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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar wa8ing 4 the update jaldi dona...
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Originally posted by: jeena1993



<font color="#000099">Leena,thanks u read all the parts and comment.Weseraya ne kya bat kia mene detail me bataya to he.Ar hn mere ff me ram surila he hehehehe mujhe gana pasand he na to mere hero ko bina gawake chodunga kya ????😆Ar ye gana "BABUL" film ka he.will update but do tin din lagenge.</font>


thanks for the info bas RaYa se hi toh pet nahi bharta do update soon waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-9

After finishing the song Ram looked at priya,dono ekdusre ke ankho me hi khoye hue hote hen tabhi joe ake ramko hug karta he.

Joe-Hei ram kya gana gaya yar bilkul woi imotion woi dard tumhare gane me jhalakraha tha jo ki iss gane ke liye chaiye.

Ritta-Priya,mene kahatha na humara dost bahat achha singer he.

Vikram-Kyon priya,tumne kbhi expect nai kia hoga na ????Bolo bolo.

Priya-Ya u all are right mene expect nai kia tha ki ram itna achha gapaten hen.Realy ram u have a super voice,bilkul dil ko chhunewala.

Ram,Issiliye to gaya taki dil tak pahanchpaye.

Ritta-Kya kaha tumne ram ????

Ram-No nothing chalo chalke khana khate hen badi bhuk lagi he.He again looked at priya.Priya sirf chupchap khadi hoke ramko dekhti rahi jabtak neha ake usse khane k liye nailegayi.Neha samjh parahi thi ki priya apne dil ar dimag ki kasmkas me he to wo usse confuse nahi karna chahti thi issliye wo chuprahi.All had great time having dinner together.It was time for go home.

Ram-Chalo priya,me tumhe ghar drop kardeta hun.

Priya-You dont worry me neha ar vikram k sath chalijaungi,kyon neha ???

Vikram-Hann hann...Neha use bichh me hi tokte hue boli

Neha-Sorry priya tum ram k sath chalijao,actually mujhe ghar k liye kuchh saman lene jana he,he na vikram.She indicateed vik to leave them alone.

Vikram-Han han yad aya hume jana he bye bye chalo neha barna late hojayega.He grabbed neha's hand and rushed towords car.

Ram-To,chalen.Priya just noded yes.They came to car after saying bye to joe and ritta.Ram silently drove the car.

Ram-Priya itni chup kyon ho ????

Priya-Nai bas thakgaya hun,but realy aj ka din bahat hi achha tha.I realy enjoyed your company.

Ram-Its my pleassure mam.both smiled.After sometime priya doze off in the car.Sometime later they reached priya's house.

Ram-Priya,uthho tumhara ghar agaya he.Priya woke up with a jerk.

Priya-Am sorry,kab ankh laggayi pata hi nai chala.Realy realy sorry.

Ram-Relax priya its ok,tum thakgayi thi jao andar jake aramse sojana.Priya came out of car.
Priya-Ram thank u for the wonderfull day onceagain bye goodnight.

Ram-(SMILED) Goodnight u too.He rushed out for his home.

Priya,entered her house with the extra key humming the song "Ek din ap youn humko miljayenge raho me fool hi fool khiljayenge hum ne sochha na tha lala la lalaaa...".Kartik noticed the pleassure on her face which was lost long before.He is very happy seeing her sis like this.

Kartik-Di,aj bade khus lagrahe ho kya bat he ???????Bde gane sane bolejarahe hen.Priya smiled came close to him,ruffeled his hair and said...

Priya-Nai bas ese hi aj itnedino ke bad koi esa dost mila jisne mere man ko thoda halka kardiya.Bas man halka ho to dil v khus dil khus to gana v gana chaiye na.

Kartik-Woho,thats great.But ye dost kan he thoda hume v to batayi he taki hum v unka sukriya ada karsake ?????

Priya-Its Ram.

Kartik-Ram bhaiya,di sachh kahu he is perffect for u.

Priya-Oye,chupkar tu jesa sochhraha he wesa kuchh nai he ok hum sirf dost hen


Kartik-ok dekhte hen ye dost he kuchh ar...He loughed loudly and went to his room.

