OS: Love At First Sight Last Part In Page 12, Thanks Note Pg 21 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
You know what Vijji ...

I re read this one shot again ...
THe two parts were just fabulous ..
And after knowing that some one special ..
I imagined her charecter in priya's place ...
Exactly she could have said "Kyun "
after that I had huge grin comparing the reality in her life ..
Lol...keep this secret between us ..
If yours some one special knows about it ..
she will give left and right to me .. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Fab update di...
priya accepted that she loves ram ...poor ram did a lot to know priya ans..bt priya to priya h.use time laga ...happy that finally they became one...
loved it ...thanks fr d pm...di u should write more 😛 ..
ur first writing that too so good...waiting fr more writings
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Beautifully written yar.Hats off to ur talent...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
thank you for the pm 😛
priya ka reaction was good "kyu" i was laughing 😆
ram went to her college for asking her reply 😆 then sending gifts n flowers...lovely potrayal of ram 😛
vikram part was too good...he advised him n realised him his faults 😛
priya was in confused state but at last she agreed 😛
it was sweet, lovely os 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

OMG ... ANother wonderful update from you ..
Just incredible yaar ..
You have a sweet flow of words ...
Simply superb ... I so can expect priyas reaction ..
and than Rams talk with vik ..Lol I rofled ..
and than priya ka rishtha ..shipra excitement ,sudhir waiting for priyas confomation
everything is soo cute ..
Ram waiting for piya sending gifts ,boquets as causual as for the business man
but not our professor priya .. when Ram confronted her in college
Her reaction were very obvious by Ram's out burst ...
I liked the sudhir dialogues when he told to priya ,the rishta got canceled and You can think abut Ram kapoor once again ..

And the meeting awww our angel in white dress ,Ram in white kurtha hayeee
super cute ..
I just loved it ...Ram confessed her genuinely and she fallen for him ..
wonderfull excuted ...
But but Ram hasn't realised how poor ..
Vik call made priya to think and she has gone to Ram's office room
Aww my cute golu cried when he saw priya ...
That is so sweet
ye kya hogaya ...
Piya hugged him but he was still in shock
Awww she kissed him ..Lol ofcourse on his cheek ...
Superb 😳

And the last but not least .. Aww they were married
and their first night is on ...super superb simply superb
He asked her permisiion ..that is soo sweet yaar why you ended there ..
YOu could have written their omance na.. lo l

But really your flow of words made this lengthy update also short for my greedyness
Love you forthis ..
Thank you for saving me ..and my request
I owe you big time
love you 🤗
Nice ending of you r OS ..
loved it ..Hoping to see somemore os from you..pretty please

Ohh MYY Am so so elated seeing your wonderful and encouraging words for my write up. I dunno why I felt to write and how I could finish the story but am indebted to you two for backing me. Romance likhna meri bas ki kam nahin..tell your friend she is the best. Anything for you and owe was a big word for that.Thanks a tonne but some more ke bare mein I dunno now..plot milega toh dekhoomgi but I am honoured to see your appreciation..I am all smiles.
Thank you.
Love you.🤗
keep smiling.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Priya's reaction to Ram's confession was strange as she has no feelings for him
aww ram was getting mad as she didn't rpl to his confession
above all a match has came for priya and she was thinking of ram
vikram was their with his friend to support him
great she talked to her father to come out from her diliema yipee she also confessed that she also love him
yeah they are now married
vik neha always teases him
now raya became one beautiful ending

Thank you for your pleasant comment. I felt good that you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bssamyukta

Hi

wonderful...total ga flat ayipoyanandi...meeru chala baaga rasaru...keep it up...ee forum lo telugu vallu chala mandi unnatlunnaru...anyways Iam thankful to u for posting this fantastic os...would love to read some more frm u...even though it was ur first try...u did a wonderful job...👏
Thanks and regards
samyukta

Samyukta I started reading your comment casually but telugu lo vrasaru ani sink ayyaka chala chala happy ga anpinchindi. Inko telugu member telisaru..I am glad.
Ika update kosthe mee comment na moham pai oka pedda smile teeskochindi and I am feeling great you know.
I am very very happy..If I write in future I will pm u.
Thank you so much. It was so good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: armanz

Special note for Subbu..Hope you will enjoy this OS on your special day.


Thanku di 😳😳😳
makes me feel so special
love u ❤️





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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
u r awasome writer...plzz pm me if u write in future... :-)
n thnk u sooo much 4the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hats of to u.. U did a brilliant job.. U described every moment so perfectly, after a long time read such a beautiful story... ..waiting for ur another new os..

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