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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asma11

awsome update & precap. thanks


nice creation asma
glad u liked the update

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 14shubhi

hey dear,update plsss


sorry yaar the update which i have written is at my home, presently I'm not at home so cant do anything 😕
will try to update it as soon as i reach home


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey Shubhi here is the update

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rtsd

awesome precap plz update soon


thanks the update will be updated
hope you'll like it too

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends

here is the update sorry for the delay was really busy

Scene 20:

RaYa's romantic moments - 1

Ram and Priya were returning to farm house, he suddenly put brake Priya fell on Ram and held him tightly, her face was on his shoulders

Priya: aap ye kya kar rahe hai

Ram: maine kaha tha na ki tum mujhe zor se pakdo mere khareb raho par tumne nahin suna isiliye mujhe brake lagana pada

Priya: aap bhi na and tries to move away

Ram holds her hand: soch na bhi mat warna mai phir se brake lagaunga jab jab tum mujse dur jaane ki koshish karogi tab tab brake lagega Priya keeps her hands like that only till they reach farm house. As soon as they reach farm house Priya gets down and moves towards house angrily Ram goes behind her

Ram: Priya kya hua

Priya: kya kar rahe the aap aur woh bhi road par

Ram: kya karu jab tum mere paas hoti ho, tho aisa ho jaata hai and he moves towards her

Priya: aap bhi na and tries to move away but Ram holds her hand but there was a knock on the door both move away from each other

Caretaker: sir aap ke liye kuch khane ke liye latha hoon

Ram: nahin kaka its k hum bahar gaye the na wahi pe kuch kha liya hai

Caretaker: madam aap ke liye

Priya: ji nahin

Caretaker: thik hai sir main chalta hoon and he left the house closing the door

Ram: tumne jo khaya hai woh khafi hoga na tumhare liye, waise bhi tum ghaas pus ke ilava aur kya khati ho

Priya: aap aise... haan mere liye tho khafi hai par aap ke liye tho nahin na Gollu ji

Ram: yee... tum mujhe Gollu mat kaho

Priya: kyun

Ram: mujhe acha nahin lagta

Priya: tho main kya karu

Ram: Priya ye kya hai yaar tum bhi na

Priya: woh kya hai na ki meri ek aadat hai agar koi mere liye favor karta hai tho main usse wapas karti hoon

Ram: acha

Priya: haan

Ram: tum joot tho nahin bol rahi ho na

Priya: mujhe joot bolne ki aadat nahin hai

Ram: haan woh tho hai and he moves forward holds her in his arms tightly: agar main koi favor karu tho wapas karogi

Priya: haan karungi na

Ram: pakka promise

Priya: promise before Priya can react he bends down and kisses her on her lips

Ram: acha tho maine abhi jo favor kiya hai woh mujhe wapas chahiye

Priya opens her eyes wide: kya... aisa nahin ho sakta

Ram: abhi tumne hi kaha hai na he holds her more close to him

Priya: nahin Ram main...

Ram: Priya tumhe tho mera favor wapas karna hi padega u have promised me now come on kiss me

Priya: nahin

Ram: acha tho phir mujhe kahi bhi nahin jaana tumhe aisa hi reha padega

Priya holds his face brings her lips towards him, Ram closed his eyes waiting for the kiss as she was about to kiss him she saw that he was closing his eyes slowly she tried to get out of his grip as he was waiting he loosened his grip

Priya caught his face turned it and whispered in his ears: ye favor main nahin karungi

Ram opened his eyes: Priya... ye tumne acha nahin kiya tumhe tho ab double favor karna padega dekho and he runs behind her as Priya was new there she didn't know where to go so after sometime she stood there not knowing where to go by that time Ram came from behind and held her: ab kaha jaogi

Priya who didn't hear Ram's sound screamed closing her eyes

Ram turned her to face him and closed her mouth with his hand: ye kya kar rahi ho tum

Priya hearing Ram's sound she slowly opened her eyes then removed his hand: aap bhi na... mujhe dara hi diya

Ram: tumhe darne ki kya zaroorat hai main tumhare hi paas hoon na Priya smiles seeing her smile he gets lost in her beauty and without knowing he moves towards her Priya senses that Ram was close to her she meet his eyes and sees what he wants so she closes her eyes he places his lips on hers and starts nibbling her lower lip she parted her lips he deepned the kiss making her forget everything except the feel of his lips on hers. She too forgetting her shyness put her hands around him holding him close feeling his love and forgetting herself in that moment

I wanted to change this scenes as RaYa's romantic moments as all the scenes will be only of them

Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it was fantastic dear...
just awesome...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: M_n_h


Scene 20:

RaYa's romantic moments - 1


Ram: tumhe darne ki kya zaroorat hai main tumhare hi paas hoon na Priya smiles seeing her smile he gets lost in her beauty and without knowing he moves towards her Priya senses that Ram was close to her she meet his eyes and sees what he wants so she closes her eyes he places his lips on hers and starts nibbling her lower lip she parted her lips he deepned the kiss making her forget everything except the feel of his lips on hers. She too forgetting her shyness put her hands around him holding him close feeling his love and forgetting herself in that moment



haiyeee... plz continue yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww...both scenes were fantastic!! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wasie i love that romatic scene but know what i want more passionate moments dont get me wrong some😉😉😉😉😉😉☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️bcoz yeh dil mange more

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