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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear..
Again a nice update with Raya scenes..
Imagining their room conversation and kitchen cooking together..should had been cute...ram did controlled priya anger... :)
So finally neha did reached priya and came to know priya married ram too..neha talked to ram too..
But priya's anger could be understood..Neh-Vik should have handled it better without hurting the family...they are at fault..
So precap NehVik coming and priya doing grahapravesh..
May be thats what ram ask in return favour of winning in halwa task..
Waiting to know neh-vik side of story and reaction of all when they see Neh-Vik together..

Thanks for the pm... :)
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Part 8



Ram in mind- gajar ka halwa best tha, sab KO pasand aaya lekin Priya KO nahi, she didn't comment, ram came in her room n he found a one letter, on his name, he open it n read.

"Sorry ye baat niche sab ke saamne bolni chahiye thi lekin bolti toh problem hoti but it's awesome, I like it, phir se sorry, saamne bolti lekin socha kuch Purana idea use karte hai- Priya"

Ram only smile n he put that letter in his bag.

Next day they told there family about vik's msg, they all agree for it.

On the day of vik came, Priya in changing room, drape a Saree, ram asked her.

Ram- Priya.

Priya- haan.

Ram- are you sure, you OK with it.

Priya- ram iss baare me hum kal raat bhi baat kar rahe the.

Ram- nahi mujhe kuch-kuch ho raha hai pet me.

Priya- iss liye bol rahi thi kuch halka khaao lekin tum nahi sunte.

Ram- iss wajah se nahi.

Priya- phir kiu itna tension le rahe ho.

Ram- pata nahi tension ho raha hai.

Priya came out from changing room- kaise dikh rahi hun mai.

Ram look at her, she wearing green saree- nice always.

Priya- tum tension le rahe ho iss liye ho raha hai.

Ram- Priya aisi baat nahi hai.

Priya seat beside him- mere baare me sochna band Karo, I m strong like me, not like u, Jo darr jaau.

Ram- no not like, I mean jab tum vik ki happy life dekhogi toh...

Priya directly ask him- I love him?

Ram- no.

Priya- tumhare samne kal jaakar neha aayegi usske pati ke saath toh.

Ram- same question I ask you, I love her.

Priya- no na phir kiu tension le rahe ho.

Ram- but hum dono ki life toh unn dono ki tarah nahi hogi toh...

Priya- you compare our life with them.

Ram- not...

Priya- don't lie with me.

Ram nodded in yes- haan.

Priya take his hand in her- hum dono ki shaadi arrange hui hai, we don't know each other.

Ram- arrange kaha Hui?

Priya- arrange Hui hai, yahi samjhkar hum rishta aage badhane ki baat ki thi na.

Ram- haan.

Priya- so don't forget that and live our life, kya jaane humara rishta aage jaa kar kuch...

Ram- kuch...

Priya- pata nahi, but I believe on our relation, so don't compare our relation with anyone, we both are unique, family ke liye shaadi KO haan kaha tha, our thinking are same, duniya ke liye aur ekdusre ke liye bahot alag hai lekin family ke bahot important, right.

Ram- yaa, sorry.

Priya- it's OK now go & change.

Ram- chodo mujhe.

Priya- kya?

Ram- mera haath chodo.

Priya leave his hand- sorry.

Ram- dosti me chalta hai.

Priya- dosti!

Ram- haan aur haan your eyes kohl little spread, usse thik Karo.

Priya- itna dhyan de rahe ho pyar karne ka irada hai.

Ram go to say something but Krishna call her n she went.

Ram to himself- shayad! Pyar ho bhi gaya toh pata na chale aisi ho tum, thank god for these mismatch n he went to change.

Priya came downstairs, mala saw her n asked- priya kuch bhuli toh nahi.

Priya not sure she asked- kya choti Maa.

Mala- aisi hi upar jaao and check your self.

Priya- choti Maa baat kya hai ye toh baatao.

Mala- upar jaao aur check Karo.

Priya- OK n she again upstairs in confusion.

Krish asked to mala- kya hua, upar kiu bheja phir se.

Mala- sindur lagna bhul gayi aur kuch nahi.

Krishna only smile.

Prita entered in room, thinking what she forgot

Ram set his hair n look her from mirror n asked- kya hua, kuch hua hai.

Priya- choti Maa bol rahi hai mai kuch bhul gayi hun lekin kya bhul gayi ye nahi bataya.

Ram check out her- ohhh ye baat hai, choti Maa was right you forget.

