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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: balhfan22
Omg! Awesome update! 👏 Beautifully written.. Love it! ❤️

Hey!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it 😊

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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: nandinimp
hey punya

super!! very nice... kaise yaar.. tum itna effortlessly Ram Priya ki nok jhok ko samne lati ho.. aur Ram's trauma is so real.. chal yaar aur tarsana mat... mila do unhe!!!

and love the way you rationalized the separation... not those silly reasons that are being shown on the show... saccha lagta hai aur accha bhi!!!
nandini

Hey Nandy! 🤗

hahaha.. I loved the bickerings in the show. But since they have gone missing, I am using my pen (and fingers) to mollify my rootha hua dil. LOL!

haan haan.. mila dungi.. sabr karo. sabr ka phal RaYa hota hai. (read it in the forum somewhere) hihihi..

yeah.. you can expect some logic and sense in the FFs, atleast.

Thanks for commenting. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

awesum punya

continue ASP👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: kaparikh1
NICEEE...👏Very Awesome update...Plzz continue...😊

Hey.. thanks a lot! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: fanraya
👏Wow how lovely Punya, superb, loved the way you used " Ranjishi Sahi" my fav , it fits so well in their story. Really beautiful, the way both missing each other. Waiting for the next one, please write soon.

Hey.. thanks a lot! "Ranjish hi sahi.." is one of my fav too. Its a very touching ghazal.. yeah.. perfectly apt for this situation.

will update soon. Thanks for reading... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak
Awesome Punya👏👏👏...just awesome👏...no other words to describe it...really loved the way you brought back the old memories of Ram😳😳...all the old scenes which u wrote are my favorites...have watched them umpteen number of times...thanks a lot my sister...😳😃...will wait eagerly for your next update...😳

Hey K!

These old scenes are my favs too. Miss them like hell! Me too.. watch them every now and then..

Will try to update soon. Thanks for reading 😊

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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sss283
just like a song...your work flows like a stream...
great writing punya...
nice way of presenting the pain ,sorrow,dreams...n happiness...
continue soon dear

Hey,

Thats such a sweet compliment.☺️ Made my day. Thanks sooo much!! 😃

will update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Wow punya superbly written ...
loved the thier thoughts haunt back their old memories ..
it cudn't erase from their hearts ..
you potrayed very well ...thank you

Hey!

Love is such a deeply engraved emotion that you can't just forget it or let it be.. It haunts you forever.. whether its far away or just beside you. and same is happening with them both.

Btw, Thanks so much for reading!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: azk92
Oye Partner!
Love you girl!! You are too good! I was waiting eagerly for you to update 😆 Totally worth it!

Girl you made me tear up!! Ram's emotions are soo beautifully put!

And LOVED the nok-jhok! You are really really good at writing that! lol

Awww you connected the Lauki to the past as well as the present in both places.. Awesome girl!! You are great with FBs!!

Ahhh this was such a good update!!

🤗🤗🤗