UPDATE RAYA SS : A Simple Wish Part 18 on page 27 *25-03-15*

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Birdy91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

hey aman ... maine padha h ye shayad pehle.. but reading it again.. Smling 😊

PArt-1 Ahaaan toh it started with priya.. Awwwiiieee her mother baked chocolate cake for hr... cute 😊 hmmm toh joined kapoor industry as a finance intern ahaan promotion bhi hua for her good wrk.. hmmm finance mamanger.. thats cool 😊 awww priya missing her family 😭 Raya in the Same Lift 😳 hulchal huiii jara shor hua 😳 haha they dnt knw about ech othr's presence..😉 kya hoga inka 😛 Lifttt khraaab ... ye aaya na mera fav part 😆 mujhe khraab lift bahut psnd h raya ki 😆 mera bas chale toh unhe vnhi choad dun for HM 😆 light gayiii aur Priya ka ram ram ram ram shuru 😆 ram ji toh bagal m hi hain 😉 awww ram is such a cutie pie.. to make her feel cmfrtable usne torh on kiya phn ka.. thats sweet 😊 and he placed his hand on her 😳 Loved the whole lift wala scene 😳 😳 😳 😳 beautifullyyy written 😳 awww haha bahar aake finally priya realised its none other than her boss Ram Kapoor 😆 jiski andr ram ram ram ram ho rhi thi 😆 Christmas pe half day ki chuttiii.. lalalala but ram and priya are still working.. kitne hardwrking h dono😉 DINNER 😳 Raya ka 1st dinner 😳 😳hmmm toh they become good friends aftr christmas 😊.. aww priya missing her family aftr listening bday songs and seeing the celebration 😭 ram was their for her as a good friend 😊 and here comes the new year.. woouuhhuuu.. HAPPY NEW YEAR 😆 Hmmm toh aftr wishing him she went to her home ... hoying bore and missing her parents 😭 Tadaaannn here he is.. RAAAMMM 😳 😳 HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAKE A WISH 😳 😳 liked the 1st part 😳

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Birdy91

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part-2 awww haha ynha sir kaun h? mae ram hun tumhara dost Ram.. ahemm ahemmm 😳 😳 😳 awww cake cuttt... ram kitrnaa excited h na 😆 bhukkad Golu ram 😆 cutee ahaaann to my friend from a friend.. kya baat kya baat 😳 anddd the gift is Harmonica 😳 superbbb .. heheh ram ko bjana nahi aata but still he is playing it for her to make her feel happy . aarree ata h ram ko play krnaa... awwwiieee Priya is amused to listen the tune he is playing .. uffooo kitna roti h priya.. HEY RaM 😆 awww Priya is super happyyy, loved raya conversation 😊 liked the whole hair fall wala scene.. how ram stopped in his tracks and the way he told her wht she was looking for 😳 haha coffee.. hahah cute scene of life.. liked how ram teased her about their lift scene/// hahhha the drive was silent but unknown to both of them their hearts was talking 😳 😳

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Birdy91

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part-3 Clad in white salwar suit, hair left loose, simple gloss and khole in her eye. She was looking divine. Her chunni was brushing the floor. 😳 Priya 😳 😳 ahemm ahemm aftr seeing priya ram's tone was soft 😆 kya asrrr h bhai 😉 haha ram rocked mr. menon shocked 😆 😆 soo the deal is cracked and ram and priya are gng together 😳 yaar priya kitna sochti hai.. accha hai she is touched with ram's wrds but the questions why is he celebrating with me, m the spcl one nd all.. ufff .. wowww they went to orphanage 😊 hailaaa priya skipped one turn and shittt yayyy bachhh gayiii ram is here to hold her nah... 😳 😳 "I want the time to freeze forever and you be like this in my arms till eternity, want to feel the soft touch of you and the warmth, want to be lost in those dreamy eyes and take those sweet lips and he wanted to taste the nectar, make you rightfully mine...' " 😳 😳 haaaye meriii toh jaan gayiii 😳 😳 awww nicely written the part of mr&mrs Fredrickson 😊

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Birdy91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

baaki baad mein.. abhi need to studyyy vrna mummmyy marengi 😆 😆

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

By looking at the wonderful place where Ram bought Priya has again send her to dream world...
Will be waiting for more to unfold thanx for the pm..

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

sorry for late. actually i forgot to comment.
what a hawai safar it was! and the dolphins...wooow...simply superb, fantastic
thanks for pm. pl continue.

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

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RAYA SS - A Simple Wish Part 8

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This time Ram did not lead the way but walked with Priya hand in hand.. this is my island...' he smiled at her.. after the walked a few yards an attendant was waiting for them with a Jeep.. the jeep raced along the narrow path made out of cutting the rock on the other side.. Priya was numb still registering the fact that she was with Ram Kapoor...Flew in his Helicopter flown by him...on to his Private island.

PART 8

Jeep raced along the stoned paved way...he was driving with ease...she glanced at him from the side of her eyes.. pretending to see the view..The way he drove the machine was as if they talked to him..obeyed his command..

he is a conjurer who breathe life into the machine and his mere touch make them come alive..but what her heart wanted..his touch on her..to feel how it felt when the person you like..you love touches you.. creases your cheeks with his soft palm..cups your face...looks deep into your eyes..when the only thing you wish is to get drowned in them and get lost..never to be found again...his lips whispering those sweet word in your ears..kissing the ears lobs...planting a soft kiss on the forehead..moving down and kissing the emptiness of the eyes..and his figures tracing her lips before he could make them his...taste the sweet taste of love...

The jeep bounced over a side boulder..Priya almost bounced off her seat and landed on Ram's chest..His arms automatically tightened around her.. woo be careful..Priya the road is a bit bumpy..' his gazed moved from the road to her..he eyes lay only on him.. Priya realized her state and sat up hastily.. she answered him averting the gaze.. Yeah I am fine' the air was blowing her hair..they fell on her face..Ram automatically moved to tug them behind her ears.. all he wanted was to see her and nothing... They exchanged an awkward smile..

The jeep halted after an few minutes..outside an artistic house..Priya was enchanted to see something like this..it was just like those she had seen in fairy tale books or seen in the bakery shop..the ginger bread house..but this was classy..it reflect the taste and class of the owner.. Ram waited for Priya to observe the beauty of the house and absorb its calmness..She tuned to him..he was smiling at her.. This was a gift..for my parents on their anniversary...but..' he paused She looked at him with questionable eyes But what' but my mother said she will not take it as gift..but keep it in her safe custody for her daughter-in-law..' he smiled sheepishly... so did you find... her a daughter-in-law' she asked without thinking once what she was speaking.. Ram scratched his hair No not yeah' and opened the fenced door.

Priya had a mixed feeling as he followed him inside the garden..'not found yet..should I be happy that can that lucky person be me..or not found one..he does not like me...but why suddenly then get me here and say about..' C'mon...or you want me to carry you inside the house like they do in movies' Ram voice echoed in the area..She was still blank..all sort of question were popping up..

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PART 8

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Ram think Priya is special one as he bought her in the house that has memories of his childhood with his Mom. She is also feeling like a queen around him now wat a twist wat happen to him. hope she is fine. Continue soon and thanx for the pm...

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AdhwikPriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

fantastic,,,,amazing,,,what happend to ram?I think he is fine,when they confessing?

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

aye yaar what is this? itni acchi chal rahi thi story. ye brech me ram ko kya ho gaya? pl yaar aisa kuch mat katna. let their life be smooth without any difficulty. plzz
thanks for pm. pl continue.