Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maris,

You are on a roll!

I have become a fan of your poetry. You have touched a chord here.

Reflective of their turmoil.. this poem is indeed a mirror, penned down beautifully.

Kudos!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely poem dii...so touching and beautiful...you are a fabulous writer...you are the best...



Loved these lines so much dii...



Don't cry my love

For I love you more than ever

Don't hate me my love

For I love you more than myself.



Thank you so much for the lovely poem...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

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Awww awesome maris ,loved each and every line

Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful face piercing my heart

Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.

These i loved more but you know each line is so thoughtful and perfectly potrayed RAYA feelings , i wonder how could you penned down such an easy way and should i say anything more .

Each line is better than the before one ,i loved it to the core , i just read just these glass in between also ,done great job dear .

thank you somuch for this fabulous update ..

i felt better after reading this ,they are showing such a crap in the show and missing RAYA scenes.

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Thanks Neel😳. I love both the pics of Raya..None can resist falling for this couple..😃Clap⭐️ This amazing chemistry of Raya makes me write about them.. Whatever I feel I pen it down immediately, least I forget.. Glad to see you like my work..Thanks once again..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mem1

Awesome, Maris. As always a most beautiful poem saying so much, in so few words... great work.


Thanks Gita..😳 Glad to see your appreciation..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woah!!!...what a poem...so beautiful...yet expressive...3 cheers for
you👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...you are a star!!
Thanks Subha😃..Am honoured by your comments..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -Mayu-


Oh! So you like Barun?😳

Cool, I hope the forum is not locked yet😳

Hatts to you again!👏👏

You are a Rock⭐️!

Love,
Mayu

Mayu, BHPH forum has been locked long time back. Its been more than a year since that show went off air.. I like Barun but was never crazy about him.. Liked the pairing of Ankita with BarunClapStar..They were awesome just like now I love Sakshi and RamClapStar.., Thanks for your kind words..Embarrassed😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS

Wow Maris Di. that was a wonderful poem👏..couldn't help but read again n again😳

every line fits RaYa's situation to the T

and read the earlier poem on one of my most favorite RaYa scene.that was beautiful too❤️ Nd now i can make out the diff. b/w the two situation too!!

Waiting to read smthing soon from u

Thanks Nancy..Glad you read the other poem" just a glass" and could see the differences between then and now..happy to be of service..Embarrassed😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Maris,


You are on a roll!

I have become a fan of your poetry. You have touched a chord here.

Reflective of their turmoil.. this poem is indeed a mirror, penned down beautifully.

Kudos!
👏

Thanks Punya😳..Am a fan of your writing tooClap..The feeling is mutual..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaviya10

Lovely poem dii...so touching and beautiful...you are a fabulous writer...you are the best...




Loved these lines so much dii...



Don't cry my love

For I love you more than ever

Don't hate me my love

For I love you more than myself.



Thank you so much for the lovely poem...🤗

Thanks Kaviya.. I always love your unique pictorial style of appreciation..😳😃👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: anizor

awsome poem maris. thanks

Thanks a lot Rosy.

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