Priya-Han han hasle yesa kuchh nai he.Pagal kainka.She went to freshen up.Dressed in loosefit baby pink tops and white shorts she setteled herself in the armchair.It was fulll mooon night,moon is florishing its pure white ray all over the world.Silent night with this beautifull moon light is perfect for priya to flow with her thoughts.It is strange for her that,how Ram had made a soundless entry in her life.He had unobtrusively made an entry into her heart in such a lil time even she could not know herself,HOW ??Is she thinking too much ???Is kartik right,she is falling for him ?????No that can not be possible.She almost closed her heart for anyone,how can he enter ???How can she trust on him ,their relationship most of all on herself ?????She witnessed the bitterness of her parent's relationship and she couldnot overcome that bitterness till date.How can she allow herself to flow with the imotion which is true or false even she dont know ???But those eyes of ram !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!How much sincearity,pain and love she found in them ????LOVE !!!!!!!!!!!!Is that love??????????She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.Stood up closing the balcony door she made her way to bed for a sleepless night.

Shipra collapsed on the sofa where her husband is sitting now.Her head is spinning now.What a sin they have done ??????They already destroyed the childhood of their daughter due to their own fault,which was unnessesery,which they could avoide but no they destroyed those moments which could be memorable for their family.FAMILY,they did not even think that they have a famly.Jo kuchh bhi hua usse to wo badal nai sakte kamse kam apni beti ki jindegi me khusiya lane ki koshis to karsakte the but nai unhone to uski life ko ek andhere me dhakel diya he abhi.

Shipra-Sudheer humse kyon ye galti hogayi ?????Kyon ??hamne jitni galtian ki thi usko sudharne ka wakt aya to usko sudharne k bajay humne dusri galti ki????Ye galti ki sazza hume milti to mujhe koi fark nai padta par priya !!!!!!!!!!usne to koi gunah nai kia.Humesha pyar k liye tarashti rahi,ar jab use pyar dene ka samay aya hum pyar k badle use kante me ghusne k liye force karrahe hen.She broke down sobbing heavily.Sudheer lifted her head and cradled it gently.

Sudheer-Mujhse bahat badi galti hogayi shipra,mene janbujke apni beti ki jindegi dao pe lagadiya he aj.Mujhe Rajat pe bharosha hi nai karna chaiye tha,Apni dubti hui bussiness ko bachate wakt mujhe uski intenssion k bare me pata karna chaiye tha,mujhe usiwakt pata karna chaiye tha ki rajat priya ke liye layak hi nai he.Trust me shipra mujhe lagatha priya ko rajat k sath settele karke me apne papose mukt hojaunga.Jab usne mujhe financialy help karne k badle priya ka hat manga tha tab mene kabhi apne bure sapne me v nai sochha hoga ki uske dimag me ye sab chalraha tha ???????????????Tum chinta mat karo shipra,agar mujhe apni sab kuchh v bech ke priya ki jindegi bachhani ho to me wo v karunga par apni bachhi k jindegi me ar andhera nai launga,pehle hi hamari bajese bahat suffer karchuki he meri bachhi.

Natasha and kartik became very close in past these days.Both want to spent time with each other share moments with each other.It is holiday in college,kartik insisted priya to come with him to ashiyan.Both reached there at 4pm,priya noticed the blue BMW infront of ashiyan.It took no time to her that ram is present there.She took kartik in his wheel chair and entered ashiyan.Ram is sitting with billo massi in garden,he looked at priya she looked stunning absolutely breathtaking.

Ram-Hyy priya,come sit here.Priya took blessing of billo massi and sat near her.Krtik made his way towards natasha who is playing with dhruv and panchi.Ram noticed that.

Priya-Let me check u massi,is everything fine or not ????She started her checkups.

Billo massi-Are meri bachhi mujhe kuchh nai hoga itne jaldi tum logo ko chodke japaunga kya ????ar ye munna chodega kya mujhe ????

Ram-Tik kaha apne,me apko chodunga hi nai.Priya and massi both smiled hearing this.Seeing priya,both dhruv and panchi came running towards them.Panchi ake priya ke gale lagte hue bolti he..

Panchi-Pliya di,where are u ?????Are u angry with panchi ?????
Priya-No my baby,pliya di apne panchi ar dhruv se naraj thode hi hosakti he ?????Wo to ap dono se bahat pyar karti he.

Dhruv-Pliya di chalo na hum ankh micholi khelte hen,plz plz plzbada maja ayega.

