HUMSUFER- PART-13 & CONFESSION PART-A PAGE-38 and PART-B PAGE-39 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally u update this..nd what a update 👏 loved it..
Priya feeling something for ram nd knowing which trying to ignore him nd suppress her feelings too whereas ram's feeling re growing nd now it will be interesting to read who will confess first nd how.. 😃
Cont soon this time nd thanx for pm..[/QUOTE

Thanks yar,hn dekhte hain kan pehle confess karta he ???? Wese apko kya lagta he ????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Raya in love and priya like his company...

eager to see what happen next
continue soon and PM me next time


Thanks.plz add me in ur buddy list so that i will not forget to pm u as i did not know how to add u in my buddy list.ok.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeena1993


Thanks,will update soon.



wen is ur next update???
Pls pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-8

Kuchh der bad priya apne room se nikal ke ayi.She is looking stunning in black chhifon saree,the silver jari work on the border enhanced her beauty.She pinned her hair in one side,black bindi on her head and kajol in her eyes are just perffect.She came and stood infront of ram.Ram is speechless,his mouth is open he is looking at her without blinking.Priya is feeling shy,she asked him-Chalen ????

Ram-Umm,priya u are looking gorgious,aj to resturant pe sabki najar tumpe hogi hume koi puchhega tak nahi.Priya smiled.

Priya-Bas bas abhi itna bhi tarif mat karo,abhi bhuk nahi lagrahi kya ???

Ram-Bahat jorse.Ye bolke wo priya ki taraf hat badhate hue puchha-Chalen ?? Priya slipped her hand in his and both left for lunch.

Ram took her Hotel Taz,he booked a window side table specially for them so that they can enjoy the food with the beauty of seaside.He took a chair and offered her.Priya sat then ram took the opposite chair.

Ram-To madam kya order karwana chahengi,chinise,thai,mexician ya kuchh ar ???

Priya-I will preffer indian.U can order ur favourite.

Ram-Ok let me call the waiter.He called for a waiter and started ordering.Two plate of chiken biriyani,two plate of mangolian chiken,two plate butter paneer,two plate mashroom tikka,spinac salad,ummm ar kya ar kya...
Priya-Wait wait ye do do plates kyon ????

Ram-Do kyon matalab hum dono hi to he jada order karun kya ??

Priya-Ram,am totally vegeterian.Me bas veg hi khaungi ap apne liye non veg order kijiye.

Ram-Woops,am sorry idid not know that.Ok,please cancel the nonveg orders and bring all best veg items of this resturant.

Priya-Ye kya ram ap ne mere liye apna khana kyon cancel kiya.

Ram-Priya,tum meri dost ho ar me pehlibar apne iss ajeej dost ko lunch pe laya hun ar use comfortably khana khilana meri jinmedari he wese mujhe veg bhi bahat pasand he so dont worry,ye batao jabtak khana nahi ajata drink kya mangwaun ???Priya smiled and said kuchh bhi jo apka man chahe.

Ram-So bring one orange juice and one red wine.

Priya-Ram u drink alcohol ?????

Ram-Hei ye alcohol nahi he grape wine he,formented grape juice.

Priya-Jo bhi ho alcohol to he na,i dont like who drinks that.Please bura mat manna me apko dost manti hun isliye bola baki apki marji.Ram is feeling very imotional inside,no one was there to care for him till date.And today there is someone who cares for him.

Ram-Ok two orange juice.After some time they are served with orange juice.Both are enjoying their company and talking different matters,in the mean time food also served.They ate there food talking laughing with each other.Mostly,ram said her about their gang(vikram,neha,he himself,joe and ritta).Priya also shared her and kartik's relationship.Both finished their lunch.

Ram-Priya dessert me kya logi.

Priya- Yahn nahi ram.mere pass ek idea he chalo aj me apko apni ek secret dessert center lechalti hun,abtak ye kartik ar mera secret tha ab ap bhi samil hojana.

Ram-Sounds graet.To fir chalte hen.He paid the bill and both came outside.Ab kahn chale madam ??

Priya-Chalo me rasta batati hun sirf 15 min ka rasta he.She told him and both reached the place near the sea beech.Both came out from car.

Ram-Priya,yahn kahn layi tum ???Yahn kansa center he ???

Priya-Chaliye to sahi,ek bar khayenge na to bade bade hotels ki dessert khana bhul jayenge.She took his hand in her and started walking.Ram looked at their entangled hands,new feeling of completeness created in his heart.He smiled and walked silently.Priya stopped at the kulfi stall .

Ram-Priya,hum yahn iss kulfi ko khane aye hen ?????

Priya-Ar nahi to kya ??????Mene bolana ek bar khaoge to sab bhuljaoge.Wait me order karti hun.Bhaiya do special kulfi dena ??????