Priya- what?

Ram- came here, she go near him and stand next to him.

Priya- kya?

Ram- close your eyes.

Priya- kajal thik hai mera.

Ram in irritated tone- arrye.

Priya- OK don't irritated yourself n she close her eyes.

Ram put a pinch of sindur in her maang- now its right.

Priya- oh my god how can I forgot, tumhari wajah se hua ye sab.

Ram- meri wajah se, so kaise.

Priya- tumne mujhe baaton me laga diya.

Ram- hwww kitna jhoot bolti hai.

Priya- mai kabhi jhoot nahi bolti n started a way to hall, ram follow her.

Ram- ha ha ha joke of the day, tumhari help ki, iss liye ek chota sa thanks to bolti.

Priya- thanks.

Ram- most welcome.

Rishi saw it and ask- kya chal raha hai aap dono ke bich.

Ram- kuch nahi, hum dono ki understanding.

Priya's family entered.

Krish- priya.

Priya- haan Maa.

Krish- your family.

Amar & laxman warm welcome them, ram take a blessing from them.

Shipra & savitri look priya n say.

Ship- green saree.

Sav- tujhe toh green pasand nahi hai.

Priya dainal- who say, I like all colors.

Priya in mind- ye Maa aur aunty bhi na ye color ram KO pasand hai iss liye, nuts ne khud kaha, he likes it, aur kal raat se ram ka mood thik nahi hai iss liye ye sab kar rahi hun aur Maa, aunty sab bigad ne me tule hai.

Ram's phn ring n listen all n say to all- vik 5mins me aa raha hai.

Priya- mai gruhaprvesh ki tyari karti hun.

Mala- tu ye sab itne...

Priya- choti Maa past is past aur waise bhi meri devrani aa rahi hai, I m happy, ram knows that.

Ram- yaa aap sab itna tension mat lo.



Vikram stand with a girl, who hide her face in ghunghat, rishi saw these and little shout- Maa papa vik bhai aa Gaye n all family look at door.

Priya look all faces n said- arrye vik tum aagye wahi par ruko mai abhi aati hun.

Vik little scared about her statement- sooo..sorry mujhe ye baat pehle baatani chahiye thi, but priya went to kitchen.

Ram- relax bro, she is not mad on you, wo gruhaprvesh ki tyri karne gayi hai.

Vik- gruhaprvesh.

Mala- haan tune thik sunna in rude.

Vik- Maa plz i m..

Laxman cut him middle- sharm nahi aati muh utha ke baat kar rahe ho, maffi maang rahe ho, tumne itni badi galti ki hi kaise, pyar karte ho ye baat tum pehle baata dete toh aaj ye din nahi dekha hota.

Vik- sorry papa.

Ram- chote papa relax he is with his wife, hum baad me ye sab..plz.

Mala- tumhari wajah se bigda hai ye ladka.

Ram- choti Maa plz.

No one say a any word, priya did a gruhaprvesh of them.

Nuts- vik bhai ghunghat toh uthane bolo kon hai aapki biwi ye toh dekhne do.

Vik- haan n he little scared about it.

Priya murmuring to ram- ram bolo na tum.

Ram look at priya he also same- kaisi aurot ho tum, kuch din pehle tumhara ye pati hone wala tha aur ab ye kis aur ka pati hai aur tumhe kuch bhi feel nahi ho raha hai.

Priya- ram are you sure, you normal.

Ram- what do you mean.

Priya- I mean, subhe hi bola maine, in rude.

Ram cut in middle- OK meri amma.

Ram to vik- bhai priya sahi bol rahi hai ab toh bata tera pyar kon hai aur jis ke liye tum shaadi wale din.

Vik- so actually muj...mujhe darr lag raha hai.

Priya- darr kis baat ka hai vik, see hum dono dur dur tak anjaan the, toh ye mat socho ke tumne USS din mandap...so hum dono ka relation bhabhi dever ka hai, issye tumhara guilt kum hoga, hum sab ye sochte hai ke mujhe reject kiya tha.

Mala- dekh kitni samjhdaar hai, tu bhag gaya shaadi se lekin phir bhi tere se bhabhi dever ka rishta nibhana chahti hai.

Vik- so sorry, meri galti thi, mujhe sab batana chahiye tha lekin sab itna achnak hua ke baatne ka muka hi nahi mila,iss liye mujhe aur issey aisa kadam uthna pada.

Priya- its OK vik, meri family bhi naraz nahi hai, bolo na papa.

