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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
Sanju Dear,
Very well written 👏
I like Each & Every lines
It's really very emotional
But i like it lot 😃
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😛

thank u dear ..thank u very much

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
Very emotional tha dii but accha tha pls end on happy note by posting 2nd part pls pls do na

thank u dear

hmm ..i am thinking too

ok give me time i will

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: youandme272000
Hey y did u stopped der.. it was gng so well.. awesome.. so emotional...

thank u viddhi

nothing was in my mind then

i will later pakka

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

nice os
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: akilagoud2
nice os
continue soon
thanks for pm

thank u dear

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
superb os
thanks for pm

thank u dear

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Thx for teh PM.

Mujhe ye batado ye end of the OS hai ya fir picture abhi baaki hai?😆

Agar ye end hai toh , i m sorry mujhe laga it was ended abruptly. sory if i m hurting you.

agar ye end nhi hai , toh i m very happy.

i wil comment later

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Jyothi

@jodude

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow!!
emotional update..
really very nice,

update soon...

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Superb
Awesome
Mind blowing😉
Continue it plz
And thanks 4 pm!!!

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luvbalh

@luvbalh

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

thank u buddy
second one ?
I am confused but will try .. Romantic
cant write yaar 😉

not second one..

just want some continuation to this os. may be second part

u are under estimating ur capability of doing a romantic part.

I loved ur way of handling subtle romance. its not every ones cup of tea to write Sizzling n hottest updates. only few can do this. I agree, i love it when it is sensuous and romantic. few things have to be hidden the feel of love is imp ..

so do continue. 😊

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