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Beautiful Update
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Wait for some RaYa moments
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finally things are mending
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Originally posted by: priyajan12

finally things are mending

good that now u understood how to update the title
superb update
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thanx and i now slowly slowly i learnt so many things abt IF
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Originally posted by: aman.anjaan



thanx and i now slowly slowly i learnt so many things abt IF


thats great
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superb update 😊
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vry nice.n cntinue soon.
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lovely part...
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Aweee
superb part
specially the last one ..
wish ..RAM and Priya can feel their loe for each other soon
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Part 7

Ram : main to sirf tumhe neend se utha rha tha...

Priya : kya...ohhh main ye sab ohh thank god ye sapna tha...

Ram : kya dekha tumne sapne me esa u r sweatting priya...batao koi darawna sapna dekha kya..??

Priya : nahi nhi darawna nahi tha...sapna to bahut hmmm...kuch nahi Mr.kapoor aap yha i mean ye...tray in his hand..

Ram : main tumahare liye ye Ginger Tea and snacks laaya hu...tumhe ginger tea pasand hai na .chalo uthithye mam chai pijiye com on com on lazzy bird...

Priya : apko kaise pta mujhe ginger tea pasand hai...

Ram : jaha jaate hai hum waha tum yahi order to deti hoo...or tumhari pasand ka khayal main nhi rakhunga to kaun rahkega..

Priya doesnt say anything takes sip of her tea..

Ram : Priya...tumne darawna sapna dekha kya abhi bhi tumahre maathe( head ) par pasina aa rha hai and he goes near to priya she close her eyes..he takes hanky and wipes her head..hmmm ab thik hai..


Priya opens her eyes and say excuse me and goes to washroom..

Ram just smile and goes study...

In washroom

Priya to herself ohh god ye Mr.kapoor kya ho gaya hai aur to or sapne me bhi mera picha nahi chod rhe hai...and wo kiss..
Kiss oohhh main ye kya sochne lag gyi Yaad nhi h priya tuhje unke word ki tum or main kabhi Hum nahi ho sakte...god plz help me...


After some time priya came from washroom and see mr.kapoor is not in room and say thank god shayad study me honge main esa karti hu Neha ke yaha chali jaati hu wahi se dirct Ronit ke ghar dinner par chali jaungi lekin ronit ne to Ram ko bulane ka bhi bola tha ab kya karu inka ye ajeeb behaviour and mera bhi ye sab ulta seedha sochna ohhh main to jati hu...Koi bhi bahana bana dungi... and she picks Green Saree and goes from there...

In Hall

KK : beta kaha ja rahi ho...

Priya : maa main...Neha ke yaha ja rhi hu.

KK : dinner tak aa jaogi naa beta..

Priya : Nahi maa main aaj dinner bahar hi karungi...

KK : beta kuch hua hai kya sab thik hai na Ram or tumhare bich...

Priya : nahi maa sab thik hai and thinks jab kuch hai nahi to isse jyada kya kaharab hoga maa...and goes to nehas place.

After half an hour priya reach neha's house and

Neha opens gate

Hiii priya what a pleasnt surprise baby and hug her and say
Aaj meri yaad kaise aayi...jarur fatty se jhagda hua hoga hai na main na...

Priya : bus bus neha mujhe andar to aane do and plz ye baby waby na tum vikram ke liye hi rakho..main priya hi sahi hu...

Neha : laugh sorry aao have seat...kya logi ofcours adrak wali chai...u know jab se hamari frndship huyi hai na mujhe bhi adrak wali chai achi lagne lagi hai.

Priya : accha...

Neha tea and snacks leke priya ke sath baithti hai...

Neha : priya ye beg main kya hai...

Priya : batati hu sab batati hu meri maa...
.ahmm hmm kaise batau

Neha : kaise batau matlab bolo yar bindass bolo..

Priya : mujhe Ronit ke yaha dinner pe jaana hai hai neha so main yha ready hokar direct Ronit ke yha jaungi..

Neha : to tum yaha ready hone aayi ho ye to tum KM se bhi ja sakti thi...

Priya : are ja to sakti thi par wo Mr.kapoor hai na waha ajeeb ajeeb harkate kar rhe hai

Neha: fattyy,fatty ne kya kiya ab..

Priya: kya nahi kiya neha tumhe kya kya batau mere liye kabhi book la rahe hai sorry bol rhe hai, sone bhi nhi dete and she looks neha and reliaz what she said ohh i mean and bites her tounge...

Neha : looks her wide open mouth without blinking her eyes...kya kya kya sorry i cant believe priya fatty or sorry and book laya means gift laya and sone nhi de rha wahh...mujhe yakin nhi hota ki fatty itna romantic hai...

