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name2saakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

yaar yeh log kab mile gaye lovely update

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kaviya10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Punya dii so sorry for the late reply...😭

Beautiful update dii...so heart wrenching & Lovely...

Loved every word in it...Loved penning of Ram's feelings & old memories & nok-jhoks...

it was so damn amazing...as usual you are awesome...wonderful writing...

Thank you for the lovely update & PM...will be waiting for next one eagerly...😃

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luvbalh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

lauki and romance haan . i understood do continue loved this part

was too good

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veena singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Ranjish hi sahi...

Dil hi dukhaane ke liye aa..

Aa, phirse mujhe chhod ke jaane ke liye aa..

Ranjish hi sahi..

Pehle se marasim na sahi phir bhi kabhi toh..

Rasm-o-rahe duniya hi nibhaane ke liye aa..

Ranjish hi sahi..

Kis kis ko bataayenge judaayi ka sabab hum..

Tu mujhse khafaa hai toh zamaane ke liye aa..

Ranjish hi sahi..

Kuchh toh mere pindaar-e-mohabbat ka bharam rakh..

Tu bhi toh kabhi mujhko manaane ke liye..

Ranjish hi sahi..

Ab tak dil-e-khushfaham ko tujh se hain umeedein..

Ye aakhiri shamme bhi bujhaane ke liye aa..

Ranjish hi sahi..

Jaise tujhe aate hain na aane ke bahaane..

Aise hi kisi roz na jaane ke liye aa..

Ranjish hi sahi..

ufff...briliant song yaar...i cn imagine it on raya...

love yhis update...vry well scetched ram's situation...tooo gud

writers are always gud na...keep it up👏👏

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IndYa4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Punya ji..

you had me in tears with " 😭 😭 😭
Toh karo na... mujhse shiqaayat karo, mujhse jhagda karo. Mujh par chillaao... gussa karo, naraz ho jao. But aa jao. Taane marne ke liye hi sahi, bas ek baar wapas aa jao Priya."

Flash back of nok-jok brought a smile... great scenes.

of course lil angel with her dad's habit and "handson".. sooo cute. 😛😛

Loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Karamjit kaur Sekhon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

o wow you are so blessed awesome update eagerly waiting for next

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Chitra RaviKiran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Punya

u added that part why Priya wears 2 rings too? Awesome man! Loved RaYa nok-jhoks and emotional Ram is always worth a hug and u too

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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Lavi_961
Omg.. Thts awesme.. Beautifully wrtn.. Thnks fr updating.. Jst loved it...<3

Thanks Lavi.. glad you liked it. 😊

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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: salsaly
awesome part... ram in memories... di , wen r u going to let raya meet... ?

continue soon... thanks a lot... 😊

Hey Saly.. don't worry. Its gonna be soon. I also want that to happen soon 😉 sick and tired of the ongoing track.. need a breather.

Thanks for reading 😃

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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: maris08
Punya WOW!!!!!!
A heart wrenching description of Ram's agony, his loss and late realisation of his mistake..😭

Wanted to touch ram and squeeze his hands in comnfort..😳

Loved that knok joks between Raya..👏👍🏼

BTW I love Lauki, you know???Very healthy..😆😳😃