hai sab Kuch.

Ram- accha ruko n again came near, haath pakdo.

Priya hold his hand n started walking.

Ram- next week I mean after party next day I will go for 4 days Singapore.

Priya- kiu?

Ram- Kuch problem hua hai waha par,toh Jaana hoga.

Priya- OK..Kab flight hai.

Ram- 11:30 subhe.

Priya- packing Karu.

Ram- no Mai kar lunga.

Priya- Mai kiu nahi kar Sakti.

Ram- bas nahi kar Sakti.

Priya- OK.

Ram- Tumhe Kuch problem nahi hai.

Priya- bilkul nahi.

Ram- OK.

Priya- kaha tak aaya song.

Ram- Abhi tak nahi socha hai.

Priya- 14 ko hi Valentine hota hai.

Ram- pata hai mujhe.


On the Valentine evening.

Priya's wardrobe almost missed up, nuts knocked the door.

Nuts- wohhh! What's these?

Priya- Shaam ko party ke liye Kya pehenu ye decided nahi kar paa Rahi Hun.

Nuts- saree pehenoge na.

Priya- Haan but konsa color, ye men's ka na bahot accha hota hai unnke paas koi option nahi hota hai lekin hum sab ke paas bahot saare option hai, saree, dress, one piece ya jeans, top, kurti.

Nuts- wait...Wait humare party ka theme hai.

Priya- Kya.

Nuts give a box to her she open it.

Priya- wow baby pink color with silver border saree, super hai, who designed.

Nuts- Neha bhabhi, sab ke liye clothes design kiye hai.

Priya- khud lekar aati toh accha lagta na.

Nuts- wo toh pra... n she stop in mid.

Priya- Kya?

Nuts- wo busy hai maa ke Saath party ki tyari kar Rahi hai.

Priya- hmmm baat acchi hai.

Nuts- waise itna sab Kuch kiu.

Priya- kiu! Pata nahi.

Nuts- aap na Bhai ke liye perfect hai, he deserves you.

Priya- mean!

Nuts- can I share something with you.

Priya- sure.

Nuts- aap naa Bhai se bahot jaada pyar karo, unnhone aapni life ki bahot si aisi chize khohi hai, wo bahot si aisi baatein hai Jo wo deserves karte hai sab se important hai pyar, he too much believe in love.

Priya- hmmm pata hai, bahot baar samjhya hai mujhe, koi tha aisa Jo...

Nuts- Haan Mai nahi baata Sakti promise hai na Bhai se, wo khud aap se share Kare toh accha.

Priya- Yaa waise men's ke liye Kya hai.

Nuts- only black.

Priya- not bad, waise aapke Bhai kab aane wale hai.

Nuts- ye toh bahot Baad swal hai, shayad party hall me aayenge, aap jaldi tyar ho Jaao humein nikalna hai.

Priya- itne jaldi.

Nuts- bhabhi it's almost 4:30 aur tyar hote-hote 5:30 aur waha pochne ke liye 1:30 hour so plz jaldi.

Priya- hum dono hi hai Yaa.

Nuts- ghar ke saare log toh wahi par hai, aap mai aur rishi, we trio late.

Priya- OK.


At party hall, all are there.

Neha irritated- oh god ram awaz ko thik karo.

Ram- tum piano thik nahi play kar Rahi ho.

Amar- wo thik play kar Rahi hai tu ghabra Raha hai.

Ram- Mai ghabrata nahi Hun.

Krish- Haan ram iss liye tu bhul jaata hai AUR ye Bich me kaha se aaya.

Ram- maa shurt lagi hai.

Krish- kisne lagai hai aur tu kab se ye shurt lagane laga.

Mala- wahi toh 10rs ki shurt nahi lagta aaj toh song ki laga ke aaya wo bhi 2 song combine karke gana hai.

Lax- kitne Saal ho gaye CLG chodke.

Ram- chote Papa CLG kaha se aaya ab.

Lax- CLG me hi aisi baatein karta tha tu.

Ram- CLG choda toh Kya hua waise Mai 2 song ki combine Karunga toh pakka jeet jaaunga.

Neha- mera toh notes tyar hai Baki aapki marji.

Vik- aap aapki biwi ke Saath dance karoge meri biwi waha piano play karegi not done.

Ram- piano sound record karta Hun.

Vik- Yaa that's better idea.


At home Priya got ready for party, wear baby pink with silver border saree with jhumkhas & minimal make up with Kohl.

Rishi from hall- bhabhi chalo late hoga.

Priya- Haan aa Rahi Hun n she wear a silver hill sandals n started walking.

Nuts saw her from downstairs- how much you take time.

Priya down the stairs n she will on last stair- aaahhh.

Rish- bhabhi n he run towards her nuts too.

Nuts- bhabhi you OK.

Priya wincing in pain- no my leg.

Rishi go to touch.

Priya in pain- no...No don't touch.

Nuts- Mai doc ko call Karti Hun.

Rishi- Haan, rishi gave his hand Priya stand on her fit, and seat on sofa.

