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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Omg Viji Di..an OS from u nd that too so so beautifull one..😃
Its awesome di..
Awwiee blushy blushy Ram nd love at first sight for him..😳
The way he is behaving like a teenager..going ga ga over Priya, his mind nd heart not in his control..his condition seeing Priya how he gets lost in her forgetting everything..too good di..very well penned down👍🏼

Vik having gala time while teasing Ram nd tough time while trying to control him..hehehe

"Ladki ke samne dont behave as if you are impatient and eager.Behave yourself"

" Usse dekh ke mera dimag kaam nahi kartha sirf dil hi kaam kartha hai aur woh bhi bahut joron se dhadaktha hai..phir kaha se I should be in my senses.."

Loved these lines soo much di..haha..poor Ram..pura ghayal hai pyaar mein..or Vik usko sambhalne mein😆
Details leke aa..i wanna marry her..haha..kitna fast hai Ram..Priya se baat tak nhi hui thik se or direct mrg..😉
Priya a simple nd beautifull girl..she is concerned about her students nd requested Ram for a speech for them..very sweet of her..

Omg Ram directly proposed her..big big shock for Priya😆
Can't wait to read her reaction nd answer..
Update next part soon di..nd plz pm me if possible..

Very well written nd fab job Di..👏
Loved it to the core..
Thank u soo much for writting nd also sharing it..

Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

just mind blowing di.. Thank u sooo much di for writing such a beautiful os.. Now eagerly waiting for last part..; plz di update soon...

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hi just loved it pls update the last part soon

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hi Viji,

First of all I m sweetly surprised to see a story from u. Its just SUPERB dear.

It does not seem as a first attempt. ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 U have written it soo beautifully that I m simply smiling while reading.

When I read that Ram waiting for Priya part I just Rofled. And Ram-Vik part is just awesome. They are just inseperable. Vik became a match-maker.😆 😆

I can easily imagine Ram before he confessed.😆 Wonderful work dear. Just loved it. Waiting for the next part.

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Vikram wanted to tease Ram..kya hai iss ladki mein?She is a simple lady.Tu ne tho world level beauties ko dekha hai.
R: She has some charm and grace..She is gorgeous for me..mere aankhon se dekh.Kitni khoobsoorath hai..I want to get lost in those beautiful eyes...Errr
V: Mujhe kisi ki aankhon se dekhna nahi hai.I just wanted to make you blurt out your feelings

Very interesting story. Ram had fallen for Priya at first sight. Above lines were so funny. I was smiling ear to ear while reading those lines.

Will wait to see what will be Priya's reaction, since it has only two parts, I m sure she will say yess only.

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

first part was awesome

ram is in love with priya and he confessed also let's see wat will priya say continues oon

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armanz

@armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
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OMG this is awesomely written.
Viji will give you my full comment after reaching my home.
you for this beautiful.

Edited ...

Coming to the part ..

First sweetly shocked and surprised to read an OS from You ..
The words of yours just slided with the flow.. So intresting , so soothening and so tempting to read what next ..
Brilliantly penned down ...
Ithna achha title hai jo "Love at first sight "

Mesmerizingly You have written clearly Ram's love at first sight ..
And while seeing her he is going gaga over her and with out second thought he has given the appointment to her ...AWWW HE IS CHOOO CUTE CHOOO CUTE ..
Priya is like you said simple and yelegant and very intelligent and thinking about her students ..
She asked him A meeting for her students ...
Gosh Vikram and As well as Ram also surprised by her offer ...
Beuatifully you described the part ..

Vikram acted like broker here ..I rofled over that scene .. 😆
ANd After Knwoing Priya is going to see some groom ..He called her to tell his feelings
wah wah kya baath hai
I loved it
She is all surprised what might be he wants from me...
When she heard his proposal from him ..
She was in big shock

OMG OMG you quoted evrything so beautifulyy ...
and now cant wait for next part ..
jaldi se update dena...
Love you for this .. 🤗

Thank you so so much for all your appreciation.It means a lot to me.

I thought of writing some Ram-Priya-Pihu saga long back but didn't..as you know 20th March is one important and most memorable day of my life I just felt to write and started immediately and went with the flow.

You know I love humour and so tried to give some funny lines.

Am grinning ear to ear while reading your comment as well as blushing .Its very lovely and very encouraging.The smileys are simply mindblowing.I will try to give next update soon.

Neel I owe so much to you..Thanks for being there with me always.Love you always.🤗

Edited by armanz - 11 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: armanz

Thank you so so much for all your appreciation.It means a lot to me.
I thought of writing some Ram-Priya-Pihu saga long back but didn't..as you know 20th March is one important and most memorable day of my life I just felt to write and started immediately and went with the flow.

You know I love humour and so tried to give some funny lines.

Am grinning ear to ear while reading your comment as well as blushing .Its very lovely and very encouraging.The smileys are simply mindblowing.I will try to give next update soon.

Neel I owe so much to you..Thanks for being there with me always.Love you always.🤗

Awww Thank you so much
And I know your reason behind it
Iam sweetly surprised actually by knowing the reason
Iam also smiling while reading your reply and felt happy ..
Common don't make me climb heights 😆with your praisings
Love you too 🤗

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Preethi

@nprithi2002

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

hai

nice os

update as soon as possible...

eagerly waiting...

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

HI Di.. 😊

Its awesome.. 👏 ⭐️
Though simple.. bt superbly executed... 👏 ⭐️
Raya first meet superb.. Bechara Raam.. 😉 😆
R Last mein Priya ... 😲 😆
loved it.. 😛

thanks for pm
continue soon.. 😊

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