OS: Love At First Sight Last Part In Page 12, Thanks Note Pg 21 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lpsakshi

kamaal ki update yar

Thank you so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesome story
cnt wait 4 the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
very nice. looking forward to next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: love4raya

one word: BEAUTIFUL! :)


Thanks a ton.I am glad you felt like that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: armanz


I am waiting dear.




sry for late...
waiting fr d next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Omg Viji Di..an OS from u nd that too so so beautifull one..😃
Its awesome di..
Awwiee blushy blushy Ram nd love at first sight for him..😳
The way he is behaving like a teenager..going ga ga over Priya, his mind nd heart not in his control..his condition seeing Priya how he gets lost in her forgetting everything..too good di..very well penned down👍🏼

Vik having gala time while teasing Ram nd tough time while trying to control him..hehehe

"Ladki ke samne dont behave as if you are impatient and eager.Behave yourself"

" Usse dekh ke mera dimag kaam nahi kartha sirf dil hi kaam kartha hai aur woh bhi bahut joron se dhadaktha hai..phir kaha se I should be in my senses.."


Loved these lines soo much di..haha..poor Ram..pura ghayal hai pyaar mein..or Vik usko sambhalne mein😆
Details leke aa..i wanna marry her..haha..kitna fast hai Ram..Priya se baat tak nhi hui thik se or direct mrg..😉
Priya a simple nd beautifull girl..she is concerned about her students nd requested Ram for a speech for them..very sweet of her..

Omg Ram directly proposed her..big big shock for Priya😆
Can't wait to read her reaction nd answer..
Update next part soon di..nd plz pm me if possible..

Very well written nd fab job Di..👏
Loved it to the core..
Thank u soo much for writting nd also sharing it..

Thankyou So much Viro...yeah me too was wondering whether i can write still i gave it a try.
Glad and really happy that you liked it.
Ram is literally flat for her beauty and simplicity..so all this lovey dovey blushing by him.
Ha Ram Kapoor hai na thoda aisa hi sochtha hai..I love her na I will defo marry her.
Yeah gonna give her reaction soon.
Hope you would like the next part too.I will definitely pm you gal.
Thank you so much for all the appreciation.I am all smiles.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

Res thankgod izzat bach gayi

*UNRES*


Omg omg i cant believe this firstly i never expected something like this from you such a neat flow of words best thing the story is from ram's pov😳 and my favorite jodi after raya mere jai veeru had so many scenes in fact more than raya😆
love at first sight for ram ji ❤️he is totally smitten by priya and the story looks very convinced with all that guest lecture thing thankgod this will continue with second part looking forward viji

once again you rock mam👏

Finally you commented..I was waiting eagerly.
Kya karu Mani I too never thought I would attempt something like this..Ha meri story tumhare Ram's POV se hai...Jai Veeru thode jyaada aaye kyunki I believe that good friendship is the best relation ever and I can add humour too ani.
Ram tho madly in love for Priya..will finish in next part.

Thanks a ton for the wonderful and lovely appreciation..I am ☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: aiyathasan

just mind blowing di.. Thank u sooo much di for writing such a beautiful os.. Now eagerly waiting for last part..; plz di update soon...

Thank you so much dear..its my pleasure.
Yeah will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sss283

res🥳

Huraaayyy os from viji di 🤗🤗
hi angel ..saw your mom is a writer now 😃😃
awesome writing di
hahhaa would have given anything to watch ram's face when he saw priya for the first time 😆😆😆
extremely good
diii you stopped when ram proposed ...hawww
continue sooonnn please


LOL Subbu I just had a broad grin when I saw your first two lines...
Thank you sis
Ram..Cute n awestruck when he saw Priya Shayad dil mein music bhi bajaa hoga..(Tune mari entriyaare dil mein bhaji Ghantiyare)
Ha Priya ka reaction kaise hoga wahi tho interesting haina..

Will continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy
you going to update today ..
waiting agerly to know My gorgoeus priya reaction ..

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