Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: azk92
OHMYGOD I AM SO SORRY!
I've been reading ALOT of stuff on my cell lately and haven't kept track on what i've commented on and what I haven't!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS ONE! AND I MEAN LOVED!!

It was beautiful and perfect for RaYa!!

The last 2 lines were my favourite! 😭

Great Job Maris!! And yes please PM me and remind me if i forget to comment on something!! 😊

Sorry once again!

Thanks Amby..Glad to see your comment. Yes.With the kind of crazy schedules and multitasking you are doing, guess reminding you about everything is going to be the norm..

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

awesome poem... love it... tfs... 😊

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Guys and Gals

Just wondering whether the CVs by any chance came to our forum and saw this poem

Yesterday's scene and the dialogues seem to be reflecting what I have written..The emotions and turmoils and the unseen and unsaid fears between Raya in the show seemed to mirror this poem..

Dont you all agree?

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Shayar Popat .. i mean Netaji.. 😛

WAH WAH WAH.. TOOO GOOD yaar. Looks like BALH has so much impact on you creative folks out there. It has exposed such fantastic writers and now YOU with your Poem. 👏

Superb yaar. 👏 👏

LOVED THIS ONE.. SO Touching

" Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful face piercing my heart "

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
Shayar Popat .. i mean Netaji.. 😛

WAH WAH WAH.. TOOO GOOD yaar. Looks like BALH has so much impact on you creative folks out there. It has exposed such fantastic writers and now YOU with your Poem. 👏

Superb yaar. 👏 👏

LOVED THIS ONE.. SO Touching

" Tearful eyes tearing me apart
Painful face piercing my heart "

Thanks MP.. Atlast the follower is now awake and active..😉😆

Actually my discovery of a writer started even before BALH. To be exact it was at BHPH forum.. But yes BALH is still impacting me in more ways than one..😃

Thanks for your kind words😳..Neta ko hamesha praja ke liye kuch na kuch karna chahiye nah? Thats why I want to make all of you happy with my posts😆😉

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