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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

😆Hi naseem,

Me again..

I read your Os Aankhon Aankhon Mai..

Cute os with love at first sight for Raya.

Shaadhi mei , such match does happen at times..heard it.

U had written nicely, raya mesmerized by each other thru eyes only, love happening, priya taking first step, ever helping neha helped and finally Raya together ...so not so willingly they came to marriage but their match happened.

Sab kuch fast paced...

Story was nice dear, for reading,fictional its always ok.but real mei na, I don't believe in love at first sight yaar... I don't understand it at all , how could it happen so fast like that...😕😆.. For me love is something that happens with time and understanding each other...

I mean this cannot live without each other and more intense ones does happen only with time and understanding..that feel cannot happen all of a sudden for me at least...

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Other two os mumma I will marry you and saigal one I HV already read and commented in respective thread.

And the remaining one is Step Mom..since u quoted it as incomplete , I first left it...not to read now, but couldn't stop😳😆..read it...

With the title and ur intro, I came to know ok,the story is to be focused and emphasised on priya pihu relationship, where priya is a step mom to pihu..

I got it...and reading first part ,I thought, since ur thought was to emphasis on priya pihu, u thrown little efforts on ram priya back story and ram ananya story...

Bcoz focus on those were less on first part..

I thought , just to come direct to the place were pihu,priya stand as mom and daughter, u even rushed ram and priya marriage too..bcoz it cant happen in such a hurry..

But Ur second part was a total ulta...all those focus which I thought u left in first part due to the main centric story, u focussed in second and told details...uff...itna happened and Ram was portrayed as who sticks to his name..😆

But fine, I loved ur writeup on pihu,kush priya conversations..too good enjoyed...I think you are the one who could come up with such cute funny convos ..

Priya way of handling pihu was nice.

Hmm from one place, priya is able to get all details..grt...

I would love to read further of this story .

Dear , if you are interested, have time, intended to continue, then please continue... I would luv to see a happy ending of it...

Originally posted by: SakshiAddict

Finally able to finish all the stories

Awesome👏

Originally posted by: peeyara

even i am not complete believer in love at first sight but i agree k kabhi kabhi hojata hai 😳

sometimes u just need a single reason to fall for someone hopelessly wenever I think about Love at first sight ek quote yaad aata hai "I do believe in Love at first as My mom have been loving me since first sight" ❤️

Not always but kabhi kabhi hojata hai pehli nazar mai pyar 😳

Originally posted by: peeyara

u read incomplete one too 😆

I never had intention of showing back story of raya but readers wanted it so next part was dedicated to it 😆

I badly want to finish it but I am confused how to proceed further 😕 Wont mind a suggestion from you 😳

Originally posted by: peeyara

yeh bhi chori ka hai 🤣

fb pe 1 min ka video clip dekha tha toh usey Raya story bana diya 😆..i so loved that video k i decided to write OS on it 😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Wah, superb one yaar..luved it.. loved this line...❤️..

But woh feeling na alag hai... u hv been attached to tht new little one well before..

Bahut kuch pehle si hi attached hai... its a divine feeling..

But S i do accept at sometimes u need a single reason to fall hopelessly..

Whenever i share my thought on this love at first sight, even my friends used to tease me, even u chose ur partner within just one and half hours of meeting... 😆but thts a diff story..😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Me suggestion 😆

I know to read and express what i felt yaar but story😕

Let me think of it how i want to see the story...😳

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

But i shuld say, u know wht to take and from what kind of story to be inspired to right on raya.u did hv tht talent apart from writing..😆

Anyways ur version on raya i luved it...😳

Originally posted by: peeyara

I wud love to hear love story 😉 😆

haan wo feeling toh alag hoti (no experience 😆)