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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
waiting for the next part...
Pls continue soon
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Part 6

PAST: Ram came to priya's home.
Sud- to tum kya karte ho.
Ram- sir mai abhi MBA last year me hun aur papa ka business sambhalta hun.
Ship- ghar me kon kon hai.
Ram- ji mai aur mera chota bhai, wo abhi Canada me hai study k liye maa papa nahi hai aur dadi Punjab me hoti hai.
Sud- priya ko khush to rakhoge na.
Ram- ji sir, priya ko kabhi kisi baat ki takleef nahi hogi.
Ship- priya ko humne har ek azadi Di hai kya tum usse.
Ram- ji mam, usse Jo karna hai karne dijiye, mujhe wo jaisi hai waisi hi pasand hai.
Sud- issey jeans me shaadi karni hai, tumhe chalega na.
Ram smile- pata hai mujhe sir, bahot baar bola hai mujhe.
Ship- priya ko sab kuch aata hai lekin wo thik se tea aur coffee nahi banna paati.
Ram- bansi kaka banna denge.
Priya- maa papa KBC pura hua hai toh haan bol dijiye na.
Sud- next Sunday tum dono kya kar rahe ho.
Priya- mera kuch bhi plan nahi hai, ram tumhara.
Ram- nahi.
Sud- thik hai, tum dono ko Jo ring chahiye wo pasand kar lena, next Sunday tum dono k engagement hai.
Priya- papa it means.
Ship- we both are agree for ur relation.
Ram n priya smile.
Next day ram n priya told there group of their engagement on next Sunday, all are happy to listen the news, juhi didn't like that news.
PRESENT: at morning, priya stand in balcony with her morning coffee n saw heer in park.
Priya to herself- heer yaha par hai, in shocked.
Kady came- good morning priya.
Priya- morning, but her all concentrate on heer.
Kady- priya aj busy ho kya pura din.
Priya didn't replied.
Kady- priya, but no replied.
Kady jerked her priya looked at her- dhayan kaha par hai apka.
Priya- kuch nahi wo kuch soch rahi thi, tum bolo kya baat hai.
Kady- wo ap aj pura din busy ho.
Priya- haan wo jab tak biddai nahi hoti tab tak, kiu kya hua.
Kady- who will with us.
Priya- for what?
Kady- rajastan ghumne.
Priya- kal shaam ko ankita aur jeet aayenge tum dono k saath, ok.
Kady- ok, lekin aaj shaam.
Priya- aj shaam sangeet hai aur mujhe sab kuch dekhna hoga and tumhe peehu ko.
Kady- yes boss.
Priya- chup kar, n smile.
In ram's room, neha n vik come.
Neha- good morning fatty.
Ram- morning darling, vik Maine kuch socha hai.
Vik- kya.
Ram- meri taraf se tum dono ko ye shaadi gift.
Neha- kya bol raha hai.
Ram- mai ye bol raha hun k tum dono ko anniversary ka gift meri taraf se shaadi hogi.
Neha excited- yeeeyeee thankyou fatty.
Ram- in sab se pehle mujhe uss PSK se milna hai.
Neha- wo PSK utha bhi nahi hoga.
Ram- wo professional hai yaar.
Vik- phir bhi wo apne beti ke saath aaya hai.
Ram's room bell ring, neha open the door, heer come.
Heer- morning guys, konsi meeting chalu hai.
Neha- shaadi ki.
Heer- i am given u only one idea aur tu serious ho gayi.
Vik- usse toh hona hi hai na, paise isske thodi na jaa rahe hai wo toh ram.
Ram cut in middle- chup kar kanjus.
Vik- mai kanjus.
Ram- haan tu kanjus.
Vik- dekha priya ye dono milke mujhe and then he realise that priya is not there.
Vik- ahhhmm sorry, mai abhi aata hun n he go from there.
Ram- vikram sunn toh, but no use he go from there.
Neha- fatty relax mai sambhal lungi usse, give him sometime, he will be fine.
Vik come in corridor n started to smoking n hide his tears, priya come in corridor n she give interaction to head of the sangeet n saw man is smoking in corridor so she give the mint mouth fresher n write a note on tissue, 'smoking is injurious to health & this area is not for smoking', and she give to her employee n told them to give that men, it means vikram and she go for her work, priya's employee give tissue and mint n told that these gave by her mam.
Vik take it n open the tissue and read it, n smile, he throw the cigar n again re-read, neha came.
Neha- are u ok vik.
Vik- yaa i m fine.
Neha saw the tissue in his hand- ye kya hai.
Vik- ohh ye kisne diya mujhe and he show her.
Neha read and said- ye priya ki hand writing hai.
Vik- are you sure.
Neha- ofcourse am i, usske paas se Maine bahot saare letter likh kar liye hai tumhare liye, just a moment priya's is here.
Vik- its not possible.
Neha- why?
Vik- priya yaha par hai aur mujhse bina mile no way, i know her very well, ram aur usske bich kitne bhi difference kiu na ho wo mere saath aisa behave nahi kar sakti.
Neha- vik wo bhi ek insan hai.
Vik- wo insan ke saath saath wo meri sister hai, puri duniya baddal sakti hai lekin wo nahi.
Neha- ok, ok relax don't get hyper now, hum pata karte hai.
Vik- usske baad ram ko.
Neha- ya ok.
Priya come to her room to wokeup peehu.
Priya- peehu wokeup princess its morning baba.
Peehu in sleepy tone- maa only 5mins plz.
Priya- mai mera kam karne gayi thi tab bhi apne 5mins kaha tha, mai pure 15mins baad aa rahi hu, chalo utho n she seat beside peehu lying peehu wokeup n huged priya by her waist.
Peehu in half sleep voice- mumma aaj ghumne jaayenge.
Priya- haan ap aur kady didi jaana wo apko fav.ankita aur jeet aa rahe hai apke saath aur apko wo dono ghumayge.
Pee- lekin aap.
Priya- we all are going to to Sunday for shopping.
Pee- sacchi mumma, with excited.
Priya- muchi, ab chalo jaldi.