Priya : looks in diffrnt direction and doesnt say anything..

Neha : jumps directly front of priya and said he he...blush hahaha comon priya hum dono frnd hai yar batao na esa kya kar rha tha fatty jo sirf jaag ke ho sakta hai batao batao...

Priya : plz neha esa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa tum soch rhi ho...actually main khud ye nahi samz paa rahi hu aakhir Mr. Kapoor esa behave kyo kar rhe hai..

Neha : priya my darlinggg ram is falling for u darlinggg and in loud voice ohh i cant believe i cant belive...fatty is in love with u...


Priya : plz calm down neha...u r mad really...and thinks Mr.kapoor falling for me...no no ohh god

Neha : kaha kho gayi unke khayalo
me...


Priya : No..Tum pagal ho neha mere or Mr.kapoor ke baare me tum dono sab kuch jante ho hamari comprmise marrige ke baare me sirf tumhe or vikram pata hai so ye love ka chakkar meri samz ke ...ab main late ho rhi hu mujhe ronit ke yaha bhi jaana hai...to main ready hone jaau

Neha : first hesitate and say Tumne ram ko nahi bataya ki tum ronit ke yaha ja rahi ho...

Priya : hmmm nahi bataya and plz unhe koi farak nahi padta hai...and pta nahi kal kaise gussa kar rhe the ronit ke saamne so isliye nhi bataya...

Neha: u are wrong priyaa...gussa nahi kar rha tha he actually jealous from Ronit hmmm and use tumhari bahut fikr hai priya tum kyo maan nahi rahi ho ki ur husband started loving u...

Priya : again u started neha i m already late...ab plz main jau ready hone ...

Neha : agar ram ne tumhe call kiya to

Priya : wo mujhe call karenge hi nahi...

Neha : Agar mujhe call kiya to...

Priya : to kah dena ki kitty party thi and uske baad hum dinner ke bahar liye aa gye...and ab plz baksh doo neha...

After 20 min priya leave from there and take a cab..


In KM

Ram came to room where is priya yar he come to hall

Bansi Kaka priya kaha par hai ???

Bk : wo to neha mam ke yaha gayi hai aaj wahi dinner karke aaengi

Ram : ok

Ram to himself Neha ke yaha gayi to mujhe batake nahi jaa sakti main thodi na use rokunga

Ram calls neha : darling Main itna kitna kha leta ki tune sirf priya ko dinner pe bulaya...

Neha : wo wo kya hai wo

Ram : wo wo kya kar rhi hai..

Neha : to herself main ab kya bolu is duffer ne to sach me mujhe call kar diya

Ram : helllooo neha r u there...

Neha : ha ha fatty wo hamari kitty party thi so only girls allowed...

Ram : kitty...priya ko kbse kitty ka shock huya .ye batao abhi kaha hai..

Neha : baaki girls ke sath dinner pe gayi main ghar ruk gyi wo Vikram aane wala hai na so...and tum mujhhse kyu puch rhe ho apni biwi ko call karo na...usse darte ho kya

Ram : are 100 bar kiya hoga par mam apna phone chalu to rakhe...and ha main usse koi dartaa warta nahi hu..

Neha : ha ha tum to pyar karte honge na darte thodi na honge..

Ram : blush and said shut up and cut the call...and think kya ye neha..

Ram : so mam aajkal kitty vitty and frnds k sath dinner haa yaha pati bhuka pyaasa intjaar kar rha h ek bar bata deti meri bhukh mar ke khud maje se khana kha rhi hai..


In Cab :

Priya close her eyes and thinks
ye neha bhi pata nhi kya bakwas karti rahti hai...Mr.kapoor aur mujhse nahi nahi priya ye sab jo Mr.kapoor jo kar rhe hai unki guilt ki wajah se shayad ...but Ronit wali baat pe jealous shayd ho esaaa jis tarike se mujhe taunt mar rhe the ki Mel-milaap and all...ohhh ye Mr.Kpoor mera picha kab chodenge...
Suddenly she saw Ram say
Priya chodne ki liye thodi na hath pakada hai...and come very close to her when he come close and about to kiss
Cab stop and suddn jerk priya open her eyes and see here there...

Driver : mam apka adress aa gya hai..

Priya : ok and come out of from cab and say phir se Ram ka sapna ohhh god...

Priya enter in Ronits house
take blessing from Ronit' s mother...

Ronits mom : jeeti raho beta kitne dino baad dekha beta kaisi ho suna shadi kar li hai...

