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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
very nice... waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This story is good and it actually reminds me of my own stories 😆
after reading yours, I wanna write RomCom again 😆
its fun writing raya nok jhok ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear..
Nice update..
Good one with raya throughout..
Their conversation in car, shows they are slowing knowing each other and feeling comfortable with each other..nice.. ram talked while driving just to make her comfortable which usually he doesnt, and priya knows it too.. aww..sweet ram..
I love their nokjhok and car scene..
And the preview was sweeter,priya going to make gajar ka halwa for ram..
Waiting to reading it..

Thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7


Ram started laughing,priya give him angry look, he look at her n control his laugh but he can't control him long.

Priya- Maa mujhe coffee milegi.

Ship- abhi coffee time dekha hai.

Priya- Maa plz.

Ship- lunch ke liye naa bola toh yaad rakhna.

Priya- naa nahi bolugi Plz n she turn to Ajay n say- uncle aap inn dono KO khaana nahi Diya, she asked about rabbits.

Ajay- diya tha.

Priya- phir inn dono ka weight lose kaise hua.

Ajay- priya dono ke dono subhe se 10 baar khaate hai aur tu bol rahi hai mai khaana nahi deta, tujhe jaakar sirf ek din hua hai, shayad Teri yaad me hua hoga.

Priya to her rabbits- you miss me kuchi-pooo.

Ram look at her very nicely n smile from heart.

Priya- papa mai ghar jaate samy mera laptop aur kuch office ke yaha par papers hai aur important chize hai wo lekar jaaungi.

Sudh- priya tune office se ek mahine ki off li hai aur tere saare work loads Teri wo assistance hai wo sambhal rahi hai.

Priya- papa phir bhi ek important software par kam chal raha hai agar wo kam karga toh may be bahot kuch accha hoga.

Sud- galti ki tujhe engineer baanya tujhe toh kya banan tha.

Priya feed a carrots to her rabbit's- animal doctor.

Ram- animal doctor!

Sud- haan wo bhala ho entrance exam ka, number kum aaye iss liye engineer ka bhoot swar hua.

Priya- kya papa aap bhi, ram ke samne.

Sud- he is ur husband, n he have right on ur things.

Priya- Ajay uncle neha thik hai don't worry.

Ajay- tune toh baat bhi nahi ki.

Priya in proud tone- software chachu software!

Sud- kya matlab hai tera.

Priya- papa mai aapki beti hun aur upar se engg, phn har 7 ring ke baad transfer hota hai mere paas kal bhi aisa hua.

Sud- lekin.

Priya- I will not talk with neha never, call aane wala hai Ajay chachu thik 12:45 tak, aap uthana mai nahi uthane wali.

Sud- lekin wo tere liye aane wala hai.

Priya little rude- aane wala tha papa ab nahi aayega, mai jaa rahi hun room me kuch kam hai, ram tum n stop in mid and again asked.

Priya- aap aa rahe ho mere saath.

Rqm look at her in confusion.

Priya read it n say- aap se keh rahi hun.


Ram entered in her room, and his jaw drop saw her room, one corner is full of her degree's & achivments awards, one corner only full of pictures of her, with neha & family, a small garden in balcony, high technology computer one side, and small book shelf.

Ram- amazing!

Priya listen it- what!

Ram- ur bedroom.

Priya- hmm.

Ram- u decorate.

Priya- naa neha doing all.

Ram- nice.

Priya- baitho.

Ram- nahi, and he looks the degree & awards side.

Priya- school g college ki hai.

Ram- super you are gold medalist.

Priya- yaa.

Ram- tumne shecshpir padhi hai.

Priya- bahot pehle.

Ram look at her dressing table there open speces he asked- you have speces.

Priya- yaa only for use when I am working on PC.

Ram- hmmm.

Same time phn ring, she look at the watch and say- neha ka call hai.

Ram- pick up.

Priya- no.

Ram- ok as u wish, n he saw one pic of her with her pets, he turn to see her but she is busy in her laptop, n he click a pic of that pic.

Ram- how may days you take a leave from office.

Priya- almost one month.

Ram- you can cancel ur leaves if u have important work.

Priya- no its ok ram.

Ram- waise wo tum niche mujhe aap' kiu bol rahi thi.

Priya- Maa told me that's why.

Ram- kiu?

Priya- she told me, pati ka naam lene se pati ki umar kum hoti hai.