Part 7

Priya- mucchi, ab chalo jaldi ready ho kar aap breakfast kar ke, mujhe chota sa kam pura karna hai.
Pee- konsa kam mumma.
Priya- wo flowers nahi aaye hai extra.
Pee- mai bhi aau apke saath.
Priya- ummm ok, but aap ek jagah shanti se baithoge.
Pee- ok with smile.
At function area: Heer and neha there, peehu is seat on chair n she plying candy crush. They both watch her and look here n there and asked.
Neha- beta aap yaha par akele kiu baithe ho, jaao waha par baccho ke saath khelo.
Peehu pause her game looked at neha- aap meri mumma ho.
Neha- nahi.
Pee- aap meri mumma ko janti hai.
Neha- nahi.
Pee- then why are you ordering me.
Neha- beta yaha par kam chalu hai, iss liye aapko.
Pee- ye kam meri mumma handle kar rahi hai.
Heer- ohhh toh aap PSK ki beti hai.
Pee- hmmm and she again start her candy crush.
Heer- aap humesha gusse me rehti hai.
Peehu irritated- aunty mujhe ye level complit karni hai agar nahi mai har gayi toh kady didi jeet jaayegi.
Neha- mai khelu.
Pee- apko aata hai.
Neha- haan i m champion in these game.
Peehu give her mobi- win karoge na.
Neha- pakka, ek shart hai.
Pee- konsi?
Neha- ap apna naam bataoge.
Pee- meri bhi ek shart hai.
Heer- deal?
Pee- haan.
Heer- bolo.
Pee- ap bhi apna naam bataoge aur one selfi with me.
Neha n heer- ok.
At lunch time, priya saw its 2 already so she called on peehu's phn.
Neha- apko phn aaya hai madam.
Pee- mumma ka hoga.
Neha- caller ID toh.
Pee- aap do and she snatched, she on call.
Pee- haan mumma.
Priya- peehu apko bhukh nahi lagi hai.
Pee- aap kaha par ho.
Priya- room k taraf Jo corridor hai na waha par, aap jaldi aa jaao.
Pee- ok bye n she cut the call.
Peehu to neha n heer- phn mera nahi kady didi ka hai aur unnke liye mumma angel hai bye n she ran from there.
Neha- arrye kaisi ladki hai naam bhi nahi baataya.
Heer- gussa dekh kar priya ki yaad aayi.
Neha- hmm naak par gussa hai.
Heer- chalo uss PSK ko milna hai, usski beti thi.
Neha- ye chota pack tha, bada dhamaka kaisa hai pata nahi and they both laugh.
At evening function started, all people like the function arrangement.
Ram to PE- excuse me.
PE- yes sir.
Ram- i want to meet PSK for my sister weeding.
PE- ya sir aap corridor me wait kijiye, mam mam ko bolti hun.
Ram- ok thankyou.
Priya is wearing yellow & green combination Saree, with minimal makeup with zumkhas in ears n right ear is Bluetooth.
PE- mam aap se koi milna chahta hai.
Priya- for what.
PE- unnke sister ki shaadi hai aur wo apse plan karwana chahte hai.
Priya- naam kya hai.
PE- mam pata nahi wo apko corridor me intzar kar rahe hai.
Priya- ok, mai jaati hun.
All 4 waiting in corridor, they 4 watching dance from attached balcony.
Priya come there and saw that 4.
Priya- excuse me, i am PSK, you wanted to meet me na.
All are turned to the voice and shocked to see priya infront of them, priya also same reaction to see them.
Ram- priya tum and choked his voice.
Heer n neha running towards her but priya showed her palm to them n they both stop there.
Priya click her Bluetooth button- haan bolo, one side convo- what (pause) ok mai abhi aati hun, and she find a word what to say.
Priya- sir, mam mai aap sab se kal morning me 10am ko cafe area me milti hun, thankyou, and priya go to turned with teary eyes which is unseen from 4 of them.
In room she enter n saw peehu is in bandage on her knee and her left hand.
Priya worried- ye kaise hua.
Kady- priya relax wo park me hum khel rahe the tab ye gir gayi don't worry doc ke paas gaye the, doc ne kaha hai, she is totally fine only scratched hai nothing else.
Priya wiped her tears- ok, lekin ye.
Kady- hum hotel aa rahe the tab rasste me soo gayi.
Priya- thik hai tu jaa change kar aur kuch khaa le aur aram kar.
Kady- thik hai and she go from there.
Priya seat beside peehu lying, she looked at peehu and again her eyes filed with tears, some voice echoing her ears " i hate you priya, i brocked up with you, i brocked our engagement, i hate you, you are the worse thing is in my life, i hate you, chali jaao meri zindagi se", she closed her ears by her hands n she cried silently.
PAST:
RaYa's engagement done, there life was smoothly like all person, juhi didn't like that RaYa got engaged coz, she like ram and also secretly love with him.
Juhi- hi priya ram ka wait kar rahi ho.
Priya- yupe, wo thodi Der me clg pochega.
Juhi- ek baat puchu.
Priya- permission kiu le rahi ho, bolo na.
Juhi- aisa kya dekha ram me.
Priya- his heart, wo dil ka bahot accha hai.
Juhi- same answer, made for each other.
Priya smile.
Juhi- socho agar tum dono ke bich me kuch misunderstanding ho jaaye aur ram tum par trust naa kare toh.
Priya- most important hum dono k bich me misunderstanding hoti hai to samne baith kar solve karte hai, secondly we both are trust eachother very much.
Juhi- its over confidence priya.
Priya- not over confident, ram knows my behavior n i know ram's behavior n she smile.
Juhi think- iss trust ko mai khud todungi, mere ram ko tum mujhse dur nahi kar sakti.
Ram came with one news that camp are going to shimla.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good progress between past and present
RaYa are madly in love and it was uniqueness of the proposal
in present Priya is with Kady and Peehu apart from Ram
but in past situation created by Juhi can destroy relationship between Ram Priya.
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story is moving nicely
Raya met each other but Priya avoid Ram.
Juhi trying to create MU between Raya.
waiting for the next part
thanks for PM
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Part 8

