Updated Chapter 3 on pg 8 SS: THE UNUSUAL SUSPECT - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

wah wah wah wah!! what a shayri at the end!...really amazing...well thnks for such a sweet reply...my comment to look forward! :-P lol...well i must appreciate it...and u should know that i am looking sooo forward to this ss to...wow...here rams character seems something new ...a Casanova... a rich brat...and a total flirt...well u didnt revealed much of his past...and the injury didnt got its space of mention... well how did that happened? hmm...mysterious...well priya helped him throughout humanity...and well a lil bunch of personal feelings... but it was more to it... and what ram did was insane...handing him a debit card through his managr!...seriously...now thats ridiculous... and surprising at a point.. :-) superb update...the length was good...and if it seems small to u...than i am waiting for a lengthy update in ur sense! :-P *every greedy raya fan..* :-) next jaldi..and thanks for pm..


Thanks for appreciating the shayari and the update...for far the two chapters have been Dil se..the flow was there and I really need to sit down for the next parts. Since I am traveling for the next few days..I will update when I get back..please bear with me. This Ram is a Casanova and perhaps in for a rude awakening...let's wait and see if he will ever change his ways. I will shed light on his Past and what happened that day in the next uodates😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru

So superb please continue soon


Thank you...and will do😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: contactcharu

Very nice

pls continue soon


Thanks for liking and commenting :)




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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Rabiya_Shaikh

Oh My God, it awesome, loving it so Far...So Priya nurses Ram, but he in return hurts Priya by sending his Credit card. Loved Priya's Reply, And the last line was Fantastic. Superb update really, waiting for more. please update soon.
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I am so glad that you like and appreciate the story so far. Ram here is a shrewd businessman perhaps he needs to learn a few lessons of life...and who better than Priya to teach him that😉
Thank you for appreciating my on the spot shayari😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Read both the parts
lovely story...
Loved teeki teeki Priya
kiss was superb...Lets see how much Priya control next time😆
thanks for PM
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
superb ...

contd soon...
if possible pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Read both the parts
lovely story...
Loved teeki teeki Priya
kiss was superb...Lets see how much Priya control next time😆
thanks for PM
please update soon


Thanks for the feedback.😃
Priya might be naive but she knows how to put Ram in his place😆
Then again she is finding it challenging to not give into the temptations...let's see how long she can resist😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nprithi2002

superb ...

contd soon...
if possible pm me


Thank you...I appreciate you taking the time to comment😃
I added you to my buddy list so I will surely pm you about the next update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome update...
past n present both written very well..
beautiful shayari yar..pls continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: resha123

wow awesome update...
past n present both written very well..
beautiful shayari yar..pls continue soon..

Thanks my friend for liking and commenting! I am traveling right now... Will update in a couple of days. Will PM you when I post the update.

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