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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Nice update
Every thing happen in Priya's life very fast
hope When Ram know about truth, he fall for Priya
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Very intereesting part
Ram did wrong by forcing sharma's but glad nuts And Kartik are married
Great Krishnaji and shipra are friends now and than again Ram blackmailed Priya into the marriage instead of listening her
Seems Ram is getting very jealous by seeing Ronit and Priya together
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Read all the parts in a go ... n i loved it ...
its superbly amazing ...
Looking forward to the next part ..
Plz PM me the next time u update ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: zeylanica


Read all the parts in a go ... n i loved it ...

its superbly amazing ...
Looking forward to the nextpart ..
Plz PM me the next time u update ..




thanx and i add u in my buddy list so next time defently give u pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


Hey aman just while you are writing you are giving FB [ flashback ] na
give same like that
when present comes

just write present

simple

Hope you understand ..

yOU Just try ..You will understand while posting


or you can write past with different font colour nd present with a different one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for those member who pm me and i m not repling just bcoz IF rule i have only 10 message in 24 hours sorry for that plz after 24 hours i will pm u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

sorry for those member who pm me and i m not repling just bcoz IF rule i have only 10 message in 24 hours sorry for that plz after 24 hours i will pm u



its kk we cn understand
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89


Here is part 6 frendz

Sorry for late

And in my last part so many ppl confused in Flashback and Present part so in this part Flashback in Blue and rest in Black color


In KM

RAM continue his work on laptop.

IN restaurant

Ronit : Fir kya hua...

priya look him confusly

Ronit : I mean Tum ram se mili tab kya hua..???

Priya : Hmm hum dono Hotel Lotus Town me mile



Flashback :

Hotel Lotus Town :

RAM takes his seet and waits for priya

After 15 min priya came and before she take place

Ram : u r late...

Priya : i m stuck in traffic not my fault.

Ram : ok have seat..waiter...

Ram : kya logi

Priya : Ginger tea.

Ram to waiter :1 ginger tea and 1 pinacolata...

Ram : tedhi hai...

Priya : what ???

Ram : apki bindi...tedhi hai

Priya : ohhh sorry and
Priya apni bindi theek karne lagti ram use instrruct karta hai thoda left..
Thoda or thoda sa niche but bindi puri sahi nhi hoti so Ram: if u dont mind may i...

Priya first hesistate but then there is no option and ram like a gentleman priya ki bindi sahi kar deta hai and kahta Perfect...

Actually jab tak koi chiz perfect nahi hoti na mujhe irritation hone lagti hai

Priya looks him and make faces

Ram : priya...i mean Ms Sharma...aap to janti hai ki hum yha kyu aaye hai...i mean...

Priya : look Mr. RAM KAPOOR I Came here to say NO...i mean I cant marry u...

Ram : ye main janta hu but may i know the reason.

Priya : Reason...are Jis insaan ka Ego uske size se bada ho wo mujhse reason puch rha h...

Ram : what u mean by size...tumne mujhe mota kaha...

Priya : maine nahi par aapne khud apne aap ko mota kaha.


Ram : Hello Ms biscuit jaisi kamar wali main bhi tumse shadi karne ke liye mara nahi ja rha hu tum koi apsara nahi ho are jise bindi dhang se nahi lagate aati usse shadi kya karna...

Priya :What !!! BINDI abhi tak aap wahi atke huye hai...
Ohhh god...

Ram : apne aap ko dekha hai kabhi Kitni... Kitni...Jhallii dikhti ho tum...

Priya : exactly my point jab hum dono me kuch bhi same nahi hai MAIN JAHALII AAP MOTE or main phle bhi ek bar mana kar chuki hu to ye meeting and ek baar milna kyu.???

Ram : in anger shoute baar baar muje Mota mat kahiye and control himself Dekhiye main ye shadi apni maa ki vajah se kar rha hu or Shadi to aap ko mujhse karni hi padegi...

