Updated Chapter 3 on pg 8 SS: THE UNUSUAL SUSPECT

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: LAdyLoveSAkShi
Ram said sorry and now both become friends
waiting for the next part
thanks for PM

There is definitely more than friendship between them but under the circumstances, they chose to be friends...lets see what leads them to admit their feelings😆 thanks for your comments...feedback is very much appreciated😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Really appreciate your efforts in providing feedbacks. Like I said, my motivation to write is completely gone but as an obligation towards readers like you I will make myself put in the effort to finish this story. Ha- ha thank you for liking my shayari too..let's see if I can get started on the next chapter...thanks again!

Sigh of relief 😉

You are considering for shayri's to be part of RaYa feelings 😆

And will be looking forward for next update

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 1
omg it was passionate & intimacy between them was beyond the words ... how can Priya fall for a player but seeing their past & the way she attracted towards him it's too much hot & Sizzling... I guess Priya gas already fall for him n he also must be fallen for her... but still need to read further to get more clear view. .. OMG what happen to Ram why he is on pool of bold must be due to his are grateful GFS. ... so moving on for next to read.. .

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 2
OMG can't get enough of this RaYa... wanting more n more.. yes this was short update but gave clear view of RaYa past... well what Ram did In past if an one was there expect her would do the same... but what Ram is doing with her in present time is completely out of limits... he is just making her go crazy what he actually wanted from her I really didn't get do he really started to like her or love her... or its something else to just get her for one time... but what ever it is for sure amezing too good... so Priya actually got attracted towards him his charm runs on her so moving for next to read...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 3
OMG finally the Ram Kapoor's dark secrete came out only... so she avoided him as much as she can but I guess his eyes was on her only this many days... so Ram has asked for sorry from Priya who actually do t give dame to him... says how much she is important to him in his life... so finally they started to get comfortable with each other nice way even interesting too... Ram continue to flirt with her but she actually didn't gave jn... but when she does he back out it shows how much ge respect for her... even care too... come on he can't be bad guy... I can understand his view towards relationship after his family past came out he thinks he can't be loyal to one woman hence he is running away from relationships in life but hope both realized their love for each other soon... waiting for next do update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

yaar still waiting when u planed to continue this plz reply at least...

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Chitra RaviKiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Such a nice concept. Any chance of updates?

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: chitloner
Such a nice concept. Any chance of updates?

Thank you! Next chapter is half way done then I just lost all the motivation to write that's why I think I do better with writing one shots. I feel bad for leaving it in the middle so I will try and finish it...I am gonna try but I am promising 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Thank you! Next chapter is half way done then I just lost all the motivation to write that's why I think I do better with writing one shots. I feel bad for leaving it in the middle so I will try and finish it...I am gonna try but I am promising😉

take ur time will be waiting for it...

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