RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago
what happend to u?why r u not updating...plzzz update soon...😭😭
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PART-18


Juhu Beach,

After the stressful day Priya needs some fresh air. This is the best to throw out all stress. Priya and Pihu enjoy eating panipuri whereas Rajat is watching them.

Pihu:- Wow mumma yeh toh bahut yummy hai

Priya:- Meine kaha the na...then she looks at Rajat and said "Sir aap bhi aayiye na taste toh karke dekiye"

Rajat:- Nahi Priya tum dono hi enjoy karo.

Here Ram followed them and reach Juhi beach. He is watching Priya, Pihu and Rajat from the distance.

Priya:- meri baat maaniye Sir...yeh five star mein milne wale jaisa nahi hai. Yahan ki baat hi kuch aur hai.

Rajat:- Achha baba lo mein ek khata hoon and he took one panipuri from Priya's plate. Ram can see all are enjoying and are very happy together. Somewhere he doesn't like it and he cannot see it anymore. He started the engine and drove back to office.

Ram came back to his cabin, throws the car key on the table and sat on his chair. He reminisce the flashback.

Ram was fully drunk and he came back to his room and shouting Priya's name.

Ram:- Priyaaa...Priyaaa

Krishna:- Itne zor se chillao matt Ram. Priya ghar mein nahi hai.

Ram:- Nahi hai...kahan gayi hai

Krishna:- Priya yeh ghar chodkar chali gayi hai. Bahut pee chuke ho abb tum bhi so jao.

Ram(in a drunken tone):- Chali gayi toh jaane do. Muje koi farak nahi padta. Achha hua abb usse dekhkar dimag kharab toh nahi hoga.

Next Morning,

Ram woke up from sleep. His head is spinning because of yesterday night hangover. He presses his head with his both hands and called Priya but bansi kaka came with a glass of lemon juice.

BK:- saab maam ne kaha ki aapko de de...aapka sirdard kam hoga.

Ram:- Teek hai tum jao...he then remember yesterday KK told him Priya left the house.

After freshen up Ram came down. Amarnath stops him and asked "Aage kya karne ka irada hai"

Ram:- Matlab...office aur office se ghar.

Amarnath:- kyun iss beach tumhe bar nahi jaana apne dosto ke saat.

Ram:- Maa mein jaa raha hoon...saying this he left.

Ram POV

"Aaj itne saalo baat meine Priya ko dekha who bhi apne pati aur bachhe ke saat. Mera attet(past) mere saamne tha. Priya ke chale jaane ke baad meine usse dhundne ki bahut koshish ki lekin aaj pata chala mere papa ne hi use ghar se nikalne mein madat ki thi. Meine Priya ko apne dimag se hi nahi apne ghar se apne kamre se bhi nikal diya tha lekin aaj woh mere saamne ek kaamyaab insaan banker kadi hai jo muje yeh ehsaas dila raha hai mein kitna haara hua insaan hoon. Not in personal life but in professional life also I'm a failure.
Priya ke jaane ke baad meine hi business ki saari responsibility apne haat mein li aur kuch galat faislo ki wajah se mere haat se sab kuch fisalta gaya. Tab pata chala ki aadmi ki pehchaan tab tak hi hoti hai jab tak uska naam hota hai. Mere dosth muje pehchaanne se inkar kar diye aur issi beech Kush meri zindagi mein aa gaya. Mein puri tarah se tutt chukka tha uss waqt sirf maa-papa hi mere saat mushkil gadi mein kade hue the. Maa sahi kehti hai mein jo bhi Priya ke saat kiya uski saza Kush ko mill rahi hai...His eyes filled with tears.

Aaj itne saalo baad mere saamne Priya kadi thi lekin eisa lag raha tha ki iss Priya se mein pehli baar mill raha hoon. She moved on in her life lekin mein aaj bhi wahi kada hoon. Priya ko aage badna bhi chahiye afterall meine jo kuch bhi kiya ek jaanwar hi kar sakta hai.


