RaYa New Story : Complicated Luv Story Update Part 10 on Page 32

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

heyyy nice update...👏

ram ne sruti ka help manga...nice..

hahahhaha...shipra n kk arrangd their mrg aur raya ko black mail b kiya...😆

again misunderstanding...😭

ram priya ka fav books gift karega...aww!!

continue soon..

thanks for the pm...😊

Edited by jodude - 11 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

actually IF is totally new and differnt from other websites so nxt time i will try

Hey

thats okay

just facing lil bit confusion so i told

it will be clear

glad you are giving page no

its very helpful

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

I love the story but write aaram see dnt do fast fast take ur tym n pls gv precap properly like that all cn feels wats going to happen n hope u didnt felt bad just my option n any help ask any member they lll guide u n write thora bada n dnt mix past n future so much its make lil confuse

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Janilover

@Janilover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: jodude
res

what is res ????

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Jyothi

@jodude

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

what is res ????

reserving for comments...(res)

i saw this update first so i reserved my place...

so that i can read and comment in that first place...😆

now i read the stry n i will comment in that place...😊

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Janilover

@Janilover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
I love the story but write aaram see dnt do fast fast take ur tym n pls gv precap properly like that all cn feels wats going to happen n hope u didnt felt bad just my option n any help ask any member they lll guide u n write thora bada n dnt mix past n future so much its make lil confuse

hey thanx and sorry for confusion i really dont know how to mix past and future so sorry for mess...next part is also some mixing of past and future so sorry in advancd bcoz i almost complete next one

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Part -5

wowww

everything has happened in priyas life so fast

so their marrige hapend in a way that she couldnt able to say no

Hmm now i got the point

it seems intresting

will be waiting for next

Thanks for pm

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

hey thanx and sorry for confusion i really dont know how to mix past and future so sorry for mess...next part is also some mixing of past and future so sorry in advancd bcoz i almost complete next one

Hey aman just while you are writing you are giving FB [ flashback ] na

give same like that

when present comes

just write present

simple

Hope you understand ..

yOU Just try ..You will understand while posting

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hey aman just while you are writing you are giving FB [ flashback ] na
give same like that
when present comes

just write present

simple

Hope you understand ..

yOU Just try ..You will understand while posting

thank u di for helping her n hope she didnt felt bad i was just saying my option