Priya : jee aunty...sorry kisi ko bula bhi nahi paayi...

R'MOM : its ok beta...

Ronit came down from stairs with a girl and his hand folded on her eyes and they came in front of priya...

Ronit : takes his hand back and say surprise Richa this is ur surprise Richa...

Richaa : kaun hai ye...main nahi janti inhe...and turns her side and tears come from her eyes...she wanted to hug her shoute on her...

Priya : with teary eyes sorry richa i m really sorry but main kya karti tumhe bhi bata nahi payii...plz maaf kar do mujhe ...and going in front of her and hug her tightly abhi bhi nhi pehchaana..

Richa : cant control anymore hugs back tightly and cry...

Priya : bus bus billii...roti bhi hai tu...

Richa : smile apper on her face and say kaha chali gayi thi tum...

Priya looks ronit

Ronit : sorry wo...maine kuch nahi bataya main apni billi ko surprise dena chahta tha u know isse accha FRIENDSHIP DAY GIFT KYA HOGA and sath sath ye mera Rakhi gift bhi ho gaya.lage hath.

Richa : helllo bhai...ese kaise paise bachana to koi aap se sikhe ye priya sirf Friendship day gift hua rakhi abhi aana baki hai...ab bata priya kaha chali gyi thi tu...pta hai ek dum se gayab ho jaana kitne logo ki life effect hoti hai isse...and she looks her managalsutra and say OMG tune tune shadi kar li...priyaaa...

Priya : bus meri maaa sab ronit tujhe bata dega ab mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai...khana khaye...

Richa : ok...chalo.

Now ronit : Ram nahi aaya ...priya

Priya : wo tum to jante ho Busy hai...

Ronit : ok i undrstand.

After dinner three of them Remember their old days

After 1 hrs priya said i have to leave now its already 10..


Richa : wait...wait bhai hum chlte hai priya ko drop kar denge.

Priya : no need to main...

Richa&Ronit togther : Main khud manage kar lungi and laugh...

Priya : tum dono naa...chodungi nahi tumhe...

And they leave for KM

After 30 min they reach KM

Priya wants richa and ronit to come but they said its late...and richa said meet u tomorrow...bye...

Priya: bye...


Priya came directly to her room before enter the room she clearly hear rams voice ahhh mera sir phat raha hai ye meri pills kaha h yar
Ohh mera sir...ye priya bhi na pata nahi meri pills kaha rakh di hai..


Priya run to bed and say Mr.kapoor kya hua..

Ram : tum tum aa gyi kaha thi yar ab tak pata hai mera sir..bahut dukh raha hai plz meri pills dundh ke de dona..

Priya : pills ye pills ki vajah se hi to ye side effect hota hai apko...uthiye main aapka sir daba deti hooo uthiye...

Ram : mujhe nahi uthna hai yar aur sir dabana hai to ese hi dabao warna pills de do...

Priya : ohh Mr.kapoor aap bahut ziddi hai ..

Ram : tumse kam ab kya karna hai jaldi karo...warna main pills le rha hu

Priya first hesitate then sat on bed ek pillow apni lap par rakhti hai ram side ho kar apna sir goood me rakhe pilkow par rakhta hai...

Priya dheere dheeree Ram ka sir dabane lagti hai ram slowly slowly felt good in low voice priya tumahre hatho main to jaadu hai yar and slowly drift to sleep and snors ,priya relaize that ram is now sleeping she slowly puts her head down and getsup
and in sleep he turns his side and caught priyas hand..and smiles in sleep...
Priya turns her side..
Priya see him and say chote bacche ke jaise innocent lagte hai aap Mr.kapoor jab bhi sote hai...

Priya knee down and come close to his face and slowly slowly caresses his hairs and pulls his cheeks...a cute smile appers on ram face...

Priya getsup from there goes to washroom after coming from washroom drectly goes to couch and sleep...

MORNING :

Ram wakes up before priya...he feels very energetic


See priyas akward postion on couch ram goes near to her and takes her in his arms and place her on bed and half cover her with blanket and to himself sorry priya meri vajah se tumhe kya kya jhelna pad raha hai lekin i promise u ki ye sab jyada din nahi ab acche din aane wale hai and he takes his clothes and goes to washroom...

Aftr some time priya opens her eyes and shocked to see herself on bed and try to remeber when she came on bed...
ram came out of washroom and say kya hua priya tum ese kyo baithi ho i mean jaise bhoot dekh liya hoo...

Priya came out of her thoughts and say Mr.kapoor main bed pe kaise aayi i mean main to couch pe soyi thi...

