UPDATE RAYA SS : A Simple Wish Part 18 on page 27 *25-03-15*

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rags06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Nice update...

Please continue soon...

Thanks for PM😛😛

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Mitwaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Nice update. Lekin jaldi confess krvavo na raya se. Thank's 4 pm. Continue soon...,

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Suriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

nice.. Emotional priya.. Lovely update..

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Priya was so worried after not seeing Ram but as he emerged from Ocean as hero she lost all control of her emotion and hugged him. Wat emotional scene between two lover who yet to realised that they are in love. Continue soon and thanx for the pm

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reshak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Wow super update
waiting for their confession

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

RAYA SS - A Simple Wish Part 10

RECAP :

Ram its now or never buddy...just do it...just tell her what you feel for her...' He took a deep breath...and turned and held the handle... The metal felt hot...as it it will melt or burn his hands...he turned it and moved inside calling her name... Priya...'

PART 10

Ram peeped into the room standing in between the gap of the door and room...it was light lightly by the dim table lamp...at one corner of the room...
he tried to keep his noise low...pushing the door a bit further he entered...but it was empty...he looked around...the balcony door was still open... Might be there' Ram murmured himself and walked with soft steps towards the door...but to his surprise it was also desolate only her book lay on the chair...pages ruffling by the wind...he was confused...

where would she be at this time...' hint of concerns traced his face and his brows were arched in concern... he walked past the bed room...his eye fell on the closed washroom door...bit of hope filled him... may be there...' He stood just outside the door and took a deep breath and knocked at the door... Priya are you there...' And waited...but no answer came from the other side...he was getting impatience...and held the knob turning it...he opened the door...but it was also empty... He was now getting worried...'where would had she gone at this hour of night'... Ram searched his trousers pocket and fished his phone to call her...

But to his bad luck... the phone was ringing in the room...only.. he traced the ring and reached her phone...it flashed his face... With My Tycoon'... But it was not time to smile for Ram...he was getting more and more desperate to find her...as she was new to this place and the tides at night can become dangerous to be on the beach...

He picked up her phone and pocketed it...and hurried out of the room still calling her name... Priya!!!' Down the stairs into the hallways... The same result awaited him...she was not there...he checked the kitchen... May be went for a glass of water...'Ram mummed as he made his way to the kitchen... But it was also vacant...His heart was growing heavy with the passing of the second...not finding her...

He ran his hand through his hair and down his neck...thinking what to do...The only place left to search was the beach...taking a deep breath trying to ease is raving nerves he hurried outside the beach house... Jogging for a few distance he called for her... Priya...!!!!!' in return he heard the sound of the waves chasing to each other or against the rocks... His heart was beating fast... Unconsciously his heart was praying for her wellbeing...
It was dark...only the moonlight light the beach...Ram scampered a bit further... He called again... Priya!!!!!' his voice returned back to him...his throat was now filled and tears dwelling up in his eyes...still jogging he was looking for her...

He was now quite far from the house... due to running his breath was heavy...his searched each inch of the shore that his eyes lay on... He covered his mouth with his hand and gasped for air... But his eyes still looking for her...

And as if Lord answered his silent prayer...he spotted Priya...He rubbed his tears with the back of his palm...and ran...

She was lying unconsciously on the beach...She was half wet by the waves...Ram lost no seconds and ran as fast as his feet's could take him...He crashed into the sand beside her... Took her in his lap...caressing her hair... Priya wake up...wake up...' He slightly patted her cheeks to bring her back but she lay like a stone in his arms...She was cold...he rubbed her hands to warm them... Priya please wake up...na please...'he was pleading her...with broke voice...He hugged her bring her against his chest...but she was the same no change... He was getting annoyed with himself as he could not think of anything...He punched the sand and his hands hit his trouser pockets...

Taking out his phone he called his pilot to get the helicopter ready...without even sliding the red button her threw the phone back inside is pocket and lifted Priya in his arms...and moved fast towards the helipad... As he hurried he kept on repeating ... All will be ok...I promise you...just be with me...just be with me...I will not let anything happen to you... '

Ram climbed up the helicopter...indicating the pilot to take off the very minute...The pilot obeyed his words and the machine left the ground...Ram got fresh towel from the emergency cabin...and stated drying her...Rubbing her hands and feet's trying to bring back the bodyheat...he caressed her hair...as he dried it...tucking the strand of hair behind her ears...

Ram held her close to his heart...wrapping her like a baby...in order to transfer his body heat to her...he kept rubbing her feet's and hand...timely patting her cheeks... Pleading her to open her eyes...

FULL HERE

PART 10

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ic_2000
Wonderful update.

Thnks so much

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

supetb update. thanks for pm.
rams concern n love for priya is very well written.
pl continue

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Dhristi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Very emotional tha but loved it pls continue soon

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AdhwikPriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

oh god priya is ill,,stress attack!!!!!Ram priya ka khayal rakhega ye to hum jante bhi te par itna caring,concern se khayal karraha hai,i love Rams charecter.And thanks for the pm