UPDATE RAYA SS : A Simple Wish Part 18 on page 27 *25-03-15* - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
fantastic! amazing expressions. what happend to ram? I hope he is fine & don't make it difficult for Priya. She needs all the love of Ram, let them confess soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update!!!
Plzz. Continue soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
romatic update.. But end of the update frightening me..
Thanks fr pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
thanks for the pm
what happened to ram
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Please continue soon..
Thanks for PM😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update yaar i hope ram will be fine. Thank's 4 pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RAYA SS - A Simple Wish Part 9

RECAP

she prayed as she moved into the water..stroked the waves..to feel him or to grab him as soon as she sighted him..but there was non..he did not appear..
she dug herself on the wet sand..covered her face in her palms..and cried..cried like the world's ended..she cursed herself for killing him.. what ever she loved with true heart she lost it she was jinxed..god took all her beloved..1st his family and now Ram...

PART 9

She dug into the wet sand and buried her face in her palms...she could not register what just happened...will she be not able to see him again...is he lost forever...she did not want the answers to these questions as her heart knew they were terrifying...

she sobbed endlessly...her eyes were redden by the bizarre cry...she gathered herself for the last time to look into the endless ocean...and for the last time with a hope to see him..though the burden of losing him was over powering her optimism...



she lifted her head slowing and removed her hands over her eyes even slowing...but all she could see was the blue ocean...he was not there...her heart become heavy...

they prayed silently for his safe return...she looked it all the direction swaying her head to and fro... Her mind accepted that he was gone...but her heart was still filled with hope...she looked up to the heavens folded her and prayed... And then opened her eyes...


There he was emerging from the ocean as the ruler of Atlantis...the god of water world... Poseidon...trickle of water flowed down his body and he came to the surface...they were shining over his masculine molded form under the day sun...

He brushed his hair back...his black vest was stuck to his body making an outline of his torso and upper body...and waded through the currents towards the beach...


She could not believe that he was there...all this time she thought he was gone...but he was very much there...alive and walking towards her...Priya ran into the water...not bothering about the dress he got for her...she only wanted to touch him...

and be sure to herself that it was him...and not her illusion...she ran cutting through the waves...and clinged to him...she was happy to feel him..his warmth against her...hid her face in his chest and cried severely...


Ram did not know what was wrong with her...he grabbed her and walked upto the beach...at the beach her held her, comforted her by creasing her slowing stroking her back...'what happened Priya? why are you crying..?' but there was no answer she was still sobbing deeply and her clutch on him grew stronger...

Ram lifted her face and asked looking at her swollen eyes... Priya tell me what is wrong why are you crying...? Unless you tell me how will I understand...' between her sob Priya tried to answer... when I ...saw your ...Sail boat... crashing...'

Her sob become deep again... and you...crashing with...it...I ...I thought that I...lost you...' She again hugged him tightly...


Ram smiled at her innocence and a bubble of joy bursted inside him...realizing that she was concerned about his life...she did not want to lose him...this made him feel special... silly...you...' she creased her and replied... each time I come here I have to do this...i just love playing with the wind and fighting against the water...and by this girl's are impressed' and

he winked... Priya was dumbfounded ...'Your hobby...your hobby...' She hit him hard on his chest... hey that hurts'...'good you deserve it...' she pushed him and stood infront of him her hands crossed on her chest... and what all you like to do to impress girls Mr.James Bond...fly a helicopter...

oh you already do that...jump of a burning building...slide down an avalanche...what all you do...' she counted the things on her finger... Her face as flowing but coz of the anger on his stupid stunt which all most killed her inside... is there anything that is left...and you are yet to try...'


Ram was enjoying her authority on him...he was liking that there is someone who is concerned about him...someone who loves him...and not his money... He tried to hide his smile and mimicked to think...scratching his temple... well let me think...


Flying done...boat done...sliding down an avalanche did last year...and jumping down a burning building...nice thought I will try later...' He was counted on his finger imitating Priya... She was more angry on this and again hit him... stop it yaar...' He replied rubbing his shoulder...a mischievous smile grew on his face...'well there is one thing I have not done today and I will take you with me...this time on this...'

As he finished one of the attendant came and informed him that is jet ski was ready...Ram turned to face Priya with an evil and naughty grin... don't even think about...i am not going with you out in the see...' Oh so you are challenging me...'

he rubbed his hand calmly... fine..you have two choices...either come on you own...or you know Ram Kapoor has never lost a challenge...' and he winked... Try me... and I am not going with you on that Jet Ski of your...' Ram faked a sigh...with the grin still playing on his face... then lady you leave no choice infront of me...' and he ran after Priya...



PART 9
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
wow.. superb update. now pl make them confess their love for each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice update,,,next kya hoga?Ram confess karega ki nahi and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesome pls make them confess their love

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