Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i m stunned sis.. Beautiful lines.. Each n every word touched my heart...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maris, u r a rockstar. Read the old one too now coz I wasn't in the forum then. Just WOW!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: D4BALH

i m stunned sis.. Beautiful lines.. Each n every word touched my heart...

Thanks Dilli..😃 My intention was exactly that..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ravichitra

Maris, u r a rockstar. Read the old one too now coz I wasn't in the forum then. Just WOW!

Thanks Chitra.. Glad that you read the other poem.. The essence of this poem is more accenuated by reading the previous one along..Glad you did it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maris

Another fantastic poem. I have read the old one too post the mall scene.
What a stark difference indeed.

Great going dear. Leaps have indeed got the better of us.
Loving your posts these days.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow so meaningful you are wonderful writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maris08

Thanks a lot Mayu..😳😃

Indeed all these lines are my creations.. 200 % original coming from my brain..😆
Me too missing those raya moments..😭

Not from your brain dumbo ,from your heart. We all miss those Raya moments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fosla

Maris

Another fantastic poem. I have read the old one too post the mall scene.
What a stark difference indeed.

Great going dear. Leaps have indeed got the better of us.
Loving your posts these days.

Thanks Angie.😳😃.Yes offlate my posts whether poems or stories reflect my pain and indignance with BALH.. This will continue till a clear picture of leap emerges.. So look out..😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahana747

Not from your brain dumbo ,from your heart. We all miss those Raya moments.

Sahana,, whether its brain or heart, my whole body is mad and crazy about BALH😆..Yes indeed those Raya moments are sorely missed..Cry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OHMYGOD I AM SO SORRY!
I've been reading ALOT of stuff on my cell lately and haven't kept track on what i've commented on and what I haven't!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS ONE! AND I MEAN LOVED!!
It was beautiful and perfect for RaYa!!
The last 2 lines were my favourite! 😭

Great Job Maris!! And yes please PM me and remind me if i forget to comment on something!! 😊

Sorry once again!

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