Priya : shocked and say Aap mujhe dhamki de rhe hai...

Ram : jaisa aap samze dhamki..,Request jo bhi...but shadi to karni padegi.


Priya : main pahle bhi mana kar chuki hu ab bhi kah rahi hu ki main aapse shadi nhi kana chahti...and get up from seat...ram say

Ram : Jane se phle meri puri baat sun lo fir kisi decision pe pahuchna...

Priya : matlab...

Ram : Ya to mujhse shadi karo ya fir Apna ghar Bachalo Nilaam hone se ...

Priya shocked and seet on her place

Ram again : Ha Ms. Sharma...aapke papa ko Kartik ki marrige ke liye 50 lakh ka loan dilwaya tha...or badle me sirf aapke ghar ke papers rakhe the deal k hissab se unhe kal tak 25 lakh rupee means half waps dene the jo ki i m sure nahi lotaye...so main kuch bhi action le skta hu kuch bhi ka matlab to tum samz hi gyi hogi ab soch lo...
Mujse shadi karo to main loan maaf kar dunga or shadi ke agle din property k paper tumhe waps de dunga now decision is all urs...

Priya with full of tears dont know what to do...

Priya : wipes her tears and say Main soch nahi sakti thi ki aap itna gir skte hai Mr. Kapoor ...

Ram : Aap jo sochna chahe soche mere baare me lekin main ye sab Apni maa ke liye kar rha hu...

Priya : apni maa ke liye aap kitni jindgiya barbad karenge..


Ram : Dekhiye Ms. SHARMA main sirf apko shadi karne ke liye bol rha hu uske baad bhi aap jindgi apne hisaab se jee skti hai hum sirf dunia ki nazro me Husbnd- wife honge lekin hamare bich husband-wife jaisa kuch nahi honga main or aap kabhi hum nahi honge.


Priya : shocked to hear this but see a lone tear in rams eyes which is wipe by him smartly that no one notice but priya se kuch nhi chupta...

Priya had no option and she knows how much her papa attached with house all these thoughts comes in her mind

priya : Mr.kapoor main shadi ke liye tyar hooo...

Ram : dekhiya...kya kya kaha i mean suddenly ..i mean ok...thanx

Priya : without say anything getup and leave...

FB End..



Priya with teary eyes :

Ronit ab sahayad tum samz gaye honge ki meri kya majburiya hongi...ki main kisi ko bata bhi nahi paayi...sorry ronit...richa wo bhi yahi soch dahi hogi main kaha gayab ho gayi...

Ronit : hmm gussa to wo bhi bahut thi akhir uska sabse bada support system gayab ho gya tha..

Priya : here this smile

Ronit : lekin main use samza dunga ab chalo late ho rhe hai or tum ab jake rest karogi...ro ro ke kya halat bana li hai...and aaj dinner bhulna mat
chalo ab...

Ronit drops priya at KM

Priya wants ronit to come in but he said that he hav sme urgent work and leave..

Priya enters in KM

KK : are priya aaj itni jaldi aa gyi class se..aaja Lunch karte hai sath me...

Priya : Maa aaj ek hi lecture tha to wo attnd karke main apne ek frnd se milne chali gyi thi humne wahi lunch kar liya sorry...

KK : are beta sorry ki kya bat hai..

Priya : thik hai maa...

KK : Priya...ram apni study me hai...

Priya : ok and checkd her watch aaj 2pm ghar par...kya hua inko aaj tabiyat to thik hai Ram Kapoor aaj aaram kar rha...

Priya goes to her room, throws her bag on Bed and go to bathroom...
In b/w Ram came to room and saw bag on bed he goes near bed and take bag in his hand...

Priya jst come out of bathroom and
Priya: ohhh mr.kapoor sorry i didnt remember that u r in room..sorry...

Ram : priyaaa no need to sorry actually sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye tumhe kal ki baat ke liye ...

Priya shocked nd cant believe that The Ram kapoor mujhse sorry bol rha hai...