Nuts- doc aa Rahe hai, aap dekh kar nahi chal sakte.

Priya- late ho Raha tha na.

Nuts- iss liye bhag kar aana tha aapko.

Priya- sorry.

Nuts- bhabhi aap bhi na, aapko pata hai aap ke liye surprise plan hai, lekin ab kaise hoga.

Priya- Kya surprise!

Nuts- waha par jaa kar pata chalta na aapko, Mai Bhai ko call Karti Hun.

Priya- nahi bilkul nahi, hum waha par jaayenge.

Rishi- arrye lekin.

Priya- Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe.

Same time doc came and check he and give a pain killer injection n said that she can't move her leg for 24 hour.

Nuts- now I m calling to Bhai.

Priya make very innocent face- plz nuts noo plz.

Rishi- lekin bhabhi hum kaise aapko waha par lekar jaa sakte hai.

Priya- do be pain killer Diya hai na aur waise bhi mera aur Neha jhagda khtam karna hai.

Rishi- ab tum hi Kuch karo nuts.

Nuts- aap nahi maanoge.

Priya nodded in no.

Nuts- OK chalo ab Kya kar sakte hai n she help her for walking.


Ram waiting for them at entrance n car came from main gate, he go near the car.

Ram- how much you all take time.

Nuts go to open her mouth, Priya gave quick answer- traffic ki wajah se late hua.

Ram- jaldi nahi nikal sakte the.

Priya- mujhe late hua, ab chalo.

Ram- Haan.

Rishi- bhabhi...

Priya assure them by eyes n go with ram.


Ram asked her- Kuch hua hai Kya Tumhe.

Priya- nahi toh aisa, kiu pucha.

Ram- you walk not proper, muscle pull thik hua hai na.

Priya cross her fingers n say yes to him.


At party hall everyone there, Priya seat on chair with family members.


Neha- some one is looking hot today Priya only smile.

Nuts go near to Krishna & told everything about priya's injury.

One announcement from stage for all couples.

Rishi meet to ram n told to him about Priya.

Ram- Kya phir bhi yaha par aayi hai.

Rishi- Haan Bhai, sunnte hi nahi.

Ram- Mai baat karta Hun.

And ram seat Infront of her.

Ram- hi sweet lady, you look gorgeous today will you dance with me.

Priya look here & there n say- mere pati bhi hai yaha par toh thode due aur sambhal ke baat karo.

Ram- toh Kya hua wo Kahi par toh busy hoga aaj ki raat mere Saath dance kar Sakti ho tum.

Priya- boy friend ho.

Ram- girl friend banan chahta Hun.

Priya- sochna hoga.

Ram- next Jo hoga issye toh tum impress ho jaaogi.

Priya smile- let see.

Ram got up from his chair go near the DJ say something to DJ and he put a lapel mic on his mouth side.

Ram- hello guys, aaj tak aap sabhi ne mujhe business deals, business meetings Yaa business party aur interview me dekha hoga, aaj ka ram pehli baar dekhne wale hai, mujhe Kisi ne kaha tha ye song usske favorite hai and most important that both song combine in one n sing it, Mai hun ek business Wala Banda mujhe ye task ke jaise laga, it's just like to me challenge, aur inn sab me mujhe Saath degi meri bhabhi Neha, Vik's wife, she will play the piano, thank you for these n Vik sorry for you.

Vik- chup kar.

Priya with smile look at ram, playing with her mangalsutra n cheer him with her lovely smile.

Ram- plz join with us, everybody on dance floor.

Ram go near her table & seat Infront of priya, they both look each other eyes n they forgot the present world, there soul dance with each other.

Music change for bade acche lagte hai, ram forward his hand towards her she hold his hand with tearfull eyes, last line of song.

Bade acche lagte hai...

Yeh dharti...

Yeh Raina...

Ram- aur...tum.

Priya also mimic- tum.

All hall clap for ram he thank to everyone and again look at Priya.

Ram- so pass.

Priya- no...

Ram- dance... wo bhi karna tha lekin injury, chal nahi Sakti phir bhi yaha par aayi.

Priya- boy friend se milna tha, toh aa gayi.

Ram- pati jaan le lega meri.

Priya- aisa kuch nahi hoga.

Ram- pass Hun na.

Priya- ghar par baata dungi pass ho ya nahi.

Ram- pati ke samne jawab.

Priya- Haan.

Same time Neha & Vik came between them.

Neha hug Priya from back- love you jaanu.

Priya hit on her arm- chod mujhe maar dalegi mujhe & Neha seat next to her.

Priya- super plying piano.

Neha- meri jaanu ke liye tha na.

Priya smile & said- chup kar, maa Papa kaha par hai.

Neha- sab waha par hai n she point to other side.

Vik- aap teeno ko aane ke liye late kiu hua.

Ram- accident karwa ke aayi hai.

Neha- kis ko thoka!

Ram- aapne pair (leg) ko.

Priya- aisa kuch nahi hai.

Neha- ek mint Kya hua hai.