Lekin mein kyun nahi usse kisi aur ke saat dekh nahi paa raha jabki meine usse kabhi bhi pyar hi nahi kiya. Kyun aaj meine Priya ka peecha kiya. Kya dekhna chahta tha kyun muje eisa lagta hai ki Priya ko mere saat hona chahiye jabki mein janta hoon yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta aur na hona chahiye. Kyun Priya kyun tum wapas aayi. Pihu ko dekhkar eisa kyun lagta hai ki mein usse pehle se hi juda hua hoon. Mein Priya se ek baar milna chahta hoon, baat karna chahta hoon. Apni ki hui galti ke mafi maangana chahta hoon. He closes his eyes in shame.

On the other side,

Rajat:- Aaj ki meeting kaisi thi aur tumhe kya lagta hai hum kab tak kaam shuru kar sakte hai.

Priya first think about Ram the after little pause she said "Its not so easy Rajat. Fund ki problem toh hai hi lekin kaam shuru karne ke liye machineries bhi nahi hai. Waqt toh lagne wala hai.

Rajat:- toh kya socha hai aage kya karna hai.

Priya:- Kuch socha hai...mein baad mein baat karti hoon iss baare mein.

Rajat:- Ok

Priya:- Mein fresh hoti hoon aap bhi fresh ho jaayiye. Dinner ke liye milte hai tabhi batati hoon aage ka plan.

Rajat:- Meri koi help chahiye toh batao..

Priya:- offcourse chahiye...she smiles and excuse from there.

Rajat:- Toh dinner par milte hai..byee...and he also left.

Pihu:- Mumma mein thodi der cartoon dekhu.

Priya:- Teek hai Pihu aap thodi der TV dekho mumma bath lekar aati hai. Dur se dekhna OK

Pihu:- Teek hai mumma...saying this she switch on the TV and watches her favourite cartoon program.

Priya go to take bath. After bath she feels fresh and rejuvenated. She also gave bath to Pihu and both are watching cartoon together.

Around 8'oclock she hears the door bell.

Priya goes and opens the door. As expected Rajat is standing at the door. She called Rajat inside. Both sat in the couch.

Rajat:- Pihu kahan hai

Priya:- woh ander TV dekh rahi hai

Rajat nodded...

Priya:- Aapki Jyothi se baat hui

Rajat:- Yesss...abhi call kiya tha aur usne kehne ko bola hai ki she is missing you

Priya smiles and said "Jyothi se keh do ki mein kal hi wapas aa rahi hoon"

Rajat become confused and asked Kya matlab????

Priya looks down and said "Sir meine decide kar liya hai ki mein kal hi wapas jaa rahi hoon...Mein nahi ruk sakti"

Rajat:- kal hi jaaogi matlab...abhi toh deal bhi sign nahi hua toh abb achanak se kya ho gaya.

Priya:- Sir mein chahti hoon ki mere badle aap yahan ka kaam sambhale.

Rajat:- lekin tum jana kyun chahti ho

Priya:- Mujse nahi hoga Rajat Sir. Mein Ram ko aur face nahi kar sakti. Aaj mein hi janti hoon ki meine kaise Ram ke saat kaam kiya lekin abb aur nahi. Mein Ram se na hi milna chahti hoon aur na yeh chahti hoon ki Ram Pihu se mile. Ram ko pata chale ki Pihu unki beti hai usse pehle mein wapas jana chahti hoon. Please Rajat Sir. Sirf ek sign ke liye mein yahan nahi rukna chahti.

Rajat:- Priya baat sirf sign karne ki nahi hai. Lekin kab tak tum eise...kya kiya Ram ne...tumpar gussa kiya...koi eisi baat boli jo tumhe pasand nahi aayi...kya usne Pihu ke baare mein tumse kuch pucha...Priya...kab tak tum bhagogi ...kab tak !!! life mein kaafi problems aayenge toh kya tum har problems ko face karne ke bajaaye bhagte jaaogi...problem se bhaagne se kuch nahi hoga woh badti hi jaayegi...tumhe Problems ko face karna seekhna hoga...mein nahi janta ki Ram aur tumhare beech kya problems hua lekin aaj meine jiss Ram ko dekha woh bilkul bhi tumhari soch ka Ram nahi hai...Aaj jab Ram Pihu se milne aaye the toh...