Sud- haan beta.

Rish- bhai plzz.

Vik to ram- bhai agar aage jaa kar mujhse koi galti Hui ya ho jaaye to plz maff kar Dena.

Ram- chup kar chota bhai hai tu mera sab se pehle give me a dost wala hug.

Vik go to hug ram.

Krishna to priya- priya tum aao ye bhai milap hota rahega inn dono ka tum ghunghat uthao.

Priya- ji Maa.

Vik in hurry- no.

Amar- chup kar ke khada reh waha par.

Vik- par bade papa.

Amar- chup kar nahi toh thappad khayega.

Vik closed his eyes n started murmuring- plz god help, plz help her.

Ram- oye kya bole jaa raha hai.

Priya bend towards for side a ghunghat n she look that lady hands shivering.

Priya In low voice- don't worry mai naraz nahi hun that was past n she side her ghunghat and priya's smile vanished.

Vik open his one eye n say- ab pata nahi kya hoga.

Ram- kya matlab.

Priya side from her way everyone look at her, everyone shocked to see non other than neha, who love vik & vik love neha n they both run away from there marriage coz they love each other, ram look at neha, his smile also vanished he look at priya n her tearful eyes, she hide it from all n went to there bed room.

Amar- priya beta...

Sud- neha pehle kiu nahi bataya.

Ajay- bahot Galt kiya neha tumne.

Ship- priya KO dekho...

Ram- aunty plz relax I can... Relax n he also went.

Every body want a answer from neha vik, they both said sorry to all n told everything about there situation.

In bed room, priya change her self in dress & seat on floor in changing room, ram came in bedroom he found no where to her he go in changing room n he also seat beside her.

Ram- kuch bolna chahti ho toh bol sakti ho.

Priya- when I was in sinor kg met to neha, she came from pune, we both are same age, but she didn't talked to anyone, her father was solider after he leave the job they came in Mumbai, my father his collage frnd they was promise to each other when they leave there long job they will start there business, neha KO pune se Mumbai leakar aaye iss liye wo kisi se baat nahi karti thi, after that her admission In my school, mujhe se bhi baat nahi karti thi, fir bhi meri frnd thi, best frnd, sister kab bani pata nahi, kuch 2months baad she started talking with me, bday tha school me kisi ka yaad nahi, mujhe chocolate mila tha aur neha KO nahi kiu ki saare chocolate khatm huye the, lunch break me she was went for hand wash, I was open her tiffin, she came open her Tiffin, you want believe she came to me n said "50-50 kare" and she smile.

Ram- nice tum bahot jaada bolti thi.

Priya- neha life me aane ke baad jaada bolna mana hai ka board KO vote kiya hai.

Ram- toh ab...

Priya- she was broke my trust, mai kuch karti, wo vik se pyar karti hai ye baat mujhe subhe bolti toh aaj ye din nahi hota, shayad kuch alag hota.

Ram- Jo mai soch raha tha, ya I don't know ye nahi sochta, vik bhi mujhe ek baar bolta ke wo neha se pyar karta hai toh bhi mai ye shaadi rok deta, sab galat hua hai, hum soch rahe the ye shaadi nibhayenge, ab toh bahot jaada complicated hoga jab bhi hum neha aur vik KO dekhege tab mujhe meri galti aur tumhe...

Priya- phir bhi hum humra rishta nibhayenge.

Ram- lekin neha vik...

Priya- humein agar shaadi wale din pata chalta toh bhi humari shaadi gharwale karwa dete baat humare shaadi ki nahi hai ram, aur tum baar-baar humari shaadi bich me mat laao.

Ram- toh kya karu yaar.

Priya- gussa aa raha hai.

Ram- bahot jaada... Vik par nahi khud par.

Priya- yahi par raho mai kuch lekar aati hun.

Ram- kya lekar aa rahi ho.

Priya- yahi par baitho n she went to downstairs.

Priya found everybody seating in hall.

Krish- priya.

Priya- haan Maa.

Krish- ek baar tum dono inn dono ki baat sunn lo.

Priya- Maa can I request you.

Krish- bolo.

Priya- aapko hi nahi sab KO ek request karti hun mere aur neha ke bich me koi naa pade, aur koi bhi neha ki konsi bhi baat bolne naa aaye khamkha mera USS insan par niklega, plz I request you all and vik I m not mad on u and she smile, & went to kitchen, open a fridge, take one green tiffin box with 2 mug coffee with out sugar n again upstairs.

