RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Ram: What the hell ye Ladki apne aap ko samzti kya hai. main yaha 1 hour se uska wait kar raha hu or ye hai ki ab tak...and then ram looks in his right side the host of the party and media welcomes the spl guest of the party its none other than Ronit Roy..

Ram 1st ignores him but Then Ronit give him a hi ram like hand from mearly 50 meters Now ram has to meet him bcoz they are good friends from thier school to clg but not best frend.

Ronit : hi ram h r u ?? good to see u long time man...

Ram : hey hi i m f9 hmmm long time yar almost 1 year.

Ronit : Or Suna ram, Vikram kaisa hai and howz that pagli Neha ???

Ram : Vik-neha ne shadi kar li hai and dono thik hai khush hai.
Tu bata Kaha tha ek saal se koi ata pata nahi tera.

Ronit : hmmm main US chale gaya kuch kaam ke silsilye me. and sorry yar How can i forget this yar congooo man finally u r a Married man now.
Kab mila raha hai bhabhi se.

Ram : are teri bhabhi ka wait to main bhi kar rha hu pichle 1 hours se...
And then The lady in White saree looking like angel come down from the staircase going towards Her Hubby.

plz like and comments and let me know to continue or not.
This my 1st attemt to write a Story on RaYa plz bear me and sorry for mistakes bcoz i m posting it from my phone really complicated. plz
Edited by aman.anjaan - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First welcome to the forum buddy
Congratulations starting a story on Raya

Good start

its very short and sweet ...

So Ram is waiting for his wife 😉
Just waiting for Priyas entry

Want long update from second part

P.s:Try to pm when you update next 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi
wow its godo to see u writing a story, within a short span of time.
looks interesting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start
continue soon
nxt time plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx to all
and i will update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start ...👏
story is short n sweet,...
waiting for priya's entry...

next time pm me plsss...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nyc start pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud start continue soon plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice start
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I so like the beginning of the story
it's look different
Ram Ronit Vik and Neha were already friends
Let's see whom for Ram is waiting
continue soon
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