Ram- ghar par gir gayi pair (leg) ko chot aayi hai.

Neha- girna-padna Abhi tak gaya nahi.

Priya- ab tu mat daant, maa Papa ko pata chalega toh wo bhi.

Neha- tu bhi na Priya.

Ram- accha tum sab party enjoy karo Mai Priya ko lekar nikalta Hun, Kal mujhe bhi nikalna hai, aur Priya ko bhi aram milega.

Neha- Haan.

Ram- chale.

Priya- haan, ram hold her n help her for walking.

In car.

Ram- song kaisa laga.

Priya- thik tha.

Ram- Kuch hua hai.

Priya- Kuch nahi.

They reached home, came in room, Priya seat on bed & said- ram will you dance with me.

Ram- aahh... he signal to her leg.

Priya- Kuch nahi hoga.

Ram forward his hand, Priya signal him, 1sec n she play the song of party which is he sing for her and she hold his hand.


Lag ja Gale ke phir ye hasin raat ho na ho..

Shayad phir iss janam mai mulaaqat ho na ho..

Lag ja Gale se...

Music started.

Priya- thank you for these, for make my wish full fill.


Hum ko Mili hain aaj, ye ghadiya nasib se..

Ji bhar ke dekh lijiye hum ko karib se...

Phir aap ke nasib Mai ye baat ho na ho...

Shayad phir iss janam mai mulaaqat ho na ho...

Lag ja Gale se...


Priya- these song is my favorite but bade acche is very close to me.


Hum Tum itne paas hai kitne dur hain Chand sitare

Sach poocho toh Mann ko jhoothe lagte hain yeh saare...


Hum Tum itne paas hai kitne dur hain Chand sitare

Sach poocho toh Mann ko jhoothe lagte hain yeh saare...


Magar sacche lagte hain

Yeh dharti, yeh nadiyaa, ye rainaa

Aur tum..

Bade acche lagte hain

Yeh dharti, yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur Tum..

Song over.

Ram- ab baitho.

Priya- no..

Ram- arrye pain hoga.

Priya hold his arm- bade acche song me Jo last line hai na wo mujhe pasand nahi hai.


Tum inn sab ko chod ke kaise Kal subha jaaoge...

Mere Saath innhe bhi toh tum yaad bahot aaoge.


Ram- bade acche lagte hain..

Yeh dharti. Yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa

Aur ..

Priya- aur... Tum..

Ram- miss karogi.

Priya- may be Haan.

Ram- jaldi aaunga, ab baitho, medicine lekar aata Hun.

Priya- boy friend you pass in test.

Ram- pakka soch liya hai na.

Priya- Haan.

Ram- iss liye office join karna hoga.

Priya- hmmm OK...


Continue soon.


Lag jaa Gale & BALH combine song-


Edited by Arpipatil - 8 years ago
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Take a bow arpita n thank u for double update maaza aa gaya n love the way raya care for each other specially ram hayeee aisa lag raha hai ki sab samne hoo raha hai loved it n also raya dance hayeee on song balh wahh n last part Raya dancing in room on song combination wahhh superb hai n i looovvveee this story very much arpita
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Beautiful, superb & romantic update.
Thanks for pm.
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awesome and lovely update...
thanx for double update..
slept after reading and morning with another lovely update thank u so much for lovely morning...
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful, superb & romantic update.
Thanks for pm.
Waiting eagerly and continue soon.
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superb duper hit n sweet update. kya bolu yaar. its really very very cute. I strongly believe that Priya will fall in love with ram first. I loved this entire party sequence and the songs also. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Wow nice Arpita.. double updates
read last 3 parts in gooo
nice progress in d story..
all parts r superb awesome...
thnx for d pm...
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omg omg omg...arpita sis...u nailed it!!! :-D haeee...raya...and the two songs combination... wow...simply magical...haeee...and she accepted his proposal... :-* wow...sweet... next soon plz
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Hi dear..
Nice two back to back updates...
Good flow of events, slowly Raya moving into the zone of love...

Part 9..
krishnaji and priya convo was nice..then ram lost in thoughts of priya,nutz clicking it and sending to priya..lol
Then the confront of neha with priya...so finally we and neha know on which thing priya is anger about..
Or which hurts her most..so its her care for Ram and seeing Ram disturbed and punishing himself, she was mad at heha for doing this to Ram and not trusting her friendship too.. correct on her part..sad she had to show anger on her loved beha like this..but neha asked for it..
Then neha trying to solve ussue, informing ram ,ram coming in and all solving good..

Part10...
this was sweet ,too sweet moments of Raya... first the running behind,she hurting herself,lifting and their talks.,then finally beside being hurt she went to venue for his sake and his surprise for her..too good..then the dance,moment and their room,wow...finally she accepting his proposal and saying she will miss him..aww...


Waiting to see and read what this trip gap brings in Raya's life...

Thanks for the pm.. :)

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Dhire dhire RaYa close aa rahe hai.
They are begeb to care for each other and became an internal part of each other families and siblings.

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