Ram come with one news that there camp are going to shimla for 3 days and after come that they all came in clg DJ night.
PRESENT:
Priya's sleep brocked by peehu calling her.
Pee- mumma.
Priya in worried- aap uth gaye, apko injuries dukh rahi hai aur aap aise park me giri kaise.
Peehu slap her forehead- ohhh! Mumma kitne sawal karte ho aap.
Priya- phir kya karu aap sawal puchne jaise hi kam karte ho.
Pee- wo mai football khel rahi thi, mumma but now i am fine but.
Priya- but what?
Pee- i am very much hungry mumma.
Priya- ok mai order karti hun.
Pee- no mumma hum niche jaate hai na dinner karne restaurant me.
Priya- lekin aap.
Peehu cut in middle- plz mumma.
Priya- ok pehle apko fresh karti hun usske baad hum jaayenge, ok.
Pee- ok mumma.
At restaurant, ram, heer, neha n vikram are seating there for there dinner.
Heer- i think vik u should talk with priya.
Ram- no priya bahot jaada.
Neha cut in middle- ram wo baat 7years pehle ki baat hai.
Ram- lekin wo aj bhi utni hi deep hai priya k dil me, mere trust na karne ki wajah se aj hum dono alag hue hai, mai priya ko jaanta tha, jaanta hun phir bhi.
Heer- ram hum priya se baat karte hai.
Vik- koi priya se baat nahi karega wo tum sab se naraz hai, mujhse nahi, mai khud baat karunga.
Ram- wo heer aur neha ki baat sunne k liye tyar nahi hai, wo teri baat nahi sunnegi.
Vik- ye Jo kuch bhi hua tha tab mai yaha nahi tha, mai khud priya se baat karunga, agar wo mujhe Sach me bhai manti hai na toh, sorry hum dinner karte hai usske baad dekhte hai.
Sometime priya, peehu n kady came in restaurant n looking for table, but they didn't find it, so they waiting, heer looked at them.
Heer- hey vik see priya is there and she point towards.
Ram- i think she came for dinner, mai usse.
Vik cut him middle- tu baithe mai lekar aata hun and vik go to called priya.
Priya is busy in talking on phn, her back to him, he came n saw priya hold little girl hand n her left side one big girl talking with little girl.
Vik go to taped priya but peehu stop him.
Pee- aap waiter ho.
Kady looked at him- peehu chup kar.
Vik- mai waiter nahi hun mai vikram hun, mai yaha par priya ko bulane aaya hun, wo humre saath table share kar sakti hai.
Kady- thankyou sir but priya didn't like it.
Vik- ummm she is my frnd n i knw her, usse pasand hi aayega.
Kady- aap priya ke dost ho.
Vik- haan.
Kady go to say something, priya end the call n she turned n saw vikram is infront of her, vikram give smile to her but she didn't give him any reaction.
Vik- umm mai kuch puchunga nahi, mai bas ye chahta hun ke tum table share karo aur kuch nahi, yaha par bahot jaada rush hai, so can you.
Priya didn't say a single word.
Vik- tumhare chupi ko haan samjhu, hey little princess n young princess go to that table (he point to his table) mai waiter se bolta hun chair lagane ke liye.
Peehu looked at priya, priya give her affirmation by her eyes.
Pee- chalo kady didi n she go with kady.
Vik walking with priya.
Vik- how are you?
Priya- achhi hun.
Vik- PSK, wedding planner.
Priya only smile, they both reached their, ram only gaze her.
Neha- hey candy crush girl apne noon ko apna naam nahi baataya.
Priya looked at peehu with confused.
Pee- noon ko mumma ka call aaya tha.
Heer- mumma?
Pee- haan mumma, maa plz baitho na n she signal to priya her beside chair, the another shocked to them that priya have a daughter.
Heer- priya she is ur.
Priya- peehu her name n she is kady n she beside peehu.
Neha- kya khaogi.
Priya- mai order karti hun, she called the waiter n she give her order for her, peehu n kady.
Pee- maa kulfi.
Priya- no kulfi.
Peehu with sad face- mumma.
Priya- ok lekin sirf aj ke din.
Pee- ok.
Priya's phn ring n she excused her self.
Ram asked peehu- aap mujhe bhul gayi.
Pee- nahi.
Kady- ap sab priya ko jaante ho.
Heer- we are clg frnds, she is our besti.
Kady- strange, priya ne kabhi baataya nahi.
Neha- aj bhi priya gusse wali hai kya.
Pee- mumma kabhi gussa nahi karti.
Heer- oye teri mumma na bahot jaada gussa karti hai, pata hai tujhe.
Pee- nahi karti.
Kady- peehu shant ho jaa.
Peehu show her index figure to kady- ap inhe shant kijiye na, warna mai apki complain daijaa se karungi.
Kady- plz mam, plz don't.
Heer, neha, vik n ram smile.
Priya come on table n saw peehu's angry face- kis par gussa hai.
Peehu didn't reply.
Priya to kady- tera phn swichoff kiu hai.
Kady- battery die, charging par hai.
Priya- baad me daijaa ko call karna.
Kady noded in yes.
Priya- peehu anything wrong.
Pee- maa ap gussa karti thi, bahot jaada.
Priya- apko kya lagta hai.
Peehu noded in no.
Vik- so peehu ap konsi stnd me ho.
Pee- 1st aur ap.
Priya- peehu uncle office jaate hai, she again got the call, one side convo.
Priya on call- nahi dinner kar rahi hun, restaurant me, yaha par lekar aao mai sing karti hun, ok.
Vik- priya tum khaana khate samay tak phn side nahi rakh sakti.
Priya- rakh deti lekin mrs.patel ne dimag khaaya hai, last minute bol rahi hai, full Indian dishes chahiye.
Neha- kab se kar rahi ho ye sab.
Priya- 6years ho gaye.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story.
Nice update.
Thanks for pm.

