OS- Broken heart last part on page 11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Haww sanju

Thats an awesome OS

Waiting for next

Update sooonnn

Thank you for pm

Originally posted by: luvbalh

Since u said t means a lot to u ..

I will be happy if u consider to extend another part.

many will await for part 2 ..

with a note romantic one,...😳

Haan if not today do write some other day when u are feel and feel good.

I will wait..

😊

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

hey os complete nahi ki aur ek update doge kya...per yaha tak tho bahuth emotional hai...

or you wrote as per the title...and then end...?

thanks for pm😛

Originally posted by: zeylanica

Thanks for the PM Sanju ..

very well written, but it ended abruptly..

if possible plz continue

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

its simply beautiful, very emotional but too good👏

With many one's request I am here again with the second part and this one for Neel di (Luvshakshi) specially as I promised her ..that I will write ..Love u DI.

I am starting where I ended ...hope no problem.

Second part -

Priya goes close to RAM..tries to take him in her arms..in her strong embrace ...which can sooth her man ..she knows about the person very well..He is a very strong man.. strong man for the world..but in heart he is a five years lil kid..still who is craving for any one's care .any one's love..she was able to give him the security the assurance of belongingness..but ..she failed to prove as a good wife.yes she she did ...just one of her wrong decision separated them..not only the separation..it creates a lot of distance between the two souls. one which was together ..rather one lied in two different bodies...Today her man ..lost trust on her ..and it is totally justified ..all of his pain..she is responsible only she is...

Mr.Kapoor ...Please listen to me one with a stammering voice .she pleads...

Very rudely Ram removes her hand from his shoulder ...

Kya..What type of explanation u wanna give Priya...do u really have any ..which can heal my pain. The five years loneliness...where only I was covered up only with the guilt that I was not a perfect son, perfect brother..even at the end failed to prove myself as perfect husband...

but all the time, at the end..I get the pain only ..May be I was not a good son..but what I got..my mother left me..reason for my goodness.. she left me with my sister ..whom I considered my best friend when I was child..again I became alone..even left me with the persons who never ever loved me, even think about me..,,and after 20 years ..when I got married..and totally started to depend on the lady ..my lady love..my life...she left me..why ..why all the time it happens with me ..DO u really have any explanation Priya..

Each and every words from RAM just pinches Priya a lot..it kills her from inside..and ..this time with lots of courage she is able to complete her sentence...

I left u because I wanted u to move on..move on in ur life...not with me..not with my memories...

The move on word makes RAM numb...he looks at her ..with the expectation ..that must be she will complete her sentence in which aspect she wanted ,she used the word...

After accident I went to KM...with fresh tears she says.. jaha meri...

she could not complete ..her sentence ..as it was painful event for her to...

Ishika was talking with utz..agar main jinda rehti ..to sabse jyada taklif apko hota...main jail me rehti..aur aapko mere yadon k sahare jina padta...acha huya k main mar gayi ...

again some fresh tears appear in her eyes..

to kuch din k baad aap ..move on kar sakte hai..apni nayi jindegi me..and it was so true ..k us time agar...

Ram does not allow her to continue...

Do u really think Priya ..k I moved on...i can move on without u .. without ur memories...my life was you..and still it is u Priya...

Without any second thought Priya hugs him..hugs her man..after 5 years ..to feel the same belongingness..to listen the heart beats of him...

Ram breaking the hug..but this time not rude as before..she has same effects on him..still her tears make him weak..melts his anger ...

Within 1 min..RAM shows her something ..which is so lil ..not even so important for any one...but for them it carries a lot .their one of the most sweetest memory as husband and wife..specially RAM spoke about his desire ...desire of being a father " tum agar isi tarah baar baar mayke jayoge to main tumahare hone wale bache ka papa kabhi nehi ban payunga "

DO u remember this one Priya ..only for two days ...still its with me each and every moment ...I don't need to keep ur picture ..with me..as u r always with me in my heart ...but this one all time I carry with me to remember our blissful days ...Do u really think I moved on..I cant ever be..

Priya totally lost ..lost with the man's love..its beyond her imagination..she knows he loved her so much..but this type of craving still, knowing she is not more ...

Ram...

after lots of struggling with own self..with her heart..with her own pain...

I called u ..when I got to know about Peehu but...

But what Priya u thought ..Ur Mr.Kapoor is not able to rescue u ..wo kya bache ko bacha sakte hai ..it is na ..jo perfect husband nehi ban paye wo father kaise ban sakta hai ...?

No..not that like that I called u..and u were in some restaurant ..praising some one's ear rings...a lonely tears escape from her eyes...

