RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Part 3 and 4 was very good
the story is bit different
Great Ram realise his mistake and will apologies to Priya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
nice update continue soon n thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
awesm 3 n 4th part also.pls cntinue soon.n pls dear part k link ya part k page no likh dia karo taki milne ma asani ho.n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
nice update thanks for the PM

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Precap

Ronit-Priya meet at restaurant

ram see priya laughing on ronits words
control himself.

ram : " The lucky one "

Ye to meri bhi fav Book hai.

ram to himself why priya cry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Hey frends here is my FB fan Page
Raya Fan Fiction story
plz like and comment
you also get updates of
Raya complicated luv story
on this page

https://www.facebook.com/pages/RAYA-Fan-Fiction-Story/733187923408667
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting preview
nd thnx for sharing the link
I have liked ur page
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Ohh so priya helped a girl who met with an accident
and Ram comes to know and he is feeling sad and want to say sorry
well progression

Intresting preview 😉

Thanks for Pm


P.s: Can u please edit the part no and which page you are posting it .Its difficulty to search . Or try to give the paticular page link in pm .It wil be easy to find it .Hope you got it what Im telling .

Part-4 page .9 Like this edit in your first post [I mean in title ] so it will easy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Ohh so priya helped a girl who met with an accident

and Ram comes to know and he is feeling sad and want to say sorry
well progression

Intresting preview😉

Thanks for Pm


P.s: Can u please edit the part no and which page you are posting it .Its difficulty to search . Or try to give the paticular page link in pm .It wil be easy to find it .Hope you got it what Im telling .

<font color="#0000ff">Part-4 page .9 Like this edit in your first post [I mean in title ] so it will easy</font>




actually IF is totally new and differnt from other websites so nxt time i will try
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

Guys in this part i have given lit-bit info of ram-priya marrige sorry for late

In KI

Vikram : IDEA
kyu na tu priya ko ek Car gift de de wo waise bhi auto se apni class jati hai to car a is good option..

Ram : yar KM me car ki kami hai kya isse phle bhi Kitni bar bola ki car se chali jana lekin nahi Madam ko to sab kuch khud manage karna hota hai...

Vikram : To fir kya kare ek to tu uska pati hai par tujhe uske bare me kuch bhi nahi pata kaisa dost pati hai yar...

Ram : yar kya kiya jae and talk to himself
Think ram
think u r
The Ram Kapoor and shoute
IDEA!!!!!!

Dekh vik mujhe uski pasand napasand kuch nahi pata lekin uski frnd kya naam tha uska...Shruti use shayad sab pata hoga kyu na uski help li jaye waise bhi u r not helping me at all and laugh lol...

Vik : sahi h biwi ke liye The Ram kapoor kya kya karega accept na yar ki
U r in Love with ur wife...

Ram : Mujhe koi pyar vyar nahi hua is that just ki yar maine galti ki main usse sorry kahana chahta hu and U know Ram Kapoor jo bhi Karta hai wo Unique and Royal hota hai...

So plz ab shruti ka no kahi se arrange kar...

Here

Priya leave for Restaurant

In Auto priya to herself aaj mujhe Ronit ko sab batana hoga...sab kuch.

Ram calls shruti and shruti kahti hai ki hum yaha mere office ke pass ek Uddipi restaurant hai waha milte hai
Ram sochta hai kya main or chote se udipi restaurant me ohhh god plz help me and he leave for restaurant.


Scene start from Same Udippi resturant where
Ronit booked table for two person
Ronit enter in restaurant
Table is in a corner on ground floor and he takes his seat and wait for priya..

Here Vik calls at restaurant and booked a one way transparent Glass cabin and told manager to keep this info confidentail that ram kapoor visitng their restaurant

After 15 min
Ram enter in restaurant waiter told him to follow me ur Cabin on first floor and show him Cabin which is the just few inches away from railing

He takes his seat and inform shruti to come on 1st floor and dont tell anyting priya abt this meeting.

Now priya enter and Ronit show him hand and priya takes her seat.


Shruti dirctly go to the 1st floor in full speed which is unnoticed by priya...

Now shruti takes her place on the couch in the cabin from there is clear view of ground floor but people on groun floor cant see them bcoz of the one way transparent Glass.

( plz imagine Glass like this
i saw that mirror in Humraaz movie )

When ram order some dosa and idli (shruti sochti hai ki main hamesha priya se kahti thi ki plz cabin me baithte hai but wo hamesha mana kar deti thi aur sochte sochte uski nazar priya or ronit pe padti hai jo 1st floor pe baithe hai )
Shruti : mr.ram dekhiye priya bhi yahi hai.

Ram : kaha ???


Shruti : ground floor pe

Ram mudkar niche dekhta hai

Priya laughing on ronit words

To see priya and ronit like this ram is now full of anger but he controls himself and say plz let it be shruti tum janti ho humari shadi kitne short period of time me huyi hai plz muze priya ki sabhi pasand aur na pasnd detail me batao and think taki me jab tak yha ruk ke dekh saku ki ye dono yha ese hi mil rhe h ya kuch bat hai...and tells shruti to exchange seets he is not comfertable here..

Shruti : ohhh not comfertable ki bus wha se priya clear dikh rhi h and they exchange their seets.

Now shruti talking abt priyas likes nd dislikes and ram pen down evetything on Dairy but rams consentration on Priya

Here on Ground Floor

Priya takes her seat

Ronit : mene tumhara wada sambhar order kar diya hai.