Ram first smile and say : wo tum couch pe uncomfertable lag rhi thi to mene tumhe...hestitate but quickly maine tumhe utha ke yaha rakh diya...

Priya : whattt...Mr kapoor aapko ye sab...and stop herself...and blushing...

Ram see priya blusing and say tum jitni biscuit jaisi patli dikhti hoo utni ho nahi...

Priya : embarrsed and say ye baat aap pe bhi jamti hai aap jaise dekhte hai waise...stops and quicly goes to washroom

Ram : are puri baat to bolti jaao ajeeb hai yar...

In washroom priya hear someone voice

Aaj main uppar Aaasma niche
Aaj main aage jamana hai piche...


Priya came from washroom and see ram sing song and dreesed in Blue shirt and black trouser...


Priya : kya bat hai Mr.kapoor aaj to gaana waana aur colorful kapde...

Ram : Ha aaj colorful mood main hu to colorful kapde kyu na pahne jaye...
Vaise kal ki massage acchi thi main bahut fresh feel kar rha hu..raat ko thnx bhi nhi bol paaya...thnx.

Priya : its ok Mr.kapoor

Ram : priya tum ready ho jao fir brekfast krte hai fir main tumhe drop kar dunga...

Priya : wo mere aajkal ek hi ek lecture rahta hai mr. Kapoor..so mujhe aaj late jaana hai...

Ram sadly ok. Bye...

Priya : aap brekfast nahi karenge...

Ram : with sadly face nahi ab mera man nahi hai..main niklta hu..

Then KK and Bansi Kaka enter in Room

KK : bansi brekfast yaha rakh do...
ram tumne kal sham se kuch nhi khaya hai dinner bhi nahi kiya chup chap brekfast karke jaoge...priya beta tum ise bina khaye jane mat dena main mandir jaa rahi hu chalo bansi...

Now priya :


Priya : mr.kapoor aapne dinner kyu nahi kiya isliye aapko kal wo...sir dard and aap apna jara khayal nahi rakh sakte...aapne dinner kyu nahi kiya...

Ram with his heads down like a small child listen lectures from teacher

Priya : Mr.kapoor main aap se kuch puch rahi hu...


Ram : scrach his head with one finger wo..wo yar tumahre bina means akele man nahi tha...

Priya : cheeks turns red ram notice that...
Aap brekfast kariye...

Ram and priya seat and priya

serves him Aloo paratha and dono

bina kuch kahe brekfast finish karte hai.

Ram office ke liye nikal jata hai and

Priya bhi ready hoke classes ki liye nikal jati hai...


In KI

In eveng

Ram's cabin

Jenny : sir aapne abhi tak lunch nahi kiya hai to kya order kar du..

Ram : nahi jenny mere liye bus ek apple bhijwa dena nad plz no calls..

Jenny : what !!! I mean u sure sir...

Ram : smiles and say yaa jenny


Ram to himself


Ram : ye priya kya kahne wali thi yar ki main jaisa dikhta hu waisa..kya...yar ye priya itna sharma kyu rhi thi..usne subh uth kar bhi gussa nahi kiya mujhe laga ki kha hi jaegi mujhe jab use pata chalega ki maine use utha ke bed pe rakha...or main bhi duffer hu yar par kitni innocent lagti hai jab sharmati hai...uske laaal gaal...man to karta hai...

Vikram : kya kya man karta hai ram..

Ram : tu...tu kab aaya...

Vikram : jab aap Priya ke khayalo me khoye the or apne aap se baate kar rhe the...kuch man kar rha tha tera..aur aaj to Colorful Kapoor dikh rha hai jenny ne kaha ki sir ne sirf apple managaya hai lunch bhi nahi kiya...kya baat hai pyaar ka naasha sir chad ke bol rha hai...



Ram : blush..tu chup kar yar teri gaadi hamesha wahi rahti hai pyar pyar is umar me kisi ko pyar ho sakta hai kya...


Vik : ram pyar ki koi umar nahi hoti aur ye apple lunch skip karna ye sab priya ki wajah se hi naa...

Ram : tu fir chalu ho gaya...ha main manta hu ki ye sab usi ki wajah se hai par iska matlab ye nahi ki pyar krta hu...wo health concious hai kitni fit hai aur aaj usi ki diet follow karne ki koshish kar rha hu bus...

Vik : chal thik hai ram maan leta hu par tu ye sab kaam chod ja thoda priya k sath time spent kar waise bhi tu mere aane k pahle usi k baare me soch rha tha na ab jhoot mat bolna chal jaa...

Ram : ha baba jata hu...


Ram leave for priyas classes...

End...





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Very Beautiful Update 👏
I love each & every lines
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊

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