Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nic update... plz update nxt soon.. long also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.continue with a long update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow cute update ☺️
continue soon the long part

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Posted: 12 years ago
short ho, sweet ho jo bhi ho, update toh hain na...sweet and nice, continues ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Continued..

Priya looks at ram.. He suddenly opens his eyes..

Ram: Kyu darling? Sona nahi hai? Kuch aur karen? Raising his eye brows..

Priya smiles.. Biting her lips.. He smiles.. Acche batao.. Yeh tumhaare.. Touching her shoulders as her turns to his side.. Laal kaise hogayi..

Smiling naughtily.. Priya smiles.. Turning red.. Woh..

Ram: kya..

Priya: Woh.. Aapne.. Blushing..

Ram: meine kya?

Priya: Cuddles closer hiding her face in her palms..

Ram: Accha toh yeh baath hai.. And feels her skin with his finger..

Ram in a thoughtful tone: Tumne kuch kaha nahi.. Thinking.. Itna dard hua hoga..

Priya notices the change in tone.. She places her palm on his heart.. Kya hua..

Her touch calming his heart beats.. Her soft skin.. It feels like a petal touched his heart drawing energy from him..

She smiled and took her hand off..he looked at her..

Ram: Tum bohot alag ho Priya..

Priya looks at his eyes and smiles.. Mein tik hu Ram..

Ram kisses her forehead.. He puts his hand on her stomach.. She smiles turning pink.. Butterflies flutter in her stomach..

Ram: Dard nahi hua kal..?

Priya.. Looks at him.. His eyes look at her with concern.. She knew he saw her tears.. He felt her pain.. Toda hua..

Ram smiling.. Waise 12 bacche yaad hai..

Priya looks at him eyes wide.. Haaw

Ram smiles naughtily.. Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?
Priya smiling: Aapko do chahiye.. Ab phirse.. Looking at his eyes and turning red.. She lowers her eyes.. Baara Ram?

Ram giggles.. And cuddles closer.. She smiles..
She smells like jasmine.. He smiles.. Thinking.. Uski aankein.. Uski baatein.. Uski aahat.. Uski muskaan.. Everything about her is so different..

Priya looks at him.. He is lost in his thoughts.. She smiles..
Priya thoughtfully: Ram..
Ram snaps and smiles: Hmm..
Priya: Agar mein na rahu toh..
Ram smiles.. Tum meri jaan ho.. Mein jaha jaaunga tumhe saath lejaaunga..
Priyas eyes moisten.. She puts her hand on his heart.. Ram, mein rahu ya na rahu.. Aap humesha khush rahiyega..
Ram kisses her forhead looking at her eyes.. Tum aise baatein kyu kar rahi ho.. Baara nahi chahiye sirf do..
Both look at eahother and start giggling..

Ram turned on top of her: accha yeh batao.. Abhi se shuru kare?
Priya blushing.. Kya?
Ram: leans whispering in her ear.. Woh.. Family planning.. And looks in her eyes..
Butterflies flutter in her stomach.. She turns red.. She smiles to him.. He slides beside her.. And whispers in her ears..
Ram: I love you..
Priya smiles.. Lokking at him she mimes.. I love you too..

That was the last time he saw her smile.. That was the last time he touched her..
That was the last time..

To be continued..

Do leave your comments! I hope you enjoyed this update.. Haan I was talking about ending this.. But I just couldnt.. So yes here is a twist.. You are free to question and guess whats next!

Lots of love,
Lesha

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Posted: 12 years ago
priya ko kuch health problem hoga...right...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Veena di,

Nono.. Idea accha hai.. But no.. Hehe.. Nice guess though!

Love,
Lesha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now what is this, why the last time, what will happen to Priya, why are u creating suspense, I hope everything will be fine, continue please, u r making me anxious, don't take too much time to update, pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
last lines ne to dra dia...inki abhi to shadi hui he itni jaldi separatn...:-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
You are scaring me...BT Ki tarah love or consummation ke baad separation ...aapko bhi humain sataaney ka chaska lag gaya hai kya😆

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