Mala to all- priya green chilli ka dabba kiu lekar jaa rahi hai.

Sud & ship- kya? Wo mirch ka dabba tha.

Krish- haan kiu?

Priya reach the room n close the door little n came into changing room.

Priya- pakdo n she gave green chilli tiffin to him.

Ram open it- nahi...ye mai nahi karne dunga tumhe.

Priya- kya.

Ram- tum mirch nahi khaa sakti.

Priya- tum aapna gussa naa vik pe nikal sakte ho naa neha pe, waise hi mera hai.

Ram- haan.

Priya- issye khaane se pata chalta hai humein kitna gussa hai.

Ram- what do you mean?

Priya- if we are mad on our self toh mirch humein tikhi nahi lagti.

Ram- sacchi me.

Priya- haan try it, she 100% convenience him.

Ram- agar tikhi lagi toh hum gussa nahi hai.

Priya- haan.

Ram- mai bahot jaada gussa hun.

Priya- mai bhi, toh chalo khaate hai and they both started eating chillies.

Ram after 5 chilli his eyes filled with tears- bahot tikha lag raha hai ab.

Priya's eyes also filled in tears she said- mujhe nahi tikha lag raha hai abhi tak, drink your coffee.

Ram- tumhari aankon se aasu aa rahe hai priya, bahot hua.

Priya- nahi... Mujhe abhi tikha nahi lag raha hai and she eat her 9th.

Ram little shout on her- priya bas Rona aa raha hai roo but don't hurt yourself n he pull the tiffin from her hand.

Priya- ram I want..

Ram- no n ram give her side hug, she started crying she tight her hands grip to his waist.

After 15mins.

Ram- chup Karo priya, bas bahot hua Rona, chup Karo.

Priya- nahi.

Ram- kya Rona nahi band karogi.

Priya- nahi mai neha se baat hi nahi karungi.

Ram- mat Karo baat, lekin Rona band Karo yaar mera shirt gila ho raha hai.

Priya- what n she realize that ram give her a side hug n she lose her hand grip n say sorry.

Ram- its OK, waise sach me gussa jaata hai aur samjh bhi aata hai gussa nahi lekin mirch jaada tikhi hoti hai.

Priya- hmmm, mai gusse ke liye nahi khaati mirch, roone ke liye khaati hun, mujhe roona aata hai lekin accha nahi lagta hai.

Ram- itni si baat ke liye mirch.

Priya- ye baat ghar me kisi KO bhi nahi pata hai, unn sab KO lagta hai mujhe gussa aata hai aur wo gussa khud par nikalne ke liye mai ye sab karti hun aisa lagta hai.

Ram- ye baat mirch wali tumhare papa ne mujhe baatai thi, lekin aisa kiu karti ho ye baat tumne mujhe baatai.

Priya- coffee kaisi lagi tikha khaane ke baad.

Ram- acchi thi, waise tum mujhse aage jaa kar pyar karogi.

Priya look at him a sweet eyelock between them.

Ram broke the eye lock- kuch toh bolo.

Priya- flirt kar rahe ho.

Ram- aanjani biwi ke saath flirt kar raha hun.

Priya- sochna padega.

Ram- arrye iss me sochne wali konsi baat hai.

Priya- pyar kiya nahi jaata ho jaata hai.

Ram- OK toh kuch to karte hai.

Priya- kya karte hai.

Ram- tumhe love marriage karni thi na.

Priya- haan ab toh arrange ho gayi.

Ram- girlfrnd, boyfrnd ki tarah jeete hai, bahar gf-bf, ghar me pati patni.

Priya- ha ha ha very funny, bahot mazak hua ram mai niche jaati hun Maa papa uncle aunty se baat karne.

Ram- arrye yaar karte hai na affair.

Priya- chup Karo n she came to downstairs, ram follow her.

Ram- plz priya.

Priya- ram bahot jaada pareshan karungi.

Everybody saw them n there smile faces.

Priya- Maa aj khaana mai banaungi plzz.

Mala- lekin rasam.

Priya- rasoi ki rasam plz.

Krish- thik hai aj kitchen tera.

Priya- love u Maa,choti Maa & she went to kitchen.

Sudh to ram- kya kiya tumne.

Ram- don't worry uncle I can handle her very well, aap sabhi tension mat lo n neha welcome to our family.

Neha- lekin ram n she stop in mid.

Ram- called me ram its OK, Jo kuch hua usse bhul jaao aur aage badho.

Neha- priya...

