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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends sorry the disturbing the flow of the updates
here is the update hope you'll like it

Scene16:

Love, Trust, Cmpatibility and Confession

Ram didn't know when he started liking her, then when it turned into love… she cared about him… she was always with him whenever he needed someone… he didn't know that… never thought that in this world would be someone who would care about him but was unable to tell her his feelings he tried to tell her but was scared of what would be the outcome of it.

Priya too liked him then into blossomed into love he cared about her family always supported them he has his own values which she has never seen in the person who had so much money and power like Ram has she too thought about telling him her feelings but he always made it clear to her that this marriage was a compromise for there families and she didn't know how to even start about this. Ram was unable to concentrate on anything he would always think about her and thought he had enough of this so he finally decided to talk about it.

Ram was working on his laptop saw that Priya was reading book sitting on the couch, thought to talk about it and called her name to get her attention when she looked at him

Ram: mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai

Priya: ji batayiye

Ram was feeling nervous: tumhe yaad hai maine tumse kaha tha

Priya: kya kaha tha aur kab aur aap nervous kyun lag raha hai

Ram: kuch nahin

Priya: aap kuch keh rahe the

Ram: kya keh raha tha

Priya: yahi ki aap ne mujse kuch kaha

Ram: haan… yaad aaya maine humare shaadi ke raat ko kaha tha na ki shaadi ko successful karne ke liye kya chahiye

Priya became alert hearing this topic: yahi kaha na love, trust aur compatibilty

Ram: haan tumhari memory achi hai acha hai ki tumhe sab yaad hai, aur ek cheez bhi hain jo main kehna bhul gaya tha

Priya: kya

Ram: understanding… woh bhi jaroori hai… hai na

Priya nodded her head as approval: tho ab aap ye sab kyun keh rahe hai

Ram: Priya please kya tum kuch der chup reh kar meri baat sunogi main kitne mushkil se bolne ki koshish kar raha hoon

Priya: thik hai… aap kahiye

Ram: hum itne dino se saat reh rahe hai tho hum dono ne ek dusre ko thoda tho samjha hai… tho hum mein understanding tho hai… hai na

Priya nodded her head

Ram: aur jab understanding hota hai tho compatibility aasan ho jaata hai aur ab hum mein compatibility bhi hai… hai na

Priya again nodded her head she was trying to understand what Ram was going to say

Ram: understanding aur compatibility tho hai… hum inte dino se ek dusre ke saath saath reh rahe hai tho trust bhi hoga… he scratches his head thinking this is not going to be easy and says: mera matlab hai ki now I trust you completely aur mujhe lagta hai ki tum bhi muj par trust karthi ho…

Priya's heart beat was racing so was unsure if she could speak so she nodded her head

Ram: tum muj par trust kati ho na aise sar mat hilao bolo

Priya with great effort said: yes I trust you

Ram was happy hearing this now he had to talk about love he was feeling nervous, there Priya was waiting for him to continue when he started this topic she had a hope that Ram also loved her so she was waiting for him to say it

Ram: aur ab ek hi bacha hai… became silent as he was unable to tell as he didn't know what she thought about him in his nervousness he stood up

Priya: lo… love hi bacha hai their heart's were beating very fast

Ram: jab ye sab hai tho lo… love ho hi jaata hai dheere dheere… hai na

Priya again nodded her head looking at him ask if asking him silently to continue

Ram: aur mujhe… mujhe lagta hai… lagta nahin… hai… ki

Priya: kya lagta hai aapko

Ram: arreh yaar chup raho na please

Priya: k

Ram yahi ki… ki mujhe tumse pyar hogaya hai

Priya was unable to believe what she was hearing so she just stood listening to it her eyes were filled with tears. Ram looked at her saw that she was crying: sorry agar maine tumhe hurt kiya hai tho main tho apne dil ki baat kar raha tha ye koi zaroori nahin hai ki tum bhi mujse pyar karo agar tum mujse pyar nahin kathi ho tho thik hai I don't mind mujhe bura nahin lage… before he could finish Priya came towards him running and hugged him

Priya: aap ne ye baat kehne ke liye itna waqt kyun laga diya main kab se intezaat kar rahi thi aap se ye sunne ke liye

Ram who had not expected it put his arms around her and hugged her: mujhe nahin pata ki tum bhi mujse I m sorry while Priya sobbed keeping her head on his chest

Ram cupped her face looking into her eyes: I m sorry mujhe pata nahin tha ki tum bhi mujse please tum ro mat he kissed her forehead, kissed away her tears then on her cheeks he moved towards her lips he just brushed his lips on hers and moved away then looked at her he hid her face in his chest he held her close to his heart. After sometime he kept his middle finger under chin and raised her head looking into her eyes he covered her lips with his she put her arms around him both enjoying themselves being in their love land.

Note: Next update will be continuation of the previous update


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Posted: 13 years ago
really good... nice pleae continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww ...that was so romantic ☺️ plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
please continue
it was an wonderful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry I'm late...just read all 3 of the updates...loved them all yaar! Brilliant job..can't wait to read more! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update👏👏👏👏

wonderful update👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi.. this was Awesome...pls update next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates
if possible do PM me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow finally 😳😳😳 btw love the updates 😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part. plz cont. soon thanks

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