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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Oh okk..😆 , i hv been this much late😆

Let it be, where ever i get a chance to chat with u, or in this thread only will give my long run summary😆 of wht i felt on reading Urs...

And i luv to read ur crazy stories as well as emotional ones... 😳😆

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

And i luv to read ur crazy stories as well as emotional ones... 😳😆

And i will start with the little ones first, OS :)

Naseem tumne itna saara likha hai kya😲

Now can find all your fiction work at one place Naseem. Good work dear

thanks naseem di. but I will love to read ur stories on IF only. coz baki other places pe majhe stories read Karna nahi pasand. so used to IF na k I just love to be here only.

Originally posted by: peeyara

😆

gud idea to start wid OS

Naseem dear,

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Naseem dear,

I read the first Os Talash...

Its a very nice story to read dear...it always gives me a different feeling if the story is on Raya...i feel for the characters more😳, since Rashi flashes now and then while i read.😳😆

The start was different, the way Raya meet nice...hmm always a guy was so keen to give solace to a girl when she is vulnerable, even if its a first meet😆 , they cant handle girl's tears...😳

But its true...men cant handle women tears,when the men is gentle at heart😉

Their meet, Ram's concern for priya all nice...

Then nutz, oh i loved her in ur writeup..she is so cute here...

Nutz , neha's doings to know abt priya,bonding, start new business to kerp her near, all were good..

I luved handkey part too..😆

And then friendship blossomed between raya, priya's past and then came to know about her Taalash ..

Felt sorry for priya for her past but then felt happy reading tht she doesnt love samar, kya karoon,wants always Raya to be together...

Then they found samar, poor priya hurt more, find solace in Ram's arms, both hesitant to voice out their feelings, good advice by Nutz, to say it anyways instead of regretting later for not saying,

Then final happy end...

I loved reading the story..it hooked me..

But i should say the way the first three parts traversed and travelled, i expected more from u on the fourth part... three parts were so good tht i thought, y u stopped with a filmy ending for it..

May be since u decided to end Os in 4th part ,was it rushed..

I mean, its U naseem, i expected a even more real emotional confession and ending..

It was cute, no second thoughts, i loved it but since its being you, i expected more in last part bcoz u write even more good emotional stuffs...

Like balh bg's, ur situational songs were too good ,right from first on rain😆

And the one poetry frm vikram to neha was superb too..

Thnks for the links...i loved reading this Os..

Now will start with the other...

And i hope my summary didnt exceed ur Os length😆

Thank you
I am talented in spoiling my own stories 🤣
Yup I wanted to end it soon and also it was my second story...beginning of my writings n I was worst writer 😆
I could hv surely done well n wrote a emotional confession between two but as they say u learn from mistakes 😆

Originally posted by: LAdyLoveSAkShi

Naseem tumne itna saara likha hai kya😲

abb muje bhi phir se padna padega...shayad kuch miss toh nahi hua hai

congrats naseem...itna saara likhne ke liye😆

Exacty my reaction Sandy 🤣
Haan zaroor padho...mai bhi apni stories padh kar tym paas kar rahi hoon 😆