Priya cut him in middle and asked "ek minute Ram Pihu se mile. Ram ne pihu se baat ki. Kya Ram ko sab pata chal gaya. Aapne bataya Ram ko ki Pihu unki beti hai...aapne mujse kaha tha ki aap Pihu ka khayal rakenge..phir aapne Ram ko Pihu se milne kaise diya...kahiye Sir"

Rajat:- Ek minute Priya...haan yeh sach hai ki Ram Pihu se mile...lekin uss waqt Pihu so rahi thi...Ram shayad koi call attend karne bahar aaya the toh usne pihu ko kamre mein sote hue dekh liya hoga...Mein ek call attend karne bahar gaya tha taaki Pihu ko disturb na ho...jab mein call attend karke wapas aaya toh dekha ki Ram Pihu ke paas tha...woh sirf Pihu ko dekh raha tha. Ram ne mujse kuch nahi pucha aur na hi meine Ram ko kuch bataya. Woh toh bass wahan kada tha kyunki usse laga ki Pihu kamre mein akeli hai aur kisi ko wahan nahi dekhkar darr jaayegi. He just concern for her..that's it.

Priya:- yahi toh mein nahi chahti Rajat

Rajat:- Kyun nahi chahti ho Priya. Tum nahi chahti ki Pihu ko woh sab kuch mile jo har bachhe ko milta hai...apne maa-baap ka pyar ek saat. Tum sirf apne baare mein sochkar Pihu se uska haq kyun cheenna chahti ho.

Priya:- Kyunki Pihu sirf meri beti hai. Ram ka Pihu par koi haq nahi banta hai.

Rajat:- Eisa nahi hai Priya. Agar baat sirf tumhari rehti toh mein kuch nahi kehta lekin yahan baat Pihu ki bhi hai. Hame koi haq nahi banta ki hum kisi bachhi se uske baap ka pyar cheene sirf issliye ki uss insan ne tumhare saat kuch galat kiya tha. Galtiyaan insano se hi hoti hai aur maafi bhi insan hi karte hai.

Priya:- Ram ki galti ki koi maafi nahi hai.

Rajat:- eisi koi galti nahi jiski maafi na mile..haan Ram ki galtiyaan shayad badi hogi toh saza bhi badi hi hogi. Lekin aaj jiss Ram ko meine dekha hai na muje lagta hai ram ko uski galti ki saza mill chuki hai.

Priya:- mein nahi janti sir mein sirf yahan se jana chahti hoon...please

Rajat sighed and said "teek hai Priya agar tumhara yahi decision hai toh mein tumhe nahi rokunga...yahan ka saara kaam bhi sambhal lunga...mein kal hi tumhare wapas jaane ka intezaam karta hoon".

Dinner goes off silently.

On the other side in Kapoor Mansion,

On dinner table

KK:- Abhi tak Ram aaya nahi aap zara ek baar usse phone karke puchiye na kahan hai

Amar:- Mein phone kar raha hoon lekin woh utha nahi raha.

Kush becomes worried and sad.

KK:- Kush beta papa aa jaayenge aap pareshaan matt ho...ok

Kush nodded his head.

KK:- Achha aap jaldi se dinner complete karo.

Dinner is half done when Ram entered.

KK:- Ram itni der ho gayi hai...kahan reh gaya tha

Dadi:- Puttar aa beta jaldi se khana kha le

Ram:- Muje bhook nahi hai dadi...mein kamre mein jaa raha hoon.

KK:- arre eise kaise bhook nahi hai...khakar aaya hai kya

Ram(rudely):- Ek time kuch khaya nahi toh muje kuch hone nahi wala. He paused and said "sorry maa muje sachhi bhook nahi hai"

Amar:- Ram ruko...muje tumse aaj ke meeting ke baare mein kuch baat karni hai.

Ram:- Kya baat karni hai dad. Sab kuch toh aapke mutabik ho raha hai. Mujse abb kya puchna hai. Kya karna hai kaise karna sab aapko pata hoga issliye muje iss deal ke baare mein aapse koi baat nahi karni. Mein kamre mein jaa raha hoon.

KK:- Yeh sab kya ho raha hai. Ram itne gusse mein hai. Aaj aapki meeting thi na kisi Singapore based company ke saat. Kya hua hai...kuch batayiye na.

