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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: 123fiza

Di its ur first os n its awesome ...
u wrote it so nicely...
ram fell in love...
u stopped at a wrong time
thanks fr d pm...cont soon..waiting

Thank you so much Fiza.

Ram is head over heels in love with Priya.

Sorry but couldnt help it so had to stop there.

My pleasure.will post soon.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Heyyy
you going to update today ..
waiting agerly to know My gorgoeus priya reaction ..

I am sorry Neel not yet started ..tossing my brain to write how would be her reaction.

Just came to give replies.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
Hi just loved it pls update the last part soon

Thank you..yeah will do soon.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Hi Viji,

First of all I m sweetly surprised to see a story from u. Its just SUPERB dear.

It does not seem as a first attempt. ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 U have written it soo beautifully that I m simply smiling while reading.
When I read that Ram waiting for Priya part I just Rofled. And Ram-Vik part is just awesome. They are just inseperable. Vik became a match-maker.😆 😆

I can easily imagine Ram before he confessed.😆 Wonderful work dear. Just loved it. Waiting for the next part.

Madhu am happy to see your comment.

Thank you so much for reading it.

I am humbled with your appreciation.

Hope I would live up to the expectation in next part too.

will try to post soon.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: armanz

I am sorry Neel not yet started ..tossing my brain to write how would be her reaction.
Just came to give replies.

Hmm
okk wil be waiting

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems
Vikram wanted to tease Ram..kya hai iss ladki mein?She is a simple lady.Tu ne tho world level beauties ko dekha hai.
R: She has some charm and grace..She is gorgeous for me..mere aankhon se dekh.Kitni khoobsoorath hai..I want to get lost in those beautiful eyes...Errr
V: Mujhe kisi ki aankhon se dekhna nahi hai.I just wanted to make you blurt out your feelings
Very interesting story. Ram had fallen for Priya at first sight. Above lines were so funny. I was smiling ear to ear while reading those lines.

Will wait to see what will be Priya's reaction, since it has only two parts, I m sure she will say yess only.

Thank you..I am happy I could bring a smile on your face.

Yes she has to say Yes but how and when I am gonna give in next part.

Will update soon.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hmm
okk wil be waiting

Am sorry to make you wait..but kya karu..couldnt do my job..

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
first part was awesome
ram is in love with priya and he confessed also let's see wat will priya say continues oon

Thank you..

Lets see how it would end up in next part.

Yeah will give soon.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: nprithi2002
hai
nice os
update as soon as possible...
eagerly waiting...

Heelo..

Thank you.

Yeah will try to give asap.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sinalbest
HI Di.. 😊

Its awesome.. 👏 ⭐️
Though simple.. bt superbly executed... 👏 ⭐️
Raya first meet superb.. Bechara Raam.. 😉 😆
R Last mein Priya ... 😲 😆
loved it.. 😛

thanks for pm
continue soon.. 😊

Thank you Sagar for loving it.

Its my pleasure bro..

I am glad you read and commented.