RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Dear wonderful readers out here .. Im going to post a story on RaYa .
Basically This story belongs to One of my Online friend . Im not going to reveal the name until she is okay to reveal her name .

If anybody knows her name just please keep quiet . dont mention anywhere .

Coming to story .
Ram kapoor is shown as spoilt brat here . so please bear with it until he changes
If any body don't like the story or concept , please don't read .

Read as a fiction story . Complete fiction story and read it as like that only .

If you want to voice out anything your opininon.Please drop a pm to me .
have a healthy discussion here . Thank you for cooperating with me ..


Here is LIL INTRODUCTION .


Authour : Anonymous 😛


Ram:- rich and spoil brat only son of amaranth Kapoor...He never serious about his life. He spends lots of money for useless things...his friends always provoked him for doing all the wrong things...his friends is also with him for money. He likes to spend time in Club, parties etc. He never gave respect to anybody especially womens...He believes womens are made for his enjoyment. Only person he scared of is his dadi...She wanted to get him married and settled and becomes responsible. She believes agar Ram ki shaadi ho jaati hai toh he becomes responsible...lekin Ram hamesha shaadi ki baat taal jata tha. He never took interest in business.

Priya:- sensible and soft person...she has only one dream...she wanted to independent and get away from her family...her family...mother shipra, her stepfather shiny and her step brother Karthik. Pyar ke naam se iss ghar usse kuch nahi mila...maa se lekar uska chotta bhai sab usspar chillate hai, gussa karte hai aur maarte bhi hai. Priya ko kuch bhi karne ka freedom nahi tha...only thing she can do is she can continue her studies because marne se pehle Priya ke father ne eisa clause banaya tha jisse who apna studies continue kar sakti hai. Priya janti hai ki uski shaadi kabhi nahi hogi warna saari properties unke haato se chali jaayegi. All torture Priya very badly.


Im so sorry , I may not drop PMS so please check for the title whenevr i updatae will change the title bar . Thank you ..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

PART-1 : PAGE-3

PART-2 ;PAGE- 7

PART-3 PAGE-13

PART-4 PAGE-19

PART-5 PAGE-24

PART-6 PAGE-28

PART-7 PAGE -33

PART-8 PAGE-39

PART-9 PAGE- 43

PART-10 PAGE-51

PART-11 PAGE-58

PART-12 PAGE-65

PART-13 PAGE-69

PART-14 PAGE-79

PART-15 PAGE-87

PART-16 PAGE-90

PART-17 PAGE-94


PART-18 PAGE-99

PART-19 PAGE-102

PART-20 PAGE-107

PART-21 PAGE-113

PART-22 PAGE-117

PART-23PAGE-119

PART-24 PAGE-122

PART-25 PAGE-143

PART-26PAGE-145


PART-27 PAGE-147



Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seem to very interesting
different concept
Ram spoilt brat and Priya seem to be vulnerable
waiting fro the first chapter dear
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. Eagarly waiting to read next part so continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Seem to very interesting

different concept
Ram spoilt brat and Priya seem to be vulnerable
waiting fro the first chapter dear
continue soon



Thank you so very much aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARUJI

Interesting start. Eagarly waiting to read next part so continue soon.



Thank you so much 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnk u neel di for posting..
pls aapki frnd ko batayiye k 😉
its very interesting start...!!
complt different story..
and good title...
ram n priya are two different poles...
kehte haina opposite attracts let see kya hota hai..😛
feeling bad for priya 's situation...
waiting for the next,,.


Edited by jodude - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story witha different concept...
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Accha neel, at last u posted
well its interesting to be read as snake n mice raya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept n introduction pls update part 1 soon

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