RaYa OS - phir le aaya hoon.........updt last part pg 5

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Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Nice part...
Loved how its shaping up...
Pls contn soon...
Thnx fr the pm...

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jeena1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Totally different jineee,new style he.But mujhe second part ki intezar he jab real scenes ayenge raya ke.Jaldi update do.

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jmehta1957

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nice start...keep going...priya ne internship bahot saal pehle ki thi to kya dono main pyaar nahi huva

kab karib ayenge dono...

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sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

very nice start...but yaar apne os kyon likha??Ato mujhe ff ya ss laga..cntinue karo pls..but os nehi ff ya ss banao ise..boht acchi ff hogi..n thank u 4 pm..

Edited by sampa123 - 11 years ago

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145665

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice message regarding unity and teamwork.

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Advitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice start dear...different view of imagining raya..nice changes is always accepted..good going ... u can extend this story dear...thnks for the pm...

Edited by sakshirambalh - 11 years ago

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice start..different yet very interesting story
Loved the way u have written.. 👏
Cont soon..

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love4raya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hey Jinny another OS from u and a fab one once again.. :) Do continue soon.. :)

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sushfiza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Lovelystart of d story...
Fb scene are interesting...
Cont soon

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Wowww...sounds different...really i like it..i mean pahele bhi mai tumhari writting padi thi...nd i like ur writting..so thz time yeh story toh pasand anni hi thi..nd the gud things is...tumne flashback jayada nehi dikhaya..1st update me hi flashback kafi agge nikal gaya which i liked very much..superb going..waiting 4 next...thanku so much 4 pm :)

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