OS: Love At First Sight Last Part In Page 12, Thanks Note Pg 21 - Page 12

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

it's wonderful story...beautifully written...sweet and simple...loved it to the core.

I laughed when Priya said "kyun"😆...I imagine ram's face ...how foolish he is looking😆

I like Vikram part...true friend.

Ram went to see her in clg for reply😆...then send flowers gifts to woo her.

Then Ram in white kurtha to impress her again😆...but I really loved the dialogues...this time she accepted.

wow first she hug then kiss on his cheeks...Ram truly in cloud nine😳

present part is Ram's confession...love the part...both get married ...and they kissed😳

pura describe karte toh aur achha hota

beautiful story with beautiful ending...enjoy fully.

thanks for PM...and waiting for more OS, FF from you

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Hayeee wahhh kya update tha it was full of drama ,love,romance ,emotion n full entertaining os n pls do write more n vikram best buddy of ram as always n thank u for pm

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

OMG...The feeling after reading this is...can't express in words...I was flying while reading...too good...loved the update...beautiful...❤️


and thank you for PM😛...will be waiting for another story from you

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

lovely update❤️
gr8 job👏
waiting 4 next part!!!
continue soon...
and plz do pm me 4 next parts!!!

Originally posted by: sssabcd

wonderful update

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Wonderful update Viji. Ram's part is very well written. His ego, messing the situation, thadap for Priya everyting is awesomely described.

As usual, Vik cute as true friend. Priya is simly soo sweet.

Ended with a kiss😳 thats soo fantastic.😉 😛

Do write more. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor

hi vijju this was so sweet i so loved it yaara i had a smile reading this update beautiful and so elaborate no one can say that this was your first attempt

and u presented the story in ram's Pov so neatly actually i felt bad for him when he was craving for her she literally made him cry 😭

Even i was surprised with the word "kyun" coz the reply should be kya? na this is unique haan the confession part was so beautiful birla temple ante mana birla mandir aa? good good i like it

and vijju plz do write more i want to read more i heard one big bad news last night which made me so sad this OS has somewhat lessened by grief

Will wait for next piece of work

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the pm.

Omg ram kapoor n unka andaaz bilkul alag hai propose karne ka.

Priya ki confused n unable to understand things is very natural, at the same time ram is not leaving any stone unturned to get his love.

Too good write up.

Final part was too good where priya comes n accepts his love.

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

You know what Vijji ...

I re read this one shot again ...

THe two parts were just fabulous ..

And after knowing that some one special ..

I imagined her charecter in priya's place ...

Exactly she could have said "Kyun "

after that I had huge grin comparing the reality in her life ..

Lol...keep this secret between us ..

If yours some one special knows about it ..

she will give left and right to me .. 😆

Originally posted by: 123fiza

Fab update di...
priya accepted that she loves ram ...poor ram did a lot to know priya ans..bt priya to priya h.use time laga ...happy that finally they became one...
loved it ...thanks fr d pm...di u should write more 😛 ..
ur first writing that too so good...waiting fr more writings