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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Part 4..

Nice update..
Driver- Ram's talk nd Priya's exp in that scene was funny..😆
Nok jhok of RaYa in car, Priya worried for Pihu..lovely scene
Finally Vik ko shock lag hi gaya..they way we all wanted to see in show too..office mein aake usse jatka lage😆
Peehu will get changed with Priya's love only..when she will realize that Priya loves her alot more than anyone else..
Good one..loved Pihu- Priya pics..
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Part 5..

Nice update..
Sammy got changed.. 😲 too good dialogues..kash aisa kuch koi show mein actually mein Pihu se kahe..she needs to know what she is herself before blaming others..
Hope Suhani is fine..
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Part 6..

Nice update..
With Pics nd song..nicely executed
Broken Pihu realized now..helpless Priyannd angry Ram..lovely pics of Priya in it..good
Who is this anti hero?
Sry for late..

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raya50-50

@raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

hints.

khush and Sammy is taking Suhani to hospital

and admitted suhani in a hospital

Sammy is tensed and khush is about to cry by thinking suhanj and child's state

in KM ram is coming out of the room with angry like a lion,priya is following him

,and trying to stop him

in pihu's room ,in pihu's intellectual mind a small debate

as"what mumma is doing whether it is right or not?"

"whether dad should punish Sammy or not"

why dad should punish him i am the one who compelled Sammy to

marry me eventhough he loved suhani finally he had gone with her.

Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Small preview is good
waiting for the update

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raya50-50

@raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
Small preview is good
waiting for the update

thanks for liking the post Aanchal i don't have time to update now ,i will update soon,in the same post

Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago

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raya50-50

@raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

I am going to complete my foolishness with this post,

after admitting suhani in hospital,

suhani gives a birth to baby boy,

while she is in unconscious state Sammy is watching that baby,

he is sitting neer the baby,

when suhani get conscious ,she is shocked to see Sammy near the baby she is shouting on him,

and asked him to go away from the baby,

initially Sammy is requesting her to let him to be near the baby,because it is his kid,

but she is refusing to let him,

after so many arguments Sammy is trying to take the baby with him,by telling that is his kid and it will be with him always ,he had all the rights on the kid,

while he is leaving suhani took on surgical instrument and killed him,

after that Sammy matter over

suhani went to jail

baby is with neha and vikky

and pihu is trying to came out from the all good and bad memories of her beloved hubby,

suddenly oru gnana udhayam in pihu's mind,

she suddenly concentrated on her dad and dad's ambition

,it is the first day she is going to start her innings in kapoor industries,she is drivng her car,

since kapoor ladies did not know to drive without accident,

she hit another car

suddenly

another ar door open,

after that one shoe,

after that one leg,

one head,

singahniya's son sanjai singahniya entered into the BALH,

BALH Fast track is playing in the background,

(Many arguments, many fights,

with that,

singhaniya with evil plan convinced ram to do some projects together,

normally en ramkku soft heart so he will accept partnership)

in the office ram and singhaniya introducing pihu to sanjay and sanjay to pihu

there pihu and sanjay decided to prove their power and talent to each other)

BALH PART II WITH PIHU AND SANJAY

BALH PART I WITH OUR RAM PRIYA IN PART I

PART 1 & PART 2 SIMAULTANEOUSLY

(ORE KALLULA 2 MANGO)

TWO MANGOES IN ONE STONE

BYE FRIENDS

Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago

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rrrrrlllll

@rrrrrlllll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: jodude
nice ending ...😊

yes u r right jo 😊

Edited by rrrrrlllll - 11 years ago

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

part 1
awesomely written the reasons u penned down for her weired behaviour is suparb I actaully can consider it to story so do write more will be moving for next...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

so peehu is isn't it changed she just wanted to give note pain to Priya... so sad Priya had to left Shuhani in this condition due to peehu... moving for next...

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