Ram-Ruko priya,dekhona kitna unhygenic place hen,kitne kitanu honge infection hogaya to ?????Chalo me tumhe achhe parlour se kulfi khilwata hun ??????

Priya-Ram,me doctor hun ok.Ar kabhi kabhi unhygenic food khane se infection nahi hota,yhn ke unhygenic food apke hygenic food se kahin guna behtar he so dont bother.Eat and enjoy.

Ram-Looking confused he asked-U think so ????

Priya-(Nodding her head) Yes.Start now.She took kulfi and handed it to him.Ram looked at the kulfi as it was the 8th wonder of world.Then he slowly took it in his mouth shutting his eyes.Then after sometime a small smile appered on his face.Priya was looking at him continiously.

Priya-Dekha mene bola tha na ye best he.

Ram-Ya u are right i did not ever eat such wonderfull kulfi.

Priya-Come wohn rock ke upar nariel ped ke nichhe beth ke khate hen.Both walked along the sea shore,ram folded her pants and sleevs took off his blezer and shoe.Priya took the plits off her saree in one hand and kulfi in other hand,both walked together waves are striking their feet.

Priya-Its great na,thande thande pani peron ko ese chute hen to ajeebsa sukun milta he.Ram is totally enjoying her company.They sat on the rock,both looked each other and smiled.Ram finished his kulfi little ammount of kulfi sticked at corner of his lips.Priya marked it and smilingly signaled him to clear it but ram could not get it.(I KNOW IT IS TOTALLY FILMY) So priya slowly came close to him and started clearing kulfi,both are looking at each other,engrossed within each others eyes.Both did not realised that they came so close that their lips were mere inches apart.Suddenly a ball came and hit ram's leg,both realised and apart from each other,Ram took the ball and looked straight.Some children came running.

One boy-Bhaiya,ball do na.

Ram-Ball chaiye ????The children together said yes.To bhaiya ko ek ek kissi milna chahiye nahi to ball nahi milega.The children lokked each other and giggled.Priya is smiling seeing their convo.Then one by one children came and kissed ram.

Ram-Lo ball lo.

One boy-Bhaiya,chalona humare sath khelo.Then all children said chalo na chalona bhaiya.

Ram-Areee nahi nahi dekhrahe ho na bhaiya thode mote hen bhagnahi sakte aplogo ke sath.
Children-Nahi hum dheere dheere khelenge chalona maja ayega.Priya is smiling.ram looked so cute.

Priya-Jaiyena ram,bachho ke dil nahi todte.

Ram-Ok but thode der ke liye ar promise dheere dheere khelenge.Children saiad yepiii and took ram with them,ram is playing with them,he is gasping due to fatigue but looked very much cute.Priya is continiously laughing looking at him.Ram looked at her and seeing her like this he feels happy.He stood ther looking at her.Then some one tapped his back.Ram turned and was surprised.

Ram-Hei Joe tum kitne dino ke bad ??????

Joe-Abe sale tere darshan hi nahi,kya itna bada admi bangaya to hume bhul hi gaya.hn ??????Ar kisko dekhraha tha.He looked at priya.At that priya came near them.

Priya-Ram,ye kan he ??

Joe-Wo,bhabi ji !!!!!! Nmaste.Priya is surprised hearing this,she looked at ram.

Ram-No no joe she is priya my friend and priya this is joe mene bolathana humari gang ke bare me.

Priya-Wo,hyyy joe,bahat suna he aplogo ke bare me.

Joe-Sorry missunderstood u,hyy nice to meet u.Ram chalona mere cafe me ritta bhi he.

Ram-Iska matlab tum dono ne sadi bhi karli.

Joe-Yes,ar tujhe bulana bhi chaha but humne bahat simple tareekese sadi ki to kisiko bulaya bhi nahi sadi ke bad yhn beech ke pas ek cafe khola he dono wohin rehte hen ar maje me he.Vikram ki kya hal he ???

Ram-Wo mere sath kam karraha he matlab hum partner he.

Joe-To iska matlab wo bhi yahin hen,to use bhi bulana aj party karenge aj cafe band rehta he but aj mere tarafse party.Priya bhi he bahat maja ayega.

Ram-Good idea,ar ek bat bolun vik akela nahi he tere jese wo bhi neha ke sath sadi karli ar unke ek beta bhi he.

Joe-Wow to aj to maja ayega double celebration.Ram called vikram.He narrets every thing and told him to leave ajad with natasha and came there with neha.

Ram-Done wo log adheghante me pahanchrahe hen.

Joe-Great,chalo tabtak hum cafe chalte hen.All walked towards the cafe.Ritta was surprised seeing ram after long years.they greeted all.Priya also greeted her and they are talking when vik reached there with neha.All of them became child,they cheat chated for sometime.