Ram- you believe such things.

Priya- not 95% only 5%.

Ram- why only 5%.

Priya- don't know.

Ram- kya mai book padh sakta hun.

Priya- haan lekin.

Ram- lekin.

Priya- jaha se loge waha par thik se rakho.

Ram only nodded.

Sudhir on call- neha priya ne humari baat sunnli.

Neha- aise kaise.

Sudh- engg jaga utha aur kuch nahi.

Neha- thik hai waise bhi mai jaldi ghar aane wali aapne pati ke saath.

Sud- kon hai tera pati.

Neha- aane wali hun tab dekh Lena.

Sud- Indian hi hai na.

Neha- of course chachu.

Sud- kab aa rahi hai.

Neha- jaldi aaungi, ek kam toh Karo phn transfer Karo.

Sud- karta hun lekin aage ke zimedaari Teri n he transfer the call.


Priya seat on bed doing work n side table phn ring she pick up the call n without any listen.

Priya- Maa hum kuch half hour me aate hai, ram I mean aapke jamai ram wo book padh rahe hai aur mai mera kam.

Neha- haawww Teri shaadi ram se hui, kaise Hui.

Priya in angry tone- who are you?

Neha- mujhe nahi pehchana, mai neha Teri frnd.

Priya on the speaker.

Neha continue her talking, priya didn't say any word.

Neha- waise meri taraf se ram KO sorry bolo, ye baat mujhe pehle hi batani chahiye thi, but mai usse pyar karti hun ye baat mujhe bahot late pata chali, tujhe pata hai na mai tube light hun koi bhi baat mujhe late samjhti hai iss liye architect hun.

Priya take her headphones n put in ears & started song in full of volume.

Ram look n go near the bed n seat.

Ram- hi neha, it's me ram, priya didn't listen you, u know her better then anyone, it's ok Jo tumne kiya wo thik tha, I can understand, but ur frnd is not so came soon n sort out ur relation, bahot baar samjhya lekin tube light tum nahi tumhari frnd hai Jo kab on hogi pata nahi, so be prepared & came soon bye tc.

Neha- thanks ram for understanding bye tc n end the call.

Ram look at priya n take out her ear phns.

Priya in rude mood- what the..

Ram- chup...kuch bhi bola toh I will...I will.

Priya- what you will.

Ram- mujhse rude baatein mat Karo.

Priya- ooohhh hello kya karne wale ho tum.

Ram- pure 7 jaanam tak tu mere saath rahe aisa bhagwan KO bolunga wo bhi karwachauth ke din.

Priya- 7 jaanam! Rahe sakhoge mere saath.

Ram- iss jaanam toh try kar raha hun aage ke 6 jaanam tum try Karna.

Priya smile- gussa shant karne me expert ho.

Ram- thodi der pehle hi kaha tha tumne, mera gussa kum karne ki koshish Karo tum, wahi kar raha hun.

Priya smile.

Ram- chalo ab bahot hua, bhukh lagi hai, aur tumhare haath ka kuch khilaogi.

Priya- kya khaaoge, I mean diet yaa.

Ram- normal kuch bhi.

Priya- ok done & she came to kitchen n asked.

Priya- chachi gajar hai.

Sav- haan hai.

Priya- aur mujhe dry fruits chahiye.

Shipra give her n asked- kiu chahiye.

Priya- gajar ka halwa Karna hai.

Sav- kiu itna sab kuch toh banaya hai.

Priya- haan lekin ram ke liye baana rahi hun.

Ship- tu ye sab dil se toh kar rahi hai na ki hum sab KO accha lage iss liye, ye sab aur tum dono ki shaadi koi normal shaadi nahi hai priya.

Priya- Maa, chachi hum dono ye shaadi normal karne ki koshish kar rahe hai, time lag raha hai but end of the day result accha rehta hai, aur waise bhi aaj shaadi KO sirf 3 din huye hai toh bas normal ho yahi chahti hun.

Ship- tujhe koi bhi - koi bhi problem ho toh mujhse aakar bol sakti ho.

Sav- aur jaada gussa mat kar health ke liye accha nahi hota hai.

Priya- aap dono kitne instructions dete ho.

Sav- tujhe ek baat bolni hai.

Priya- bolo.

Sav- neha agar samne aajaye tere toh tu jor se ek laga Dena, akal thikkane aa jaaye.

