RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 59

tooo guuud..itna achha aap kaise likhte ho neel di. i love u so much for writing this story in this way.

ram ko saja milni hi chahiye. let priya hate him. then only he can understand k foced love ya s*x kya ka natija hota hai

main to kehti hu k pihu ko b ram se door rakkho. let him suffer. he should never get love from priya as a wife and pihu as a daughter.

let him suffer more n more n more.

jaldi update karna ha next part. plzZ.

finally i read in one go..

congrats for completing 100 pages.

jaldi se update karo plzzz

congratson completing 100 pages. very nice update, looking fwd to raya scenes and please update soon..

congrates to complets 100 pages,,,,,update pls

congrats for completing 100 pages🥳plzzz update soon.

Part 18
kahin dard bhari nigahein hai, toh kahin bechaini hai, ghutan hai.
kahin dar hai toh , kahin bahot saare sawaal.
kahin khushiyan laut aane ki bhavukta hai tih,
kahi khushiyan choot jaane ka darr.
Pihu the utmost priority in priya's life who had made her smile, made her beoieve life is beautiful in all odds, made her forget her pain and the insecurity, fear of loosing her, is equal to death. Above all as a mother she wants to protect her, yesbshe n she has d only right on pihu.
j ram k jeevqn me ek realisation ki kiran banke aaya hua khush ,kahin andheroan se nikalta hua roshni hai.
ram ko circumstances ne bhale hi change kiya ho, par fir bhi ussko aaj bhi priya k samne haara hua nhi dikhna hai?
is he really loving her? He should b happy , at least he shouldn't feel low .
yes if he has feelings for yes he has alrights to get Jealous, he has every right to follow her.
Grand parents khush hai gud life me kuch toh khushi ayi.
khush kiska beta hai?


Very well described ram's self realisation

Beautiful update...
good sign ram has changed n he was feeling 4 priya
waiting for RaYa convo... continue sooon...

koi kuch b kahe but i really dont want k pihu ram ke saath ho. ram dont deserve any love.not from priya as wife and from pihu as a daughter. coz ram ko apne kiye ki saja milni hi chahiye. sakt se sakt sajaa.
neel di jaldi update karo plz