Priya-Nai nai me yahin hun aplog jake khelo.

Panchi-Lamu bhaiya plz didi se bolona ki humare sath ake khele plz pritty plz.

Dhruv-Ar ap v.Both looked so cute that ram could not denay.

Ram-Chalo na priya khelte hen,bachho ka bhi man beheljayega ar mera bhi exercise hojayega.

Priya(smilingly)-Han iski jarurat to he apke petko dekh ke lagta he.Billo massi,dhruv and panchhi giggled along with priya.

Ram-Ok,jitna chahe majak udalo Miss.Ghasspuss.Priya made a face.Again all laughed,then priya also couldnot control and laughed.Dhruv and panchi took them for play.Panchi priya k ankho me patti nandh deti he ar bolti he ki usse ab sabko dhundna he.

Dhruv-Ab majja ayega,priya di ap mujhe nai pakad paoge.

Panchi-Mujhe v.

Ram-Mujhhe v.

Priya-Dekhte hen.

Natasha and kartik are talking with each other.Both looked at raya who are playing with children.

Kartik-Both are perfect na.

Natasha-Yes for each other.

Kartik-Only,acceptance and "IZZHAR...' baki he.

Natasha-Han sahi samay pe sahi kadam lena har riste me jaruri hota he kain der na hojaye.Kartik looked at her,wo samajhraha tha natasha unke relationship k bare me bolrahi thi ,natasha wohn se uthke ake massi ko andar lejati he.Kartik bas use jate hue dekhraha tha.

Priya bas idharse udhar ghumti jarahi thi but koi hat hi nai lagraha tha bas panchhi ar dhruv ki hasi ar uske sath ram ki tease sunai derahi thi.

Priya-Ruko abhi pakadti hun.Uske per garden me rakhe pani k pipe me fasjati he ar wo girne hi wali hoti he ki ram ajata he.Dono hi lawn pe girpadte hen,ram's hand is on priya's waist and priya's head is on ram's chest.Dhruv and panchi ran into the house to call some one.She can hear the heart beat of ram.Uske bal ram ke face k upar gire hue the.priya ne apne ankhose patti kholte hue dheere se ram k uparse uthti he par fir fisaljati he,both looked at each other,for them time stood still priya is feeling the warm breath and heartbeat of ram and ram is mesmerised with priya's eye.Suddenely ram's phone rang and bothe came to conciouseness.Priya stood up and ram also.Ram recieved the call.Priya was embarassed wo apne balko tik karrahi thi.

Priya-Ra...

Ram-Hello,barbie what happend are u ok ????Me av pahanchta hun dont worry dont worry am coming.He ended the call.Sorry priya,i have to go.Even priya could not say anything and ram left.Priya stood there motionlessly as if something so precious was taken away from her and she could not do anything to stop that.Aloan tear dropped from her eye,why she is feeling heart broken when ram ignored her why ?????????????

PS-Hello friends,sorry for late update held up with study.Read and hit the like and comment if u like the update.
Edited by jeena1993 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mm very nice one waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey after so long well it's never late.


So priya n ram enjoying each others company. Hope so kartik n nutz also vik neha help them realize their love for each other. Kya yaar ye Barbie bhi na irritate karrahI hai I mean priya ko ram ko kho dene ja darr lagne laga hai.
Very interesting. Nice write up.
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
After so long...
Nice update...
Priya nd Ram re enjoying each others company nd coming closer unknowingly.
Kartik nd Nuts re also coming closer...
Hope vik neha nd kartik nuts help them to understand nd realize their feelings nd confess too...
What mistake Sudhir nd Shipra re talking about...hope Priya ko or koi chot na paunche..nd Barbie ki bhi..jaldi mystery reveal karo..
Interesting write up..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sry 4 late reply after a long time u have update, its awesome, both enjoying each others company, waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon, thx 4 PM
Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...
contn soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally update milgaya..nice part dear,they r feeling good now..waiting for next part.thanks for the pm jeena
Edited by Sakshiram - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello dear, after a long time, itne dino baad update dogi toh story bhool jaungi me, try to update fast, anyways the part was really nice, dheere dheere RaYa coming closer, nice way to describe that but where does this rajat come from?, usse hatao yaar, he is always an unwanted material b/w RaYa, don't like him and btw yeh Barbie ka kissa bhi ab khatam karo, plz continue soon

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