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All the friends meet again
In all this only Vikram understand Priya
Hope Peehu able to make her mom smile and she able to reunite with Ram.
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Part 9

Priya- 6years ho gaye.

Heer- peehu kitne saal ki hai, she is very intelligent.

Priya- 2months later 6 started.

Pee- mumma, peehu finished her food.

Priya- ho gaya.

Pee- hmm, maa kady didi ap dono ka hua.

Priya- mera hua.

Kady- petu, mera 2mins me khatam ho jaayega, lekin kiu puch rahi ho.

Pee- coz, peehu signal to priya for come near.

Priya go near and asked- bolo kya baat hai.

Pee- mumma yaha se jaldi chalo na mujhe wo movie dekhni hai.

Priya- ok, kady ka hone ke baad hum jaate hai.

Heer- kya baat hai.

Ram- Maine sab sunn liya.

Pee- bad manners hai aapko kuch nahi aata, uss din bhi mujhe disturb kiya.

Priya- PEEHU, say sorry to him.

Peehu unwilling- sorry.

Priya called waiter for her bill.

Ram- mai de dunga.

Priya- sorry mujhe mere limitations pata hai aur mai anjaan logo se kabhi bhi favor nahi leti, thankyou vikram for sharing ur table with us n she gave smile to vik.

PAST:

Priya told her parents that she go for a camp for 3days n her full gang with her. All are reached shimla, all are doing full of masti, all are sharing there rooms with frnds or there love once. Rajat n vik sharing same room, heer n neha same, juhi wanted share room with priya but she said that she wanted share room with ram, one time ram disagree, priya gave him hittler look, then ram agree to share room with priya.

In room.

Priya- tu humesha meri har ek baat se disagree kiu hota hai.

Ram- tu humesha baatein hi aisi karti hai.

Priya- i wanted spend time with you.

Ram came near her huged from back- agar Maine kuch aisa waisa kiya toh.

Priya turned herself n looking his eyes- toh kya.

Ram- tujhe kuch problem nahi hogi.

Priya encircled his neck- nahi hoga.

Ram- tu har baat mazak me kiu leti hai.

Priya- mazak nahi kar rahi serious hun, agar humre bich aisa waisa kuch hota hai to bhi kuch problem nahi hai, aisa-waisa kuch hota hai to wo mere hone wale pati ke saath ho raha hoga, aur waise bhi humari shaadi iss diwali ho rahi hai.

Ram- you are impossible.

Priya- i know that n she soft kissed on lips.

At guest room corridor, priya is seating bench listening music, all are going for wondering shimla, juhi come n seat beside priya.

Juhi- hi priya.

Priya stop her music- hello juhi, tu nahi gayi.

Juhi- nahi wo mai yaha par dusri bar aayi hu.

Priya- ohhh, kya hua kuch baat hai.

Juhi- tum nahi gayi.

Priya- ahhh, wo mere leg me moch aayi hai toh nahi gayi.

Juhi- very bad, accha sunno na ek baat hai.

Priya- konsi.

Juhi- mujhe ek drama bithana hai clg me.

Priya- what's the topic.

Juhi- its revenge story n Maine cast bhi socha hai.

Priya- who?

Juhi- rajat, you & ram and i m director.

Priya- mera kya roll hai.

Juhi- roll baad me, mai kuch dialogues lekar aayi hun wo tum thik se bolo.

Priya- naam toh change karegi na.

Juhi- abhi tak nahi kiye hai, i mean Maine writing karte samay tumhe rajat aur ram ko samne rakha kar likha hai toh.

Priya- ok, give me the script.

Juhi give her script n Said- tum priya ke dialogues with expression mai waha khaadi rehe kar shout karti hun, ok.

Priya- oh-ho professional.

Juhi- thoda sa, i will show my hand then you stop ok.

Priya- ok and she thumb up, and stared her dialogues.

Priya- 1) ho raha hai lekin, bahot majja bhi aa raha hai.

2) but i am all yours, aur rahi ram ki baat to mai sirf usske saath pyar ka drama kar rahi hun.

3) shut up yaar, don't say thanks and juhi show her hand to stop.

Priya- iss me mai villain hun.

Juhi- no.

Priya- toh.

Juhi- iss story ka end hai sab ki maut.

Priya- strange.

Juhi- yaa ek revenge lene k liye wo tinno sab ki jaan lete hai.

Priya- ohh.

Juhi- issey sab ko ek sabak milega, k revenge lena buri baat hai, aur issey kuch haasil nahi hota.

Priya- hmmm nice.

Juhi- ek aur baat, plz ye baat kisi se share mat karna warna audition lena hoga mujhe.

Priya- ok nahi share karungi.

PRESENT:

Priya in corridor balcony sip her coffee, men come and stand beside her.

Men- kaha par thi itne saal.

Priya looked at him- tumse matlab and she wanted go from there, ram hold her arm tightly.

Priya- leave my hand ram.

Ram- anjaan hun na tumhare liye fir naam kaise pata.

Priya- tumhari wajah se, tum mere liye anjaan ho.

Ram hold her arm tightly- priya i am sorry, uss din mai nashe me tha.

Priya eyes filed with tears- nashe me the, lekin trust to karte, humesha bolte the, i trust you blindly, lekin jab waqt aaya tab kya hua.

Ram- tum mujhe chod kar gayi thi.

Priya- tumne mujhe majbur kiya.

Ram go said open his mouth, peehu called priya.

Pee- mumma, ram leave priya's arm.

Priya wiped her tears n asked.

Priya- aap to movie dekhte dekhte soo gaye the na.

Pee- mumma mujhe pani peena tha to dekha aap room me nahi ho, to mai bahar aa gayi.

Priya- kady ko utha dete na aap, came and she go towards peehu n pickup her in arm.

Peehu saw tears in priya's eyes but she didn't asked she encircled her hand to priya's neck n priya huged her, peehu took her chain on priya's shoulder n give hittler look to ram. Next morning, priya go to her work of function n give peehu few instruction, kady wokeup n fine peehu thinking something.