Priya- frnd kis ki hai.

Sav- Teri.

Priya- phir mai sochungi kya Karna hai aap tension mat lo aur gussa bhi mat hona.

Ship- dekha maine kaha tha bolo mat lekin nahi mera kuch sunna hi nahi hai tumhe.

Priya- mumma is right chachi, now u go both from kitchen.

Sav- thik hai n they both leave the kitchen.

Priya to herself- so ms.priya sharma, aap aaj kitchen me kam karne wali hai, coz aap KO cool rehna hai aur ram ke liye gajar ka halwa banan hai aur mere kuchi-poo ke liye bhi, n she started her work.

Ram wondering her room n he likes her all collection of books, clean & tidiness room, nice n soft yellow green color all the wall with small flower arts.


Priya's phn ring ram look at her phn shows the id- kiran.

Ram- ye kahi sach me kitchen me toh... Ohhh galti se Maa KO ya choti Maa KO pata chala priya kitchen use kar rahi hai toh mai toh gaya and he came downstairs n asked about priya, everyone told him, she is in kitchen, he go in kitchen, priya doing grated of carrots.

Ram from back- tum ye nahi kar sakti.

Priya's pin drop silence work break by his voice, she turn her self- kiu?

Ram- ra...rasam hai Maa ne kaha tha.

Priya- but tumne hi toh kaha tha.

Ram- forgot it.

Priya- arrye.

Ram- kaha na mat Karo, if they know about these, then they will not spear me.

Priya- I will not told them.

Ram- yaa I know that but ritual.

Priya- ab Jo ye kiya hai inn ka mai kya karu.

Ram- kya.

Priya- grated carrots.

Ram- mai banta hun.

Priya- tum! Wo 2 maataye bahar baithi hai na wo mujhe puri khaa jaayegi aur hazam bhi hoga, yaar nahi mai bana deti hun.

Ram- hwww!

Priya- what?

Ram- you say yaar 3 din me itna asar, Improvement.

Priya- tum bol rahe ho mai nahi bana sakti aur mai bol rahi hum tum nahi toh banayega kon?

Ram- hum banate hai, tum basic kar Dena baki mai karta hun.

Priya- basic is done now it's ur turn.

Ram- ok n ram started cooking gajar ka halwa.

Priya- rasoi ki rasam dulhan aapne sasural mai puri karti hai lekin humari case ki baat hi alag hai n she seat on table.

Ram- kya? And he look at priya's big smile face n her word meaning.

Priya- humari case me damad USS ke sasural me rasoi ki rasam puri kar raha hai, sasural walon KO khush karne n she started laughing.

Ram- yaar don't laugh I know I was told you for making some good for me n he go to pick suger for halwa.

Priya stop him- wo mat Lena.

Ram- kiu namak hai kya n he started check.

Priya- namak nahi hai ye use Karo for ur well fit body.

Ram- sugar free thanks, I thought yaha par nahi milega.

Priya- I used everyday so take these.

Ram took n mixed it.

Priya- smells good.

Ram- hmm.

Priya give him some saffrons- mix it.

Ram- ji guru ji, he take it & mix in halwa.

Priya- that's my boy.

Ram- now it's ready, result in ur hand, if I pass in that, what will you give me.

Priya- any thing.

Ram- ok done n he came out from kitchen n seat with all.

Priya also came out n asked for all lunch, every body take there lunch n everyone like halwa, ram wanted priya's opinion but she silence for all the lunch time didn't say any thing.



Continue soon.



Next part vikram came to home with his wife, priya doing her gruhpravesh.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
very nice awesome update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful yaa mast i m falling for this story n raya making halwa wahh n priya is opp to the show hayeee n waiting for neha n vik will come back n waiting ki neha n vik has married eachother or koi aur hai n pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Awesome update! Loved the cute moments of raya in kitchen!! Plz continue soon! Thanks for pm!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Wow so NYC ...RaYa making halwa pls.. Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It surely an good improvement in RaYa relationship after coming to Priya house for more rituals. Their will be more of shock than surprise for all when Neha will come back with her husband. Ram is so surprised by all the things seeing in her room and as usual their cute bantering continues.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice update.
Cute moments of raya.
Vikram & Neha should not be forgiven easily and some form of punishment must be given to them for ditching the family like this.
Thanks for pm and please continue soon.

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