Ram- gussa hai... I'll do my best relax, Maa papa priya aur mai 4 din baad office join Karna chahte hai, priya naa bolegi aap KO lekin plz aap 4 usse force Karo plz it's request.

Amar- tu itne jaldi office.

Ship- aur priya ne bhi leave li hai, priya ne kuch kaha.

Ram- wo nahi kehti kuch bhi iss liye mai bol raha hun, hum dono office join karte hai.

Amar- OK de Di permission thik hai, hai na Krishna.

Krish- haan.

Ram to ship & sud- uncle aunty.

They also yes to him.

Priya came with tea for all n green tea for nuts.

Amar- priya tum office kab se jaana start kar rahi ho.

Priya- next month, she little confused.

Amar- tum chaho toh 4 din baad join kar sakti ho.

Priya look at ram his smiling face n with naughty expression n she give answer to amar- mujhe koi jaldi nahi papa, main nahi join karne wali join ghar me rehna bhi toh accha hota hai n she look ram's sad face n give him a wining smile.

Amar- thik beta jaisa tum chaho.

Priya smile- thank you papa.

Neha read her expression n call her- priya.

Priya only look at her n then move to nuts- nuts chalo na.

Nuts- where?

Priya- bas chalo.

In kitchen:

Nuts- aap mujhe kam nahi karne de rahi ho sab kuch aap kar rahe ho, phir bulya kiu.

Priya- aise hi!

Nuts- waise aap thik nahi kar rahe ho.

Priya- kya?

Nuts- neha bhabhi ke saath, maff kar do na.

Priya- promise Karo, kisi KO kuch nahi bologi.

Nuts- kya nahi bolungi.

Priya- promise to Karo.

Nuts- OK promise hum dono ke bich wala.

Priya- OK, mai neha se naraz nahi hun lekin gussa jarur hun, Jo kiya galat tha dost se jaada hai mere liye, bahot tension tha kon ladka hai, kya karta hai, kahi galat ladke ke saath toh nahi, agar ussne neha KO hurt kiya toh, inn sab se bada tension, kahi wo ladka fraud nikla toh, you can't believe how much I scared.

Nuts- toh ab aap badla le rahi hai.

Priya- Sikh de rahi hun, aise naa karne ki.

Nuts- you & bhai great.

Priya- ram kaha se bich me.

Nuts- aap dono na bahot same to like rab milaye Jodi.

Priya smile- ye baat Maine doo baar boli lekin tera bhai manta hi nahi hai.

Nuts- rab milaye Jodi.

Priya- haan, they both started laughing.

After dinner, sharma's went, priya came in room, ram reading a book, she also doing her work, a knock on door, priya busy in her work, ram look at her, n saw vik neha enter in room.

Ram- tum dono aao aandar.

Priya also look at them and again busy in work.

Ram- is everything OK? Chote papa kuch.

Vik- nahi wo neha KO..

Ram- bolo neha kya baat hai.

Neha- wo mujhe... Tumse maffi...

Ram- aahhh.. Uss din hi sab kuch kaha tha so don't say again.

Neha- priya..

Priya didn't look at her.

Neha- priya yaar baat toh suun na yaar kiu itna bhav khaa rahi hai, ab baat ego par mat le.

Priya pick her mobile call to her assistance- tumhe kitni baar kaha hai mujhe faltu ke mails mat kiya Karo Jo mails aur Jo documents scan karke bhejne bole the wo kiu nahi aaye abhi tak, kal subhe tak mujhe saare ke saare mail Karna, I don't want any excuse! Got it! In rude tone.

Neha- mera gussa dusron par nikalne ki jarurat nahi hai there samne hun mujh par gussa nikal.

Priya- gussa aapno par nikala jaata hai naa ke bahar walon par, aur uss din hi sab tumne khatam kar diya.

Neha- priya maine kuch khatam nahi kiya hai, subhe tumhe baataya tha iss baare me.

Priya- lekin shaadi shaam KO thi, tab tak mai kuch kar deti aur wo ladka vik hai ye baat tu mujhe subhe bhi bol sakti thi, mai sab thik kar deti.

Neha- kuch nahi kar paati, ghar wale nahi maante iss sab ke liye, tum toh papa ke jaanti ho naa.

Priya- tumhre Maa papa mere bhi koi lagte hai aur mai unn dono KO samjati toh aaj Jo tune hum dono ke bich deewar khaadi ki hai wo nahi hoti, mujhe nahi baat karni hai tujhse, plz go n she go towards balcony.

