Updated Chapter 3 on pg 8 SS: THE UNUSUAL SUSPECT

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: DevajaniG
nyc stry...dfrnt cncpt..updt soon...

I try to give you guys something new and as idea comes I present it as is...thank you for appreciating my effort!😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: resha123
Nice story new concept..
Ram as spoilt brat.
Pls continue soon...

Ram is the typical Rich and successful man who enjoys what his status brings him...thanks for feedback😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa
As always another good story from u with nice concept
Yet Ram says he is not Casanova but didn't mind to have fling and Priya knows him well. But this also didn't able to work out as Ram kissed Priya.
But now war happen In elevator that he is lying in pool of blood made her shocked.

Thanks Aanchal...it's the feedback like yours that encourages me to write. I did try to come up with a different concept to keep the story interesting. Sparks between RAYa are certainly there...whether it's because of love or lust you will soon find out. Ram is in trouble...lets see what happens with him..stay tuned😉

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CrzyCandid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wooo It is soo superb.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plzzz continue soon :)))

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Rabiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Speechless, really good.
it was full of thrill,romance and suspense.
the way it was written, very very good.
really like it,
update soon, waiting :)

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aanchal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Thanks Aanchal...it's the feedback like yours that encourages me to write. I did try to come up with a different concept to keep the story interesting. Sparks between RAYa are certainly there...whether it's because of love or lust you will soon find out. Ram is in trouble...lets see what happens with him..stay tuned😉

You are one of the writers whose stories I enjoy reading and it will be interesting to know how further story will unfold.

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: itsmeg3
Loved your writing..gripping narration..👏
Plz continue soon

Thanks a lot for liking and commenting.. I am glad that you enjoyed it!😃

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DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: fan_forever
Wow...wow
That's the only word... i m gonna say... bcoz it says everythng...

Wow... fr everythng... storyline... flow... narration... description...

U r an amazing writer...

Pls update soon... waiting to see wat happen to Ram...

WOW... Really does say a lot... Thank you😳 I am glad that you liked it so much. Feedback means a great deal so thank you once again!