Ear rings...call...praising...restaurant all words were just hovering in his minds ..that he can relate with a single one...

Even I called u after that ..many times...but u cut many times and I...

That reminded him the past incident of that ..and with a smile which contains only his pain..

Jo admi kabhi apni wife ki praise nehi kar paya...always felt so shy ...wo kisi dusre ki ...

Mumma aap kaha ho..

They heard voice of Peehu their bundle of joy..and only the source which can again bind them in eternal

Relation which they had..they never lost but ..their pain overflowed with all...Ram is in drenched in pain that still he cant believe his Priya did it with him.

Weeping her tears ...Mujhe Peehu k pass jana hai ...wo akeli hai...and she moves to the door..

And when she reaches there ...

Again faces towards RAM...

Pata hai ..Mr.Kapoor main is panch saal kaise ji payi hu..the toughest years of my life...kyun ki mujhe pata thi k main jinda hu...fir bhi I was alone.. far distance from my family..my love one..with a sigh ..my life too...but still I was alive...Still I am ..because only for Peehu ..our dream...ur flesh..our symbol of love...u fulfilled my each and every wish..but I failed as ur wife..really I failed as ur love I don't deserve..but still I love u RAM...aaj bhi mere har ek subah ..aapki khayal se hi start hoti hai ..and din ki khatam usise se hi ... did u feel how much pathetic was my life ..I was craving for this day ..i started to dream about our baby ..with u only ...and here I was alone..no one was there with me...badly I needed u ram but I could not.. she leaves from there

Ram comes in bed room...where his two most angels are sitting ..one is on bed ..and the lil one on her lap...totally engrosses in some childish talk...its first for RAM to see his wife this side..talking like a child...

How much caring mother she is ...as he knows .how much struggle she is doing too..

And this thought ..again hurts RAM..being Mrs.KApoor she does not need to do all.

Ram settles himself ..beside them and watching keenly their movement ..he feels nice..and and his heart gets a comfort zone the way he and Priya used to dream about their family their baby ..it gives him same feelings...

Wow papa bhi haina aaj humare sath ..hum tino milke masti karte hai ..aaj mujhe ninhi nehi aa rehi hai...

With a cute puppy face Peehu comments

With an authority Voice Priya says a big no ..nehi kal tum papa k sath..masti karna...ok..so jao aab ache bache ki tarah..

Agar papa firse hum e chod k chale gaye to... An insecure daughter speaks out first time..as she spent her 5 years without Father's love..Priya gave her all.. tried to fulfill her all wishes ..but the void of a father's love ..she cant ...

Papa..kabhi nehi jayega..tum dono ko chod k kabhi nehi ...with a stretch RAM says Tum Dono...

It is enough for Priya to give her the world's best happiness...

Peehu becomes happy too...and goes to sleep...its amazed RAM again with her snoring ..an unknown happiness concurred him..with the little resembles with his daughter ...

Priya takes her side...and with so much tiredness she goes for a soundless sleep..

Ram is still awake. looking at his two angels ...leaving his all worries he goes to bed site table ..and ..something is peeping from there...

Ram gets her dairy ...though he is not so interested to read it..specially without her permission..but ..as a husband..he has the right to know about her ..about her past 5 years...specially when he got..his picture from it...his interest grows ..just to check the particular page...

"Mr.Kapoor...yaad hai ..aajke din..Vikram and neha k ..sab bache aye the.. and we decided to...

I am feeling shy RAM to tell u ..but I am happy in a few months we are going to be parents...

U fulfilled my wish..we completed our dream RAM..u r best husband ever..but I am failed RAM..i cant give u the news ..Why RAM why ..our faith is playing such a cruel game with us..we met so late..discovered our love ..after 6 months..and when ..we r blessing with our bundle of joys..we r separated...I need u RAM.badly I need u..aur nehi kar sakti sab..akeli. I got to u..wanna rest my head on ur heart..want to listen ur heart beats ,,.but I know..I cant..some how u accepted that I am no more ..and I cant give u pain again..i could read ur pain RAM when I was in jail..and u were in so vulnerable state then...Hu main selfish isliye agar mujhe akele hi sehna pada to I can .but never ever I can see ur that state..it kills me from inside..aur jab aapki ansh bada ho jayega .i will share with her/him all hope wo bhi mujhe maaf karde..i am doing wrong with him/her na..separating with father's love..but what can I do RAM..his/her PAPA is most precious gift for me..cant see his pain...I am Sorry ..

Your Priya

When RAM finishes the last line he finds himself at the couch..

With a lonely tears ..he goes in sleep too..

Guys I thought I can complete in this part ..but no mood..so sorry ...hope u like it .