Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Mayu-

Maris🤗

Amazing poem! Jst WOW!~👏👏Every line just oozed the essence of RaYa's love for me!

Its your creation? Then I am your fan!

Missing those RaYa moments now:(

Thanks for such a great Post! Do keep making more!👍🏼

Love,

Mayu

Originally posted by: maris08

Thanks a lot Mayu..😳😃

Indeed all these lines are my creations.. 200 % original coming from my brain..😆

Me too missing those raya moments..😭

Originally posted by: Priya_Fan

woot woot... Well done poetess...! :)

Loved these lines to the core...

Love will ease all that's wrong Lets hold to it and just be strong...

Aha... I'm always amazed at how much effect RaYa have had on me!
M on d go... Will come back 2 say more... Jus couldnt wait 2 tell u dat loved it...

Originally posted by: Lavi_961

Superb :thumbs up:

Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful face piercing my heart

Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.

These i loved more but you know each line is so thoughtful and perfectly potrayed RAYA feelings , i wonder how could you penned down such an easy way and should i say anything more .

Each line is better than the before one ,i loved it to the core , i just read just these glass in between also ,done great job dear .

thank you somuch for this fabulous update ..

i felt better after reading this ,they are showing such a crap in the show and missing RAYA scenes.

Originally posted by: maris08

Just these bars in between!!

Just these bars in between us

Mere barriers and nothing else

Lines that seemingly dividing my face

Yet indicative of the lines of fate

Bars and barriers looking like abacus

Counters of time and distance between us.

These bars are never a barrier

For charges levelled are all absurder

Leaps of faith and trust was never a suspect

Leap into the future a resigned prospect.

Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful face piercing my heart

Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.

Adversity and hardships for testing times

Happiness and miracles to relieve us sometimes.

Months and years soon to separate us

Blissful togetherness; all cherished moments.

Don't cry my love

For I love you more than ever

Don't hate me my love

For I love you more than myself.

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Originally posted by: maris08

Sure Mayu.. will do so.. Actually I have been writing poems and Stories since I joined IF at the Baat hamari pakki hai forum..You can check it out..😳