Priya : ronit...amm...Ronit ye order to hota rahega lekin main tumhe ye baat bta kar apne dil se boz halka karna chahti hu plz bina question kare meri puri baat sunna...

Ronit : ok...


Priya : Ronit main kahi gayab nahi huyi thi main...Yaha mumbai clg khatam hone ke baad mujhe Jo Job mili thi usme 1 month ke baad joining thi so maine socha 1 month ghar pe sabke sath rahu so main pune ke liye nikal gayi socha tumhe call karke bata dungi lekin jaise hi main pune pahuchi mujhe pata chala ki...

Mere Bhai Kartik ko London se apni study bich me chod kar aana pada..
Kartik waha London me ek fashion school ki workshop me Natasha Kapoor Mr. Kapoor ki choti sister se mila soon they bcome Good friends.uske baad milna milana chalta raha and days passed u know..ronit young generation they crossed their limit
Nust was 3 weeks pregnent and With fear of her brother she told Mr. Kapoor everything and Mr. Kapoor was very angry on Kartik and he told him that he will ruin his career but nuts loves him and Mr.Kapoor's mother Krisha Kapoor was very sensible she didnt want that nuts pregnancy news ruins her image so she forced Mr. Kapoor to agree on Nuts-Kartik marrige but Mr.kapoor was agree on One condition that No one knows about this marrige in india and Kartik has to take responsibility of KI London branch and Nuts-Kartik marries gone to be happen in London but Kartik first denied but after such condition he agred and i was so dumbstruck that what happened with my family even Mr.Kapoor didnt bother to ask once my family ...Marrige date was Final after 8 days in London
My mother shipra sharma and father Sudhir Sharma had some dreams about their childrns weeding but here we are allowed only few ppl for marrige cause of expenses.
So in two days we Sharma's and Kapoor' s Leave for London

At London
[
(hey guys here i am writting shipra-krisna talk sepratly bcoz its necesarry after that rest in priyas voice )

Kk: shipra ji apki ladki priya bahut mehnati hai kitna kaam isne akele sambhala hai.

Shipra: ji maine bhi use kaha ki yaha vik ,rishab ( Jr. Kapoor ram's bro) ne bahut kam sambahala huya hai lekin wo kahti hai ki mera ek bhai to hai uski marrige ka sara kaam wo khud karna chahti hai.

KK : sach apki ladki bahut gunkari hai jiske ghar jaegi wo bahut hi bhagyashali honge..

Shipra : chahti to main bhi hu ki iski jaldi se shadi ho jaye..

KK : aap agar kahe to main ladka dekhu priya ke liye aakhir ye meri beti jaisi to hai..

Shipra : kya krishna ji neki or puch puch...
]
All function of marrige over and in 5 days me and Mr. Kapoor hardly meet to each other...

And after marrige we came back to india in 10 days my life totally changed...
Krishna ji and mom were become best frend

Most of the time ya to krishna aunty hamare yaha hoti thi ya mom unke yha.

Par ek din Krishnaji ko heart attack aaya or unhone ram se kaha ki ram unki aakhiri ikchha puri kare wo ikccha thi ki ram shadi kare wo bhi mujhse Priya sharma se...

Ram apni maa ki condition dekh kar mana nahi kar paye lekin main is rishte ke khilaaf thi jis insaan se mili bhi nahi jiski EGO ki vajah se mere maa-papa apne khud ke bete ki khushi kisi se baat nahi sakte the us insaan se main shadi kaise kar sakti thi isliye mene ram se shadi ke liye mana kar diya.

Meri mom ne mujhe bahut force kiya emotional blackmail kiya to main ek baar ram se milne ke liye ready ho gyi lekin haa kahne ke liye nahi,Shadi ke liye mana karne ke liye...maine socha ram ko bol dungi ki aap is shadi k liye mana kar dijiye par mujhe kya pata tha meri kismat me kya likha tha..

waha krishna ji ki bhi jidd thi ki Ram tumhe kaise bhi priya ko shadi ke liye manana padega...

Aur Mr. KAPOOR NE MUJHE BLACKMAIL KAR MUSJHE SHADI KE LIYE MAJBOOR KIYA RONIT MAIN MAIN AND CRY...

Ram saw priya crying and ronit wipes her tears and holding her both hand.
See both of them like this rams eyes full of anger and he getsup from his place and say sorry shruti its time leave bcoz i have urgent meeting and they both leave in a way that no one notice them.ram drop shruti.

Ram in car :
Us Ronit ki to main Saala meri biwi ke aansu pochega meri biwi ka hath pakdega..ye sab mera haq hai tujhe to main dekh lunga.lekin ye priya ro kyu rahi thi...kaise pata lagau yar usse direct puch bhi nahi skta ..aaahhh
are iss ronit ke chakkar me to main bhul hi gaya ki priya ko sorry kaise bolu gadha hu yar me ek no ka...

Ram's see a book shop in his left side and suddenly idea strokes in his mind he stop his car at book shop call shruti
Ram : shruti priya ki fav book kaun si hai ???

Shruti : " The Lucky One" and
" A walk to remember "
Ram thinks ye to meri bhi fav books hai yar..and smiles said thnx cut the call and
Pick books and goes to KM.

At KM
Ram wanted to rest sometime bcoz he wanted to calm himself but thought that why priya cry strokes everytime..so he takes his laptop and goes to study room...




Sorrry guys for this mess and that Glass Cabin i was so confused and sorry for
Nuts-kar marrige i cut that part and give u only requried info and i know all want raya love story start so i dont want to be dragging update so i give u family character in shorts plz bear me...




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