Ritta-Hei ram,kyon na ek chota sa party hojaye.

Joe-Isiliye to bulaya he.15 min me arrenge karte hen chalo ram camp jesa mahol banate hen yad he na.

Vikram-Bilkul chalo,they all started prepairing,took woods for fire settles the cocconut tree trunk for sitting purpose.Ritta along with neha and priya,arrenged snacks drinks and came to theem.All setteled themselves.Neha noticed the happiness on priya's face and vik also noticed same on ram's.Then ritta said,Hei ram bahat din hogaye tumhare gana sune hue aj mauka bhi he dastur bhi kyon na ek ho jaye.

Joe-Han piano bhi he ruko me yhn lata hun.

Ram-Nahi nahi,kese yar itne din hogaye gaye hue mujhse nahi hoga.

Priya-(Surpriseed) Ram ap gana bhi gate hen i dont believe.

Neha-Gana gata he !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bahat achha gata he hum to sochhrahe the ye ek bad singer banega .

Vikram-Ar nahi to kya mere dost ko kya samjha he abhi dikhadega ki kitna talented he. kyon ram ??

Ram-Oye tu chup kar.Marwayega.

Joe-Kya ram plz.

Priya-Plz ram mere liye.

Ram-OK.He went towards piano sat on the chair.It was sunset time,sun is going under the sea water far in the horizon,slow wind is blowing,sounds of wave are creating there magic everything was just perffect.Every body sat comffertably,priya is sitting looking at ram keeping left hand on her chin.Ram started singing looking at priya.

*(Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam
**Tum Mujhe Dedo Aapne Ghum) *X2
Khamoshiyan Bhi Do
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do
Bechainiyan Bhi De Do De Do Naaa


Priya is still looking at him,he also.Jese ram ke muuse nikle har words sirf uske liye ho.Priya can feel the imotions,she wants to just flow with the rythim.

(Bheeghi Phalkon Se Churaa Lungaa Nami
Rehanay Dunga Naa, Kahin Koi Kami)X2
Tumko Daaman Naa Bhigone Dungaa
Ab Kabhi Tumko Naa Rone Dungaa
Uljane Ghum Ki Perchaiyee HOOO
De Do Mujhe Apni Tanhaiyee
Gumnamiyan Bhi Do
Naakamiyan Bhi Do
Viraniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naa
Neha came closer to vikram,slowly she kept her head on his chest,vik took him in side hug both are enjoying this moment.Joe took ritta's hand for dance,slowly they dance with the rytihim.Priya closed her eye,dreming a sweet dream.Ram also closed his eye and continue singing.
(DREAM)
Priya and ram both are coming from opposite side stopped in middle,ram took priya's hand,priya also slided her hand.Both began to dance,priya kept her head on his chest and both continiue dance.

(Teri Hothon Mein Saaja Dungaa Hasee
Teri Raahon Mein, Bhicha Dungaa Khushi) X2
Tum Mujhe Apna Maanti Ho Agar
Yu Khafaa Hoke, Naa Jhukaaoo Nazar

(DREAM)
Ram shifts her face,gently caressed her with his thumb and kissing her forehead continiue dance.

Mushkile Apni Majburi
Ho De Do Mujhe Sari Benuri
Pareshaniyan Bhi Do,
Hairaniyan Bhi Do
Nhigebaniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naa
Both opened their eyes,they realised that it was a dream.Priya did not find that why she is thinking like that why ???She looked again at ram.Ram akhri line gate wakt intensly priya ke ankho me dekhraha tha,jisme ek kasak thi jo dono ko ek dusre ki taraf khichrahi thi.

Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam,
Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Ghum
Khamoshiyan Bhi Do,
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do,
Bechaniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naaa

Hmmm De Do Naa...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part...
Awesome...
Loved evry emotion...
Hope raya unite soon...
Pls contn asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice day out for Raya...Priya likes to spend time with Ram...
continue soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
Lunch ka plan pura day out ban gaya.. 😉
They re having good time nd loving each other's company..good
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
its beautiful, both RaYa enjoying each others company, Priya is looking stunning, sirf Ram nahi we are also left with open mouth, awww! Ram ate veg food for Priya, love the party arranged by Joe and Ritta, good choice of song, I hope now Priya understand that she has something for Ram in her heart, jaldi se confess kara do inn dono ko, I want to see Ram caring for Priya, continue ASAP👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow jeena nice update...ram leaving all his habits for priya seems good and their dream kash real hota...and they feel for each other thts good
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update
loved every bit of it
song selection was superb & perfect 4 d situation
like d dream, pls continue soon
thx 4 PM

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