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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice... awesome.. progressing very well...

pls continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

woah... now that's something unique!! well read it now
.. nice one.. well try to give a big comment tomorrow... :-)


Thanks... Waiting for your long comment.. Please do that soon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Prabina057

Superrbb update!
Waiting for next!
Thank u 4 pm!!


Thank you for commenting and liking!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A beautiful chapter with heart winning shayari's dear

Priya too feel a little not of desire in her heart to see Ram more often and her 15 months of agony towatds him to behave out of character ended when Ram apologies for his behaviour.
Priya as a compassionate woman able to pass through real him and not wat he show to world. It was indeed a cute scene Priya turned the tables on Ram when he try to seduced her but instead was getting seduced by her.

Continue soon dear I am liking every parts if the story and thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nprithi2002

good part... contd soon...


Thanks ...need to start working on next part but feeling total lack of motivation right now😕

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

A beautiful chapter with heart winning shayari's dear


Priya too feel a little not of desire in her heart to see Ram more often and her 15 months of agony towatds him to behave out of character ended when Ram apologies for his behaviour.
Priya as a compassionate woman able to pass through real him and not wat he show to world. It was indeed a cute scene Priya turned the tables on Ram when he try to seduced her but instead was getting seduced by her.

Continue soon dear I am liking every parts if the story and thank u for the pm.


Thanks Aanchal for taking the time to comment which is much looked forward to. You are exceptional in always providing feedback and appreciating writers efforts. Thank you for being so thoughtful. I swear i will stop the shayari in the next part..thanks for putting up with it. I do need to find the motivation to write the next chapter...hopefully that will be soon but your comments and feedback are always appreciated so thanks a ton!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan


Thanks Aanchal for taking the time to comment which is much looked forward to. You are exceptional in always providing feedback and appreciating writers efforts. Thank you for being so thoughtful. I swear i will stop the shayari in the next part..thanks for putting up with it. I do need to find the motivation to write the next chapter...hopefully that will be soon but your comments and feedback are always appreciated so thanks a ton!

Pleasure was all mine dear
Through feedback reader is praising writer effort of presenting new story to all of us
And like every time I look forward to read the every new story you wrote.
But please don't stop mentioning shayari's they are the best part to read in the story as they emote the actual feeling of the RaYa every time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ram said sorry and now both become friends
waiting for the next part
thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Pleasure was all mine dear
Through feedback reader is praising writer effort of presenting new story to all of us
And like every time I look forward to read the every new story you wrote.
But please don't stop mentioning shayari's they are the best part to read in the story as they emote the actual feeling of the RaYa every time.


Really appreciate your efforts in providing feedbacks. Like I said, my motivation to write is completely gone but as an obligation towards readers like you I will make myself put in the effort to finish this story. Ha- ha thank you for liking my shayari too..let's see if I can get started on the next chapter...thanks again!

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