Neha- ram tum toh..

Ram- neha, vik priya KO thoda time do, inn sab se thoda, khas karke neha tum, priya dikhati nahi hai lekin bahot tension liya tha, tumhare liye for everything so.. Plz give her time I m sure she will forgive you.

Vik- aur inn sab me mai kuch..

Ram- nahi mai toh inn dono ke bich me nahi aane wala tu bhi mat aa bade bhai ka suggestion hai.

Vik- OK done.

Neha- how rude you both, sab sort Karna hai aur aap dono mujhe saath nahi de rahe ho, vik tum bhi.

Ram- aage jaa kar tum dono ek ho jaaoge aur hum dono paraye, right vik.

Vik- yes you right.

Neha- OK, mai dekhti hun priya kitne din tak mujhse baat nahi karti.

Neha to priya- good night jaanu.

Priya slap her forehead and small smile unknown to all.

After they both go.

Ram came behind her- toh kya socha hai.

Priya- kis baare me.

Ram- wahi gf-bf.

Priya- nahi wo baad me dekhte hai, mere office ka bich me kaha se aaya aur Maine kab kaha mujhe office join Karna hai.

Ram- Maine iss liye kaha ke hum dono bahar nikale ghar se, bahr jaa kar gf-bf baankar rahe.

Priya- tumhe nahi lagta hai tum jaada flirt karte ho.

Ram- yes I m! With my future gf wife.

Priya- tum pagal ho..

Ram- haan pata hai mujhe, toh bolo na kya socha hai.

Priya- chup Karo aur pyar ho jaata hai, aur aise bolne se nahi hota hai.

Ram- see I m doing all these coz I had never ever a gf in Clg days, seriously Clg then office, ye kam tha mera then go to Oxford for other studies & then came here and busy in office.

Priya- toh tumhe aisa lagta hai ke mere bahot saare bf honge.

Ram started pulling her leg- shayad, coz tum itni superb dikhti ho toh honge kuch 10-12.

Priya- ek bhi bf nahi tha mera 10-12 toh dur ki baat hai, log lunch break me lunch karte hai aur mai lappy par kuch na kuch karti rehti thi.

Ram- you have no bf, shocking baat hai.

Priya- kiu?

Ram- u always use kohl in eyes.

Priya- haan kiu?

Ram- every girl J' on you.

Priya- why?

Ram- you want believe how much you look gorgeous.

Priya only look at him.

Ram- what? Aise dekho mat yaar pyar karne lag jaaogi.

Priya- shut up ram, mazak mat Karo.

Ram- no I m not joking you look gorgeous, if we met on Clg days toh you was gf.

Priya smile- gf naa sahi patni toh hun.

Ram- office naa sahi hum ghumne toh jaa sakte hai na.

Priya- which song is your favorite?

Ram- what?

Priya- tumhara favorite song.

Ram- lag jaa gale.

Priya- mine too & bade acche lagte hai.

Ram- hum dono kuch alag baat kar rahe the.

Priya- Clg days ki meri sab se favorite wish, inn doo song KO combine kar ke mujhe mere bf ke saath dance Karna tha.

Ram- nice wish.

Priya- what nice? You wanted would be mine boyfriend na toh make my wish full fill, toh hi haan hoga.

Ram- how can I.

Priya- toh raho pati banke, mai chali soone, good night...



Continue soon.
No PM sorry
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Superb update... u r a fabwriter. ... pls continue soon... looking forward to see gf -bf relation and hopefully some confusion among family members regarding their affair
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Superb update.
Please Don't allow neha and Vikram to get away this easily.
Eagerly waiting for Bf and Gf scenes.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Good one
Now as Neha Vik are return that give surely a surprise to see them together but as usual the anger of RaYa hadn't come out on them
It will be good to see how family member will react to this new gf-bf issue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
awesome update...
Priya kud kayi aur ram Ko bi khiladiya mirchi... superb...
eagerly waiting for gf-bf relationship...
thanx for long and beautiful update...
Plz contd sooonnn...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
very cute and lovely update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
nice update. I m loving rayas convo. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Awww very beautiful n rocking update hai aur kya bolu neha n vik ne hi ek dusre se shaadi ki hai wahh n mirchi wala scene is superb mast hai n last mein raya ka hug awww n bf n gf wala idea superb hai n want raya to hv affair with eachother maaza aayega
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Superrbbb update arpita!! U r a great writer!! Eagerly waiting for their gf-bf track! Plz continue soon!! Thanks for pm!!!

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