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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Now can find all your fiction work at one place Naseem. Good work dear

Welcome
Actually thought k aap sab ko hi bolu k pls find my stories 😆 but dat wud be bad isiliye socha khud mehnat karti hoon 😆 i forgot the names bht mushkil huyi search karne

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

thanks naseem di. but I will love to read ur stories on IF only. coz baki other places pe majhe stories read Karna nahi pasand. so used to IF na k I just love to be here only.

Arey Thanks kyu 😆
Maine apne liye kiya yeh aur dusri jagah bhi apni convenience ke liye rakhna chahti hoon 😃 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

Thank you
I am talented in spoiling my own stories 🤣
Yup I wanted to end it soon and also it was my second story...beginning of my writings n I was worst writer 😆
I could hv surely done well n wrote a emotional confession between two but as they say u learn from mistakes 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Accha ok, ur second attempt...then really its a very good one...

S we do learn frm our mistakes...and seriously u hv come a long way then bcoz tht saigal one was superb...

S 4th part did seemed rush to an end...

And @bold, i am rofling here...didnt expect tht😆

But that is true...u will undersrand after reading how gud I am at destroying my stories 😆

Naseem..

Naseem,

Now i read the story

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Naseem..

Its me again..😆

I read the second Os Our Love story..

Its very nice , I enjoyed reading it to the fullest.

U hv given a intro by being more than modest.😆

Being bored , u could come up with this, impressed.⭐️

I think I should tk my word back. Now i am enjoying ur funny stuffs more..😳😆..but wait why should I take back,I am enjoying both...😳😆

The dialogues were too good.

Be it raya dialogue,kids ,especially priya's one in past or current too good and entertaing. I was smiling now and then..

It was a full on package that made me laugh, smile and rofl.

Raya's being luv marriage😳,loved all their encounters..

Too good family moments.. Such scenes kyun nehi dhiya Cvs ne...so lovely raya and their kids in Ur Os.

And Myra's comment on shaadi😆

Hahaha this was the mindless senseless story 😆
Haan cvs never showed family moments

Thanks for liking it

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Naseem,

Its always me going to pester u in this thread with my comments on the stories i read of urs😆

It will happen till i read all...u hv no other go😆

Now i read the story..

Destined to Meet...

Again as i said before you are too modest😆 , i liked it..

Story kahaan se bhi ho, you inspired to tell here or copied, i dont care,

Because for me its new, too good to read it on Raya especially and the way you presented the story, written it was too good... the way you adapted the story to raya beautiful..

I luved reading it... 5 yrs love for the person whose name she doesnt know, love at first sight for Ram, priya slowing started luving or admiring him for his changes due to her...but never ever they talked..

But still love alive in their hearts, a silent romantic one...

And affer 5 yrs, the way ram proposed with book, i loved it...

Modest toh mai hoon :P Radio pe suna tha 😆
I wont be bothered infact I will be happy to read ur comments 😳 and cos of u i am revisiting my own stories❤️
It was silent love story n they had hardly 2-3 stories 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Now i read the story

CID Solving Sammy's Murder Case

I dont know where to start and where to end...

It was a complete laughter riot...🤣🤣

I hurt my stomach laughing through all..🤣

Abjieet trying to flirt with priya,😆

Ram on possesive husband mode,his dialogues,😆

KD with his sudh hindi, Rajat, freddie, acp,😆

Kush comment on suhaani's rona dhona😆

Everything on cid ends with a slap, true indeed😆

Wow, a complete laughter fest it was...thanks for writing it...

Superb awesome it was... u r indeed a star naseem on funny stuffs⭐️

Hahaha u read it
Its my fav work...i love this Os very much 😆
Bht bht Maza aaya tha...and comments bhi bht entertaining the 😆