Amar heave a sigh and said "Teek hai Krishna mein sab batata hoon and he said everything right from when Priya left this house to business meet. KK and dadi becomes shocked.

KK:- Priya yahan hai..kaisi hai woh

Dadi:- Amar puttar muje Priya se milna hai abhi

Amar:- Abhi issi waqt...maa abhi nahi mein kal aapko lekar jaata hoon. After little pause he continue ek aur baat hai jo meine aap sabko nahi batayi hai

KK:- Kya

Amar:- Priya akeli nahi hai. Ram aur Priya ki ek beti hai..PIHU

KK and dadi are shocked. They are really delighted with the news.

Kk:- Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai.

Amar:- Haan Krishna Ram aur Priya ki ek beti hai aur muje bhi yeh baat abhi pata chali jab mein usse mila. Lekin iske liye Priya ko galat nahi maanta hoon afterall Ram ne jo uske saat kiya uska yeh karna banata hi hai aur ram ko yeh bhi nahi pata ki pihu uske aur priya ke beti hai..

KK(In choking voice):- Aap itni badi baat humse kaise chupa sakte hai.

Amar:- Krishna Priya nahi chahti ki Ram ko iske baare mein pata ho.

KK:- Priya ne bol diya aur aapne sunn liya. Amar Pihu hamari poti hai Ram ki beti hai. Ram se Priya ki shaadi hui hai usse bhi Pihu par pura haq banta hai. Hum Ram se itni badi baat nahi chupa sakte.

Amar:- Ho kya gaya hai tumhe. Mein manta hoon aaj ke Ram mein aur uss waqt ke Ram mein bahut farak hai lekin iska yeh matlab nahi ki hum Ram ki saari galtiyon ko nazar andaaz kar de aur rahi baat maafi ki woh hum nahi Priya decide karegi.

KK:- Muje yeh sab nahi pata Amar mein bass itna janti hoon ki Pihu Ram ki beti hai aur Ram ko iss baat ka pata chalna chahiye.

Amar:- Nahi Krishna koi bhi Ram se kuch nahi kahega. Aur tumhe kya nahi pata tumhari aankhon ke saamne Kush hai. Jo priya ke saat hua wahi Kush ki maa ke saat bhi hua bass itna farak hai ki Priya inn sab se nikal gayi lekin...Amar stop...his eyes filled with tears. Ram ko pata chalna hai toh usse zaroor pata chal jaayega baaki tumhari iccha Krishna; tum samajdaar ho. Saying this he left.

Priya is crying loudly and pleading to Ram. But without listening Ram held her and slap her hardly on her face and rip off her clothes. He took her to the bed and throws her and came on top of her. Priya is continuously begging but without listening he assault her and enter in her. Priya screamed in pain and Ram also woke up from sleep shouting Priya's name.

Ram:- Priyaaa...No...No...He was fully sweated and breathing heavily. He takes the jug of water from the side table and gulped it one go. He is still huffing roughly. Im sorry Priya...very sorry. Mein kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paaunga. Im sorry..saying this he silently cry letting out his heart.

Precap:- Kush and Pihu becomes friends.

Ram came to know that Rajat is not the father of PIHU

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Has ram married anybody after Priya left him and is kush his biological son?
What happened to KK and how can be so selfish?
Pl continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so nice update dear,,,is kush Ram ka saga beta hai kya?pls yar aisa mat kar,,,RaYa ke beech me aur koi Ladki nahi chahiye plsss,,,,Continue soon dher mat karna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb dii waiting for Raya to fall in love n pihu n ram bond na also in future will priya accept kush as his child plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
waiting for the next update
good going..
ram realized his mistakes it seems...
still ram should feel bad n hurt abt his deeds
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priya is still hiding the truth about pihu to Ram
Glad that AK think of his daughter in law but who is this kush and how is he related to kapoors
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Posted: 10 years ago
getting stick to the story ... Continue Soon...
Ram has a Son !! i still have a doubt on it ...
no chances of The lead characters meeting .. neither i wish so
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb!! ram is getting his punishments.. he is in a miserable state!! and priya is trying to run away from the problems..!! rajat being a good friend is advising her...hmm...amazing..next soon plzzz neelll...dont let us hanged on the bar!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too good.. Please continue soon..

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