FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

awesome part... ram in memories... di , wen r u going to let raya meet... ?

continue soon... thanks a lot... 😊

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Punya WOW!!!!!!

A heart wrenching description of Ram's agony, his loss and late realisation of his mistake..😭

Wanted to touch ram and squeeze his hands in comnfort..😳

Loved that knok joks between Raya..👏👍🏼

BTW I love Lauki, you know???Very healthy..😆😳😃

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Omg! Awesome update! 👏 Beautifully written.. Love it! ❤️

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nandinimp

@nandinimp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

hey punya

super!! very nice... kaise yaar.. tum itna effortlessly Ram Priya ki nok jhok ko samne lati ho.. aur Ram's trauma is so real.. chal yaar aur tarsana mat... mila do unhe!!!

and love the way you rationalized the separation... not those silly reasons that are being shown on the show... saccha lagta hai aur accha bhi!!!

nandini

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

NICEEE...👏Very Awesome update...Plzz continue...😊

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

👏Wow how lovely Punya, superb, loved the way you used " Ranjishi Sahi" my fav , it fits so well in their story. Really beautiful, the way both missing each other. Waiting for the next one, please write soon.

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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Awesome Punya👏👏👏...just awesome👏...no other words to describe it...really loved the way you brought back the old memories of Ram😳😳...all the old scenes which u wrote are my favorites...have watched them umpteen number of times...thanks a lot my sister...😳😃...will wait eagerly for your next update...😳

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

just like a song...your work flows like a stream...

great writing punya...

nice way of presenting the pain ,sorrow,dreams...n happiness...

continue soon dear

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Wow punya superbly written ...
loved the thier thoughts haunt back their old memories ..
it cudn't erase from their hearts ..
you potrayed very well ...thank you