Part 10

Next morning,

Priya go to her work of function n give few instructions to peehu, kady wokeup and fine peehu thinking something.

Kady- good morning petu.

Pee- good morning kady didi.

Kady- priya kaha par hai.

Pee- wo catress k changes k liye gayi hai aur hum dono ko kaha hai k breakfast aur lunch kar lena, wo lunch k baad aayegi.

Kady- ok, tu kab uthi.

Pee- aap se pehle.

Kady- very funny, n she saw peehu thinking some, so she asked her again.

Kady- kya soch rahi hai petu.

Pee- kuch bahot jaruri.

Kady- koi sharart nahi ok, priya k aane ke baad Jo karna hai kar.

Pee- Di ek baar aap meri baat sunnoge.

Kady surprise- respect! Very nice, bolo sab sunnti hun.

Pee- mumma ke frnds k baare me aapko kuch pata hai.

Kady- nahi.

Pee- umm, wo kal raat ko hum jinke saath table share kiya unnko aap jaante hai.

Kady- nahi mai toh pehli baar mili hun, lekin tu itna kiu soch rahi hai.

Pee- kiu ki mumma kabhi kisi ke saath bhi rude behave nahi karti.

Kady- rude behave kab kiya?

Pee- kal raat ko Maine mumma ko dekha wo disturb karne wale uncle ke saath rude behave karte hue and mumma ki aankho me tears the.

Kady- bad manners hai petu.

Pee- but mumma bed par nahi thi aur mai unnhe search karne gayi thi tab galti se.

Kady- ok, then what?

Pee- mere papa kon hai, aap ko pata hai.

Kady- nahi mujhe nahi pata hai, sorry.

Pee- aap mera ek kam karoge.

Kady- haan bolo. Pee- but promise me k aap maa ko ye baat nahi bologe.

Kady- secret mission.

Pee- haan.

Kady- lekin kiu.

Pee- mumma ko apne kabhi secretly roote dekha hai.

Kady- nahi.

Pee- Maine dekha hai plz don't told maa.

Kady- ok, bol kya karna hai.

Pee- aap fresh ho jaao, phir mere saath wo kal uncle mile the na dinner time.

Kady- haan vikram sir.

Pee- unnke paas jaana hai, ok.

PAST:

At night, all are seat in garden area, middle camp fire and plying antakshir, divide in two team, ram, heer, vikram n neha in one team priya, rajat n juhi in one team, but antakshir some changes like song guessing with dance and all are enjoyed. Now priya's team time n rajat started singing old song, 'yeh raatein, yeh mausam, from Dil ka Thug', and he forword his hand to priya n she started dance with him, ram saw all these n he didn't like it, antakshir was end, all are go in there respective room.

In ram n priya room, priya came with song murmuring, yeh raatein, yeh mausam n saw ram stand near balcony, priya go and huged back n kissed on his arm.

Ram- chodo mujhe.

Priya- arrey abhi acche mood me the, ab kya hua.

Ram- jaao sab ke saath dance karo, majje karo, go i don't want to talk.

Priya in heart- ohhh, toh ye baat hai n she smile.

Ram- now you smile, seriously tujhe and priya started kiss him, and she sucked his lower lip, and ram also respond her kiss, she gave him access n her hand in his hair, sometime brocked the kiss for fresh air.

Priya still encircled ram with tight grip.

Priya- i am all yours, no one can enter in my life expect you, that's the prof.

Ram only looked her eyes- i m sorry.

Priya- i love you very much and she give him kiss on cheek, aur ye iss liye kiu ki, tu phir kabhi aisa gussa karega na to tera gussa aise hi shaant hoga.

Ram also tight his grip and landed for lip lock and he pin her in wall and him.

They both kiss positively, ram bit priya's lower lip and there tongues fight with eachother.

PRESENT:

Peehu & kady to came respeccinits and asked about vikram and she told them both there 5 vikram name is available, they both which vikram want meet.

Pee- humne kal raat ko jinke saath dinner kiya tha wo chahiye.

Rec- lekin aapne kiske saath dinner kiya tha ye mujhe kaise pata hoga.

Pee- aunty aap saare vikram ko yaha bulayie mujhe unnse milna hai.

Rec- i m sorry lekin Maine unnhe aise nahi bula sakti.

Pee- plz aunty.

Rec to kady- plz mam try to understand hum aise nahi bula sakte kisi ko bhi aur aapko sirf naam pata hai unnka surname nahi pata hai.

Pee- lekin plz aunty you try to understand, we meet him its very urgent, plz don't think about my age, think about my need, with so much innocent face.

Rec- lekin mai apki koi help nahi kar sakti.

Pee- apko respeccinits kisne banaya, with little angry tone.

Rec- what?

Kady- sorry mam, petu chal mere saath.

Peehu go with her.

Pee- ab kya kare.

Kady- tu idhar hi ruk ok, kidhar mat jaa.

Pee- ok n she stand there kady go to respeccinits, came after sometime.

Pee- kya hua.

Kady- ek vikram ka pata chala.

Pee- wo kaise.

Kady- Jo 4 hai unn me se 2 work purpose se aaye hai, 2 me se ek personal, ek family k saath aur Jo bacha hai wo shaadi attend karne aaya hai, aur kal wale vikram ke clothes dekh kar to aisa lag raha tha ke wo shaadi attend karne aaya hai.

Pee- toh ab.

Kady- toh ab chalo mere saath.

PAST:

Next morning, raya are sleeping with eachother ram hole priya by waist, with tight grip, priya's one hand in ram's hair and one hand hold ram's arm, ram half body on priya's body, priya wokeup first n admiring ram with love n she kissed on ram's forehead.

Ram wokeup with smile- good morning.

Priya- fresh morning.

Part 11

PAST:

Next morning, raya are sleeping with eachother, ram hold priya by waist, with tight grip, priya's one hand in ram's hair n one hand hold ram's arm. Ram half body on priya's body.

Priya wokeup first m admiring ram with love n she kissed on ram's forehead.

Ram wokeup with smile- good morning.

Priya- fresh morning.

