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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks😊
Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vironikajain

Good one..

Very well handled..Pihu is mentally disturbed..


😊 thankz,


actually cvs can use pihu's character for making this serial as emotional drama or thriller too,

but they are refuse to give some good jobs to the talented actors/actresses,

actually this serial is like training institute,like,where the week students will be trained more to,gain the name from the public,

in the same way they are giving more screen space to those who are week in acting
Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that would a really good end to the track and it will make BALH look really good. But expecting EK to even think of something like this is like expecting a 2 year old to become a doctor. IMPOSSIBLE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: noor321

Wow that would a really good end to the track and it will make BALH look really good. But expecting EK to even think of something like this is like expecting a 2 year old to become a doctor. IMPOSSIBLE


they can build the strong storyline here afteralso,if they ready and interested to do,


our ek and cvs will make as a 'doctor' even an unborn child,😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice❤️ vey nice update👏👏... ...you did not pm me😭...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupam_dil

Nice❤️ vey nice update👏👏... ...you did not pm me😭...


i didnot send pm to any one di,if i did anything in future i will never miss to pm u di,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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small narration

part-2

********i can do anything for our PRINCESS*************

actually in previous part raya were in priya's room

(ram and priya have nice convo,ram holds priya's hand)




ram:you know priya in these seven years ,i tried hard to make peehu understand what is wrong and right,But i failed in that,you know why"you were not with me"



now i am really happy ,priya because u r with me,in these three months many unexpected things happened,now i had shared every thing with u , i really relieved,

(their is a cute eyelock,)






priya:don't worry mr.kapoor i am always happy,i will always think about u and our kids,






(raya about to hug)

suddenly...




Priya:(shouts )why did u come here

(Ram is shocked after hearing that)

(before 50 seconds)

Ram:i am really happy now
(suddenly priya hears "natasha saying where are u sammy i am searching u",sorry it is not natasha,it is peehu,peehu is about to look into priya's room,before that priya had seen her she stepped back
and said as"why did u come here")

NOW

(ram also realised peehu's presence)

priya:in your room u told me everything,then why you came here

Ram:hello EXCUSE ME ,wait a minute,u can't control me,and my family ANYMORE nothing change in that , and for your kind information i came here to take this presenttion materials

Peehu:come on dad she is nothing to us.

(ram and peehu came out from priya's room)

peehu:why did u allow her work in ur office

Ram:actually peehu,i am doing all this only for our khush,since he is with her,i had let her to work in that office,in which she was working before i take over that
if u didnot like that,i will send her out from that office

peehu:then it is ok dad,its for khush..na

(priya came back to mumbai

ram came back to mumbai

peehu came back to mumbai)

(after few days,peehu is purchasing in something in the mall )
suddenly,she heard priya's voice,)

peehu:mom...here...!

(she is searching she find priya and suhani there)

Suhani:stop controlling me,

Priya:what,am i controlling u!

Suhani:yes u are always trying to control me as"don't do this...do this..."

i am really fed up with that,
(she adds)yes you left your house for me,i am staying with,but for that ,you can't control me always like this

(priya with teary eyes)

(after listening all this peehu rushes to priya)
and holds her hand and said to suhani)

peehu:what do u think in your mind suhani,she is my mom,how dare you to insult her in public,she left me only for you,and only because of you,But you are insulting her,i won't let you to do that ,i am going to take my mom with me,

(peehu is taking priya with her,

suhani with teary eyes looking at priya,priya also turned her head to look at her,
tears rolls down from suhani's eyes)

(two days before)

(priya came to her house,khush came to her
Ram phoned priya and asked whether she reached home or not)

Priya:don't worry mr.kapoor i reached,

(after she cut the call khush came to receice priya)

khush:mom how was the trip mom

PRIYA:IT WAS OK,but many unexpected things were happened there,

khush:what mom,

(she said everything about to khush annd suhani)

khush:Is that uncle is psychiatrist ,we don't know that mom,but i noticed that that uncle always asking about peehu and always trying to talk with her, pihu told me that that uncle was irritating her by asking something to her unneccesarily,now only i understand the actual matter

priya:i don't know what to do,she is in that condition,i left her there

suhani:u need to go there mom,

Priya:then who will take care of u that too,in this condition,

khush:naani(shipra,.)

(after that they put that shopping mall drama)

now:

peehu and priya in car,peehu starts

peehu:what are u thinking

Priya:nothing

peehu:i know you will be in dream land because"i am taking u to our house,..sorry it is my house,priya is looking at her shockingly)

don't think you are coming back to home to control us,
i am just brings you here because of only"you are the one who gave birth to me"
you will be like a servent in my house


(they reaches KM)

(priya in mind i can bear anything for you my princess)

peehu:if you don't mind can you bring the bags from the car

(peehu entered into km,juhi came there)

juhi:peehu...did u buy that perfume that i have asked to buy for your sid dad

peehu:of course juhi maa ,how can i forget

juhi:where is it,

Peehu:it is coming behind

Juhi:is driver bringing that

(juhi looks at the entrence)

------it is ending here with juhi's shocked face--------


ps:q and a
1)why there is the same pic that waS present in raya green room?,

priya bought one copy from KM,she she wants to live atleast, with her ram's memories,SHE PACKED THAT TOO IN DELHI TRIP LUGGAGE







Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i can do anything for our PRINCESS it is from both ra and ya

that is why i gave it as "our"



all the comments and suggestions are welcomed
Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab update
Ram come fast nd save Priya from Pihu

cnt wait 4 the next

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