Updated Chapter 3 on pg 8 SS: THE UNUSUAL SUSPECT

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contactcharu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

very nice... awesome.. progressing very well...

pls continue soon

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abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

woah... now that's something unique!! well read it now
.. nice one.. well try to give a big comment tomorrow... :-)

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prabina subedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Superrbb update!
Waiting for next!
Thank u 4 pm!!

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: fan_forever
Superb update... story is progressing really good... just curious to see how the track will change to make the title apt.
Pls update soon

Thanks for the appreciation! Let's see what I can come up with to make the title apt😆

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: ic_2000
Wonderful update. You are a awesome writer.
Waiting for next uplate.

Thank you so much... Your feedback means alot😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Rayaland
Loving the story plsss update soon

Thanks for the appreciation! Will start working on next part soon!

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: DevajaniG
nyc part...ram aplgsed to priya fr his past bhvr...priya also frgv him...slwly dey r in a cmfrtbl zone nw wd each othrs cmpny...continue soon..

So nice to read the feedback from you.. Thanks for taking the time😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
fantastic update
u r a superb writer. I am loving this story. looking forward to RaYa falling for each other. ram opened his past to Priya, but she didn't took him seriously. now RaYa r friends. waiting for the aag joh dono taraf barabar lagegi. pl continue

Thank you liking and taking the time to provide feedback... Means so much. Will start working on next part soon. Aag toh lag chuki hai bus dhuan uthna baaki hai... They are playing with fire eventually are bound to feel the heat😆