Ram realised that they both cross there limits before marriage and he seat on bed with hurry n shocked, priya read his face.

Priya wrapped bed sheet on her- kuch galat nahi hua hai.

Ram looked at her- no its wrong priya.

Priya- ram we both love with eachother and getting marriage very soon.

Ram- rituals naam ki bhi koi.

Priya- ram rituals long ne bannya hai, humne nahi, ye sab bol ke aj ki morning to spoil mat karo plz, for us.

Ram- ok sorry and he give her side huged.

PRESENT:

Kady knocked the door, neha open the door.

Neha- hey, hi, ummm ur name.

Pee- kadambari.

Neha look down- hey, hi chota packet.

Pee- peehu naam hai mera, with angry.

Neha- ok, tum dono yaha par.

Pee- aap k yaha par sab kuch door pe pucha jaata hai, andar aane k rules nahi hai.

Kady- PEEHU.

Neha- sorry for all, plz come.

They both in:

Pee- hello vikram uncle.

Vik- hey little princess, and he smile.

Pee- mai aur kady didi yaha par baith sakte hai, she showing sofa.

Neha- ya sure.

They both seat, vikram asked.

Vik- tum kuch logi.

Pee- nahi. Kady- peehu aap se milna chahti thi toh.

Vik- kya hua, priya ko pata hai, tum dono yaha par ho.

Pee- nahi.

Vik- priya ko call kar ke baata dun.

Pee- mumma nahi hai, iss liye mai aap se milna aayi hun, kuch baat karni hai, with hurry, kuch puchna hai.

Neha- pucho Jo puchna hai.

Pee- meri mumma ne kal ap se rude behave kiu kiya.

Vik- rude behave?

Kady- priya apki dost hai na.

Neha- haan wo hum sab ki frnd hai.

Pee- phir aap sab mumma aegis kabhi milne kiu nahi aaye.

Vik- aap apna pura naam bataoge plz.

Pee- peehu sharma kapoor.

Sometime door knocked, neha open the door, heer came.

Heer saw peehu- hi, chutku.

Peehu in anger- my name is peehu.

Heer- ok, sorry.

At cafe area:

Priya give instruction to all.

At 10am, Ram came there n seat opposite to priya. She saw him and one employee.

PE- mam yahi sir hai jinhe weeding+anniversary ka plan karna hai.

Priya- ok tum jaao aur mere liye plz strong black coffee bolna, and her employee go from there.

Priya to ram- boliye sir, aapko kaisi shaadi karwani hai, simple, grand, destination yaa season.

Ram- grand karni hai, 5th anniversary hai, pehle court marriage hui thi aur mai chahta hun ke unn dono ke liye ye sab se best moment ho.

Priya- don't worry sir, we try our best.

Ram- 7saal me itna change.

Priya- log pal bhar me change hote hai mujhe toh 7saal lage.

Ram- priya plz meri baat sunno.

Priya- sorry sir but i have lots of work, plz aap jaa sakte hai, apko Jo kuch bhi aur baat karni hai mere office aa kar baat kijiye, aapke paas card hai, uss par address aur phn no. Bhi hai.

Ram- one last question.

Priya only looked at him.

Ram- peehu... Tum... I mean.

Priya cut him off- she is my daughter, usse baat bhi mat karna, warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga, wo priya tumhare pyar me thi, lekin ye priya kisi se pyar nahi karti usse sirf apne beti aur kam se pyar karti hai, thankyou Mr. Plz go from here.

Ram give his card- ye mera card hai, next meeting kab hogi baata dena and he go from there.

PAST:

DJ night, ram, heer, neha are came to clg waiting for priya n rajat, vikram go to his work out of station. Juhi came.

Juhi- hi, guys waiting for priya n rajat.

Ram- haan.

Juhi- wo dono shayad late aayenge.

Heer- tumhe kaise pata.

Juhi- wo mujhe abhi rajat ka call aaya tha aur ussne kaha wo priya usske saath hai.

Juhi to ram- tum se ek jaruri baat karni hai.

Ram- haan bolo. Juhi- plz corner.

Ram- yupe and he go with her.

Ram- kya hua bolo.

Juhi- plz u change ur mind towards priya.

Ram- ho gaya tumhara, mai jaa raha hun.

Juhi- ram wo tumhe kuch dikhana hai.

Ram- see i m not interested in ur bakwas.

Juhi- ram, priya tumhare saath pyar ka drama kar rahi hai.

Ram- u just shut up ur mouth otherwise i slap u.

Neha n heer saw the ram angry face, they both came there.

Heer- ram kya baat hai.

Ram with anger tone- ye priya k baare me bakwas kar rahi hai.

Neha- juhi just go from here.

Juhi- Jo kuch bhi mai bol rahi hun wo Sachs hai, priya ram ke saath pyar ka drama kar rahi hai.

Heer- just shut ur mouth n ram chalo yaha se.

Sametime she play something on her mobi, which is stop them three.

Neha- what these?

Juhi- khud hi dekhlo.

They three go n saw the video of priya n rajat convo.

Raj- tumhe nahi lagta ab ye pyar ka natak bahot jaada ho raha hai.

Priya- ho raha hai lekin bahot mazza bhi aa raha hai.

Raj- usske feelings k saath tum khel rahi ho aur mujhe jealousy feel kar raha hun.

Priya- but i m all yours, aur rahi ram ki baat to mai sirf usske saath pyar ka natak kar rahi hun.

Raj laughed- thankyou, tu mere liye yeh sab kar rahi ho.

Priya- shut up yaar don't say thanks, n video off.

Heer- ye jhooth hai.

Juhi- ye Sachs hai, ye video shimla ka hai jab priya aur rajat nahi aaye the


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Priya had face so much hurdles in past but in present she is happy with her daughter Peehu but in this she still missing the warmness of Ram beside her.
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RaYa was united in past to be separated due to Juhi hope they soon united again
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Part 12

PAST continue:

Juhi- ye sach hai, ye video shimla ka hai jab priya aur rajat nahi aaye the, hum sab ke saath aur mujhe uneasy feel ho raha tha iss liye me room par wapas aa rahi thi tab wo dono ye baatein kar rahe the, mai ye sab tumhe bahot dinno se baatna chahti thi lekin tum priya ke saath busy the, see ram i don't know why she play with your emotions, mujhe laga tumhe ye baat bolni chahiye iss liye Maine.

