OS: Love At First Sight Last Part In Page 12, Thanks Note Pg 21 - Page 11

Woww..fab update Viji di..
Priya's reaction ' Kyun' was too good..😆 its obvious she will ask this as they hardly knows nd meet each other..very nicely written her reaction nd Ram's confusion..
Ram directly went to her college for answer nd how he tried to woo her by sending flowers, gifts nd all..Priya's dileema..face off at college..Ram's bechani or tadap..beautifully describe without any rush to wrap that part up soon..👏
Finally Sudhir her friend, philosopher nd guide came in picture to clear her dileema..
Finally hero in white kurta left all set to win her..
Confession at mandir with beautifull dialogues straight from heart..loved it so much
Golu Ram didnt understand Priya's answer from her smile actually he didnt even notice that in his confusion ..😆 Vik his saviour came in action😆 he is a true frnd of Ram nd was present with him everytime..
Priya's confession in office with Kiss on his cheeks..golu abhi bhi confuse tha😆 but atlast they got together..lovely scene
Finally both got married nd this beautifull story got end..
Very sweet, beautifull nd cute story..loved it to the core..
Do write more..
Tanx for pm..
Sry for late..

Super Like...Awesome Keep on writing such Drool worthy OS...Hats Off👏

Hi Di.. 😊

sry for late..
Fantastic update.. 👏 ⭐️
loved the end.. 😛
thanks for pn...

nice post..👍🏼 feels like romance is in the air ❤️

waiting for the next part. pl. post at the earliest.

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

OMG ... ANother wonderful update from you ..

Just incredible yaar ..

You have a sweet flow of words ...

Thank you am ☺️

Simply superb ... I so can expect priyas reaction ..

and than Rams talk with vik ..Lol I rofled ..

and than priya ka rishtha ..shipra excitement ,sudhir waiting for priyas confomation

everything is soo cute ..

Ram waiting for piya sending gifts ,boquets as causual as for the business man

but not our professor priya .. when Ram confronted her in college

Her reaction were very obvious by Ram's out burst ...

I liked the sudhir dialogues when he told to priya ,the rishta got canceled and You can think abut Ram kapoor once again ..

Ram is a rigid businessman and Priya is benevolent woman. They suit perfectly to each other as opposites attract.

Ram and Vik is the best relation I penned down as I have much faith in friendship.

And the meeting awww our angel in white dress ,Ram in white kurtha hayeee

super cute ..

Obviously she will be gorgeous in what ever attire but in white she will look angelic..Ram na patane ke liye white kurtha pehna and it worked..😉

I just loved it ...Ram confessed her genuinely and she fallen for him ..

wonderfull excuted ...

Thank you..They were from his heart..unknowingly and with fear of losing her he poured his feelings.

But but Ram hasn't realised how poor ..

Yeah he didn't realize

Vik call made priya to think and she has gone to Ram's office room

Aww my cute golu cried when he saw priya ...

That is so sweet

ye kya hogaya ...

Piya hugged him but he was still in shock

Awww she kissed him ..Lol ofcourse on his cheek ...

Superb 😳

Thank you..shock laga 😉he was thinking he has lost her but she was there in front of him and above all she accepted him so he was in a sweet shock

And the last but not least .. Aww they were married

and their first night is on ...super superb simply superb

He asked her permisiion ..that is soo sweet yaar why you ended there ..

YOu could have written their omance na.. lo l

Romance isnt my genre, ask your kiddo she is the best at it..will see in future if I write. RaYa inspire karenge toh dekhenge.😛

But really your flow of words made this lengthy update also short for my greedyness

Love you forthis ..

Thank you for saving me ..and my request

I owe you big time

love you 🤗

Nice ending of you r OS ..

loved it ..Hoping to see somemore os from you..pretty please

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Priya's reaction to Ram's confession was strange as she has no feelings for him
aww ram was getting mad as she didn't rpl to his confession
above all a match has came for priya and she was thinking of ram
vikram was their with his friend to support him
great she talked to her father to come out from her diliema yipee she also confessed that she also love him
yeah they are now married
vik neha always teases him
now raya became one beautiful ending

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

JUST AWE 😳

Originally posted by: contactcharu

awesome OS!!!

Originally posted by: sss283

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huraayyy

thanku di thanku sooo much

love u loads 😳

eee priya was shocked ...😆

its so beautifully described

dreamyyy 😳

ram ko shock laga ...hehe

awww poor ram ...coudnt express his feeling ...priya got wrong meaning

yaayyy priya thinking about ram...though she dint know why 😉

awesommmeee di 😃

haha ram ko buddhu banaya ..lol

golu ram

sooo cuteee

finally at peace..raya together ...awieee

am off to dream world

thankuu di

waiting for more works from your side