RAYA SS.Custody updtD last part on 148 page - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jatre

again a very beautiful update.so raya are back together.u portrayed emotions so well.👏



Thank you so much ..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

I am speechless n tears are rollibg down my cheeks.This is my first ever FF nd i read it for neel.So i started with part 8 but to get clarity read 7.then i knew i hv to read from first and thats what happened to me after completing.Thanks neel for sharing your friend's creation with us.
I'm feeling really good afterall.The last part it just brought tears n was feeling Ram's hurt and it was like happening infront of my eyes...
Thanq guys for giving this.
Waiting for next may come later but i will wait happily.
Happy Christmas Neel.





Neel:I want to give a big hug you dear .. You read this for me ..Love youuu ..Thank you very much for the sweet aprciation ..

From the writer :
Thank you so much dear ..I was really overhelmed to see your responce ...Neel told me about you ...Nice to meet you here ..Have a nice day and happy married life ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alya1991

Waiting...waiting...waiting Waiting...waiting...waiting Waiting...waiting...waiting



She hasn't write yet dear .. she will update soon ... '
Im just posting her comments also for some who they have doubts..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

Best parts...emotional...caring...full of love
everytime i read this...my heart craves to see such a scene in the serial...
you do pamper us with you super parts...
di do take over the cv's na pls...then we can get wonderful scenes😛😛
love it loads...you stole my heart with the last update
waiting for next





Thank you s much subu ... I so wanted see their confrontation ..
Will be eagerly waiting for it .. Thank you for the lovy dovy feed back ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Uff will be back again with the answers as well as comments have to leave ..im at office ..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi



Neel:I want to give a big hug you dear .. You read this for me ..Love youuu ..Thank you very much for the sweet aprciation ..

From the writer :
Thank you so much dear ..I was really overhelmed to see your responce ...Neel told me about you ...Nice to meet you here ..Have a nice day and happy married life ..



To Neel:
Hug is reciprocated buddy..Luv u too.I feel that you are the person who is bringing this to us so that we too can enjoy n cherish your friend's work.that deserves a pat...

To The writer:
(i know neel u will convey)
Nice 2meet u here.ya neel is the one who makes you feel familiar for us.
Your way of presenting the love story is awesome and i love reading.so it was a visual treat for me imagining all those things his anger,her plight,their hurt n finally their union.dont wanna discuss abt the slap but i can understand.its not filmy.am not encouraging but...You should continue writing all your life time.thats my wish.Take care n happy time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
well well well indeed a Dhamakedar update
beautifully written
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting...waiting...waiting... Waiting...waiting...waiting... Waiting...waiting...waiting... Waiting...waiting...waiting... Waiting...waiting...waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taashu11

this is the bestest ever part written when i read it for first time i was so mesmerised that i couldnt help myself and posted this comment that i am posting below...


oh god i really dont know how am i going
to comment in this update its really a
very big and difficult task for me am
totally numb and dumb struck after
reading this update...
even in my dreams i couldnt imagine
someone loving his partner so much...
how could ram manage to love priya to
the eternity that no one could touch...
any one could happily give up their life for
such a partner...
about the room ram kept her alive in
every sense he could not only in his heart
or thoughts but in his entire world...
loved the justification that ram gave for
slaping her... but it was totally justified
and the way he did first aid to priya was
so so so sweet...
am so happy that both confessed their
feelings their love their fear their anger
for each other now it leads to a new
morning a new ray of love a new sunshine
full of happiness all dark past left
behind...
and you really dont have to be sorry after
giving such an update its the best and
awesomest update i have ever read...
this is THE BEST work of yours...
am happy that i got chance to comment
first...
i really dont know what i have written
comment... as am totally in the
different world after reading this... so
please forgive me if have written
something wrong... its all because of
your update not my fault...
i really really really want cvs to read this
part i can imagine ram and sakshi
performing this scene but i wish to
actually see them doing this scene giving
it a rayas touch thats beyond
imagination...




Thank you so much dear ..

from the writer :

Aww tashu dear ,so sweet of you ..
when im writing this update ,I was so cofused wether readers will accept it or not .Because we hardly see true love now a days..
Being a doctor have seen so many couples ..
Some scenes which i wrote are included from real issues also ..
Anyway im really overhelmed seeing your feed back ..
Im really word less what i should give reply ..
But as you said its one of my best ..You know its one of my heart touching update ..Thank you so much
And yah i can so imagine how Ram and Priya can perform this act ..
Loved to see this scene between them .But we can imagine with our visual sence ..Thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snehalparab

neel yesterday i said rams slap annoyed me but todays update just took my heart away dear loved it each and every part love sacrifice anger because the one you love betrayed you and transformed in the action of slap ...reaalllyyy take bow lady for this wonderful wonderfull update and i hope you forgive me on that bit harsh comment ..reaally todays update made my christmas day thanks a ton and love you lottt neel and say sorry to your writer freind we bugged you and you bugged her on our behalf ,...but it was awesommmessst yaar...



From the writer :
Hey sneha ,Its absolutely Ok , Its not harsh comment ,As a writer i will take all positive and negitive comments eaqully and i will make myself clear with next update ..So dont be sorry ..Thank you glad you liked this update ..Sorry for late reply ...
Do read and leave your lovely feedback ..

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