Neha- thankyou now plz go from here.

Juhi's past- she doing same with rajat like priya, she gave him script n she shout all these and she do very well editing and create a one video, destroyed ram & priya's relation.

PRESENT:

Vik asked- kya puchna hai apko.

Pee- mumma aap sab kisko frnd thi.

Heer- haan.

Pee- phir aap sab ke saath, aise rude behave kiu kiya.

Neha- umm aap bade ho jaaoge tab mai aapko baata dungi.

Pee- but now i am big girl, aap mujhe baata sakte hai.

Neha- aap mere jitne bade ho jaaoge na tab.

Peehu with sad face- ok.

Vik- aap hum sab ka ek kam karoge.

Pee- konsa?

Kady- aisa waisa kam nahi hai na.

Heer- ahh don't worry aisa waisa kuch nahi hai.

Pee- aap bolo, kady didi you don't take a tension.

Vik- ye kam sirf aap akele nahi kar sakte kady ki bhi help leni hogi aapko.

Peehu n kady- ok.

Vik- aapki mumma hum sab se naraz hai.

Pee- hmm, toh hum kya kare ab.

Heer- ummm hum sab ko aapke mumma ke saath baat karni hai.

Pee- mumma biddai tak busy hai but iss Sunday mumma busy nahi hai, we three are going to shopping and Monday morning we back to Delhi.

Vik- ok thankyou aur ek baat.

Pee- first me.

Neha- bolo.

Pee- plz don't told mumma that we both are meet you all. Heer- peehu you are to smart.

Pee- mumma jaisi Jo hun.

Kady- petu chup kar ok.

At evening, priya was busy in some work, men come behind her with coffee mug.

'Ummm coffee' men.

She little scared n turned- you, i am scared.

Vik- aahhh you and scared, kuch naya laga.

Priya- congress.

Vik- coffee lo, bahot saalo baad.

Priya take it- thanks.

Vik- for what congress.

Priya- shaadi with neha.

Vik- hmmm, Mumbai chodkar Delhi kiu aayi.

Priya- tumhe kisne kuch nahi baataya.

Vik- tum acchi tarah se jaanti ho mai tum par vishvas karta hun aur most important wo juhi mere liye kabhi important thi hi nahi aur rahi uss video ki baat Maine wo video kabhi dekha bhi nahi mere aane tak toh ruk jaati mujh par toh trust karke dekhti, bina kuch bole Delhi chali aayi.

Priya only listen him with tears.

Vik- humesh bolta tha jab bhi koi aisi baat ho toh mujhe aa kar bolegi, mai tujh par vishvas karunga naa ke duniya par, har rakhi celebration par naam ke liye rakhi badh liya karta tha aisa tujhe laga hai toh aaj last time bolta hun tu meri sister jaada hai frnd se samjhi.

Priya not control her self n she huged him, in crying tone- i am sorry for all, i m sorry.

Vik rubbing her back- shuu! Shuu! Ek dum chup warna teri sherni ne dekh liya na toh problem ho jaayegi.

Priya in crying tone- kya viky tum bhi.

Vik- what, tumhare jaisi hai, naak pe gussa rehta hai.

Priya wiped her tears- dadi amma hai bilkul.

Vik- hmmm priya sharma kapoor, 'PSK' naam ke liye nafrat, pyar ka dusra naam.

Priya- aisa kuch nahi.

Vik- priya sab se jhooth bol sakti hai, lekin iss viky ke aage bilkul bhi nahi ab Sach.

Priya- pyar ka pata nahi lekin ram k vishvas na karne se wo priya mar gayi, she was died.

Vik- yaha par kab aayi aur aisa kya hua tha.

Priya- tumhe kuch bhi nahi pata hai.

Vik- abhi kaha tha, that i trust you, not on world, so can you.

Priya told everything to vik till there shimla camp and DJ night incidence.

PAST:

DJ night incidence.

Priya on road waiting for cab, coz her scooty puncture, rajat on that way he saw her, he stop his bike.

Raj- you want a lift.

Priya- biwi kuch boli toh.

Raj- kya yaar you always talking with her.

Priya- ya phir bhi permission ke liye.

Raj- chalo ab warna late hoga.

Priya seat on his back seat- kadambari kaisi hai.

Raj- as always fine, next month 6year ki hogi.

Priya- iss bday ko full gang aayegi tere saath Delhi.

Raj- aahhh ofcourse mai khud invite karne wala tha.

Priya- tu invite nahi bhi karta toh bhi hum aate.

Raj- joyti invited you, right!

Priya- humare contacts bahot upar tak hai.

Raj- impossible hai deal karna.

They both reached clg, priya saw ram, heer & neha entrance of clg, she go there.

Priya- hello guys, chalo andar.

Ram- tumne mere saath aisa kiu kiya.

Priya- sorry for late scooty punctured hui iss liye late hua.

Ram- right scooty punctured accha excuse hai, i like it.

Priya- you drunk ram.

Ram- yes i am.

Priya- its ok.

Ram- kab se khel rahi ho mere feeling ke saath.

Priya- kya bol rahe ho, neha, heer tumhe kuch pata hai kya bol raha hai.

Neha- aaj tak priya hum sab samjhte the k tum bahot acchi ho, apne feeling k saath dusro ko feelings ko bhi samjhti ho but we wrong.

Priya- now stop ok, mazak bandh karo.

Ram- mazak hi banna ke rakha hai tumne mera.

Rajat came there- hi guys chalo andar.

Ram- wah tumhari hi Kami thi, one sec, ram hold priya's arm and pulled her with him and stand beside rajat.

Ram- now you look good priya.

Part 13

PAST continue:

Ram- now u look good priya, ab tum dono ko drama karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai mujhe sab pata chal chuka hai.