Ram turns his side goes to couch and take book in his hand and continue:

mujhe tumse ese baat nahi karna chahiye thi aur tumhe underestmate bhi nahi karna chahiye tha tum kamaal ki dancer ho,jab tum dance karti ho to bhaut sexy lagti hooo and bites his tounge and one eye close...aaa i mean beautiful lagti ...priya cheeks turns red...

Sorry tumhe to pta hai mujhe ladkiyo se baat karna aata hi nahi hai...ye tumahre liye laaya tha hope u like it and gives her book...

Priya : ohhh ye to meri fav book hai...
A walk to remember...

Ram : meri bhi...

Priya : thanx par mere pas already ye book hai...

Ram : ohhh i thought tumahri fav hai to tum bar bar padogi so nxt time meri di huyi book se pad lena...

Priya : ohhk thanx and takes her bag going towrds her closet ...

Ram hold her hand and say tumne mujhe maaf nhi kara kya...

Priya : no..i mean i forgive u ...its ok.

Ram : ohhh so relief to here this from you and say priya...wo tumhari ...ammm...

Priya : kya..meri...

Ram : wo tumhari Lipstick sprd ho gyi hai left side main...and goes close to her and say main thik kar doo...

Priya : silent just noded her head...

Ram come more close to her just few inch away and priya feel his warm brethe
Ram apne pocket se hanky nikaal kar dhire dhire apno hatho se lipstick ke mark ko thik karne lagta hai and by mistake 2-3 times ram's thumb touch priyas lips now priya feel a current wave in her body she close her eyes
Ram come close to her ear and say priya open ur eyes i m done...and leaves from there and go to the washroom...

Priya open her eyes goes front of mirror and blush...and say why u r blushing priya ????

Here ram in Washroom...
Ye mujhe kya ho gya tha main main kya karne wala tha ...use dekh kar mujhe kya hone laga hai aajkal kahi vikram ki baat sahi to nahi...nahi nahi maine bus maafi mangi iska matlab ye thodi na ki main priya se pya...
Nahi priya kya soch rahi hogi mere baare me...ohhh par usne apni aankhe kyu band kar li...ohh god ye kya ho rha h mere sath kash main VIK se thode tips le leta ldkiyo ko samzne ke...

Now Ram came out of washroom and see priya in still in front of mirror

Ram : Priya lunch kare...

Priya : Mene lunch kar liya hai...

Ram : ok if dont mind can i ask u something...

Priya : yupp

Ram : kya tum mujhe kabhi maaf kar paogi...???

Priya : Mr.Kapoor mene kaha na ki mene aapko maaf kar diya hai...

Ram : priya main property wali baat ke liye and shadi u know what i mean..

Now
Priya facial expression changes and she said i dont know and she goes from there

Ram to himself main janta hu priya tum mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karogi...and he goes to bed for some rest...

Here priya in delimma wat happn to mr kapoor wo mujhe sorry bol rhe hai

Mere liye book laye meri fav book unhe kaise pata ki ye meri fav book hai and ye mujhe kya ho raha hai main ye kyu soch rahi hu.. mujhe to unse gussa hona chahiye jis tarah unhone kal mere or ronit ke bare main baat ki lekin maine unhe maaf kar diya ohhh god kya ho rha hai ... mujhe ab thoda so jana chahiye soo jaungi to ye bakwas khayal nahi aaenge...

" Priya tumhari lipstick left side me fail gyi hai main thik kar deta hu ram come close to priya hold her shoulder and then clear her lipstick mark by his thumb and then priya looks in his eyes then ram come close to her and takes her lips in his.he strated sucking her uppar lips.
priya dosnt respond and seprate herself and shoute Mr. KPOOR AAP YE KAR RAHE HAI..."


Ram : priya ...priya..utho main to sirf tumhe utha raha hu...

end

so guys i think this time lenth is ok...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awww last part was superb ram kissed but dream tha never mind woh bhi jaldi hoga n waiting for next part

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