Raj- ram u drunk hum kal baat karte hai, ok kuch bhi misunderstanding hai usse hum dur karenge.

Ram- aj, abhi issi waqt hi baat hogi.

Heer- priya abhi toh yaar jhooth behave mat karo.

Priya- konsa jhooth, guys kya bolo rahe ho tum sab mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai.

Ram- right saboot n he play the video n show to priya n rajat, after that.

Raj- ram ye video jhooth hai ye Jo kuch bhi mai bol raha hun ye drama ki.

Ram- drama! Drama hi banna diya hai meri zindagi ka.

Priya go to say something but ram cut her middle.

Ram- priya sharma, mai ram kapoor aj tumse saare rishte todta hun, i hate you priya, i brock up with you, i brocked our engagement and he throw his ring, i hate you, you are the worse thing is in my life, i hate you, chali jaao meri zindagi se, n he go from there.

Priya to heer n neha- ye.. Ye video jhooth hai, ye.. Ye.. Maine audition ke liye diya tha.

Neha- plz, thankyou for everything but not anymore.

Priya- neha, neha show her palm n stop her, same like Heer.

PRESENT:

Vik- wo uss din, you show ur palm.

Priya- not for that.

Vik- then what?

Priya- ram k saath saath unn dono ne bhi mere se rishta toda tha, i know that time i was so rude, but peehu ko chot lagi ye call aaya aur mai.

Vik- ohhh, its ok, ummm kuch puchu.

Priya- haan abhi thodi Der pehle kya bole the bhul gaye.

Vik- ok peehu??

Priya- meri aur ram ki.

Vik got another shocked- what?

Priya- haan.

Vik- ye baat mujhe ram ko.

Priya cut in middle- kabhi nahi, mai nahi chahti k ram phir se koi aur doubt kare, Jo hua hai usse mujh tak rahe wahi kafi hai, peehu inn sab se dur hai wahi bahot hai mere liye, same time peehu enter with her phn.

Pee- mumma apka call.

Priya- who.

Pee- rajat uncle, peehu to vik- hi uncle.

Priya go on call.

Vik- hello.

Pee- mumma se kuch baat hui.

Vik- yaha par nahi hum baad me milkar baat karte hai.

Pee- ok done.

Priya come- peehu.

Pee- hmm.

Priya- he is ur maamu, and vikram is my brother.

Pee- hello.

Vik- hello, so frnds and he forword shake his hand, peehu shake hand with him.

Peehu to priya- mumma mai aur kady play station me jaa rahe hai.

Priya- PEEHU kady didi.

Pee- mumma bye, bye maamu, she go from there.

Vik- rajat.

Priya- usski family ki wajah se aaj me PSK hun, joyti usski biwi aur daijaa ki wajah se, jab mai me Mumbai thi aur mujhe pata chala, that i was pregnant, tab Maine ghar choda, maa, papa ko letter likha k mai aap se dur rehna chahti hun, kuch din, mahine, ya saal ke liye, aur uss din joyti ka call aaya usse kuch ajeeb laga iss liye rajat ko mere paas bheja tab sab kuch usse pata chala n mai Delhi me aa gayi.

Vik- neha aur heer tumse baat karna chahte hai.

Priya smile- viky don't feel i m rude or anything coz shayad mai wo pehle wali priya nahi hun ya waqt baddal gaya hai, wo dono mujhse baat karne aayenge aur mera response kuch aur hoga issey accha hai hum waqt par sab kuch chod de.

Vik- tum bahot jaldi buzzi hone wali ho.

Priya- you mean to say neha.

Vik noded in positive.

Priya- congress once again.

Vik- priya once u told ram that peehu ur and his.

Priya cut in middle- issey kya hoga vikram, wo peehu k liye mujhse shaadi karega, peehu ko usske papa mil jaayenge lekin wo baat toh aisi hi rahegi na.

Vik- ok, listen me once.

Priya- go head.

Vik- wo video juhi.

Priya cut in middle- wo video juhi ne edit kiya tha coz wo ram se pyar karti thi aur mujhe ram se dur karna chahti thi, aur wo jeet gayi, ram mujh par trust nahi karta ye prove kar dikhaya.

Vik- sab kuch pata hai.

Priya- haan dusre din hi pata chala.

Vik- ye sab mai mera kam pura kar ke aane ke baad.

Priya- phir se Mumbai kab jaa rahe ho.

Vik- after marriage.

Priya- dinner kare ek saath, all.

Vik- are you sure.

Priya- haan, lekin nayi shuruvat se.

Vik- ram ke saath bhi.

Priya- plz viky.

Vik- ok, take ur time, last one plz.

Priya- yahi puchoge na ke tum dusre din ram se milne gayi thi ya nahi.

Vikram looked with amazement.

Priya smile- next morning i was go to kapoor mansion, bansi kaka k haatho ek letter aaya ussme likha tha, aj ke baad mujhe apni shakal (face) bhi mat dikhana, just go from my life, Jo choti sirf umeed thi wo bhi toot gayi aur priya mar gayi, 1month baad pata chala pregnant hun tab nayi priya zinda hui aur wo sirf peehu ki maa thi, leave it viky.

Vik- i proud of u as my sister.

Priya only smile.

Vik- umm, dinner abhi sab ke saath karogi.

Priya- ahh nahi, biddai k baad, sab ke saath.

Vik- ok, vikram come in his room and find peehu n kady there.

Vik- tum yaha par kaise, tum to play section.

Pee- mumma ko mai Sach bol deti mai vikram maamu k room me jaa rahi hu, aise bolti.

Vik- tu na tere maa se bhi smart hai.

Pee- i know that.

Neha confuse asking- maamu ye kab hua.

Vik- baad me baatat hun, peehu aap ko ek baat puchta hun, usska answer doge.

Peehu noded in yes.

Vik- tumhare papa kaha par hai.

Pee- papa kam ki wajah se bahar hai.

Vik- aap apke papa se mile ho.

Peehu noded in no.

Vik- when ur bday.

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