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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PURVIVA

Loved it. Good work
next time post long update plzzz
Waiting for update


thanks glad u liked it
ya surely i'll try to post long update
next update asap

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaiqMadiha

oh wow it was serene it got so much emotional touch i wuld feel it while reading awesome...to good...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

very nice update. thank you so much


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pvkd

Hey great update.. Oh God, I am waiting when will they confess their love..


thanks glad u liked it
confession would be soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks glad u liked it
in next update i'll try to cheer you up

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: viny_queen

nice update love it👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww that was such a sweet update...please un dono ko jaldi mila do.. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92

Aww that was such a sweet update...please un dono ko jaldi mila do.. 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends thank you so much for liking my work
here is the another update most waited update about their confession

Scene 13:

RaYa Confessing of their love:

In the night Ram and Priya were sleeping on their repective sides on bed with their back to each other

Ram: Priya main khush hoon ki tumne dosti ka khadam tho aage badaya hai agar tum mujse pyar karthi tho... nahin Ram ye nahin ho sakta iske bare mein aur mat soch

Priya: thanks Ram meri dosti accept karne ke liye aap ka pyar tho mujhe nahin mil sakta par mein aapki dosti mein bhi khush hoon aur rehna padega

In the morning both were getting ready to leave to their work coincidentally Priya also had to leave at the same time Ram dropped her at her classes and left to his work. Next few days were spent either trying to talk to each other or completely trying to ignore each other's presence which was becoming difficult for them so they tried to maintain distances.

Ram was in his office working, he remembered the info he needed was in a pendrive he opened the dram and took out the pendrive then he remembered the conversation between him and Priya

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga
Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga
Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga

Main thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi
Oh, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai he was remembering all the moments when he was near to her holding her hand

Priya was keeping some clothes in her wardrobe she remembered their conversation when Ram called her while he was in US for his deal, remembering conversation Priya thinks Ram I'm lucky to have a husband like you I'll be with you forever whether you love me or not I'll always love you be with you in every step of your life

Suraj hua maddham, chaand jalne laga
Aasmaan yeh haai kyoon pighalne laga
Main thehri rahi, zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi
Haan, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai remembering how he told her lies about the work, milk,AC to be with her

Hai khoobsurat yeh pal, sab kuch raha hai badal
Sapne haqeeqat mein jo dhal rahe hai
Kya sadiyon se puraana hai rishtaa yeh hamaara
Ke jis tarha tumse hum mil rahe hai he remembered the moment when she moved her hand forward for friendship

Yunhi rahe har dam pyaar ka mausam
Yunhi milo humse tum janam janam she remembered both of them shaking their hands

Main thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi he remembered the card she sent to him

Haan, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna, kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Tere hi rang se yun main to rangeen hoon sanam

Paake tujhe khud se hi kho rahi hoon sanam
O maahiya, ve tere ishq mein
Haan doobke paar main ho rahi hoon sanam she remembered how she was standing near window and waiting for him

Saagar hua pyaasa, raat jagne lagi
Sholo ke dil mein bhi aag jalne lagi he remembered how he was sitting beside her holding her hand and kissing it

Main thehri lagi, zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil, saans thamne lagi she remembered how tears rolled from her eyes when she saw Ram going away from her for 2 days

Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai he remembered how he was making excuses to stay with her, not let her know about the excuses he made

Jalta rahe suraj
Chaand rahe maddham
Yeh khwaab hai mushkil
Na mil sakenge hum she remembered how he didn't say anything when she said she was to be his friend then he shook her hand with a smile and became sad

Thinking about it she came out of the changing room didn't see what was before her, she tripped and fell on the table hurting her leg her was about to hit her head on the leg sofa set in order to save head she used her hand as she hit the table the vase kept on it fell down and broke into pieces she didn't see that and kept her hand on it bcoz of which she hurt her hand badly and was bleeding.

Ram returned from office soon on that day as he felt that something was not right he was unable to concentrate on his work as soon as he entered his room he saw the messy floor then observed the blood on the floor he panicked started calling her name: Priya... Priya... as Priya was in washroom busy cleaning her hand she didn't hear his sound, he didn't understand any thing he caught his head in his heads then opened his eyes hoping that it is a bad dream then saw trail of blood drops to the changing room he followed the trial saw that Priya was trying to tie bandage on her hand, she was unable to tie when suddenly two hands caught the bandage and tied the knot she looked up to see who it was and was shocked to see anger in his eyes

Ram: ye sab kya hai Priya

Priya: main woh...

Ram: tum thik tho ho na

Priya nodded her head as she was scared to even answer seeing how angry he was

Ram: chalo ab bahar chalo

Priya couldn't walk as she hurt her leg too but she didn't tell him anything, quietly tried to come out but it was becoming impossible for her to even take a step Ram was already in changing room when he turned and saw that Priya was not with him, he saw her struggling to take even smallstep he came back to her helped her till bed. Ram took out his mobile and asked the doctor to come to his home immediately, Priya tried to stop him but in vain

Ram after talking to doctor turned to Priya: ye sab kaise hua mean while bansi kaka came and cleaned the room

Priya: woh main chal rahi thi aur na jaane kaise mera piar fisal gaya...

Ram: tum kab thik se chal na seekogi hamesha girthi pirthi rehti ho

Priya: maine kaha na maine nahin dekha...

Ram: tum kabhi dekh kar chalthi ho kya

Priya: aap aise kaise keh sakthe hai

Ram: tumhara dhyan kaha tha

Priya: woh main... before she could finish doctor entered the room, after checking her he gave her pain killers and came out of the room, Ram followed him

Ram: doctor Priya ki chot kab tak thik ho jayegi

Dcotor: 2 din mein thik heal hona shuru ho jayega

Ram: k Priya ko jaaya dard tho nahin hoga na

Doctor: Mr.kapoor maine unhe pain killers diye hai kuch der mein unka dard kam ho jayega k then I'll leave now

After doctor felt Ram came and sat beside Priya looked at her when he noticed that Priya was sleeping he took her hurted hand in his hand and kissed it: Priya tum kyun apna dhyan nahin rakhti apne liye na sahi mere liye hi sahi apna dhyan rakho please I love you Priya main tumhe khone se dartha hoon tears rolled from his eyes and fell on Priya's hand she woke up but was pretending to sleep thinking that Priya was asleep Ram continued talking to her: Priya main tumse sirf isliye durr hoon taki tum mujse se durr na ho jao main tumse bahut... but stopped himself as he got to know that she was awake as he saw tears rolling down her eyes

To hide his feelings from her Ram left her hand and shouted at her: tum hamesha aisi hi karthi ho... naatak sirf yahi aata hai tumhe

Priya eyes opened and she saw that he was angry: maine kya kiya hai aap aisa kyun keh rahe hai

Ram: jo tum kar rahi thi use dekhne ke baad aur kya kahunga

Priya: main sirf ye sunn koshish kar rahi thi ki, kya aap bhi mere liye wahi mehsoos karte hai jo main aap ke liye karti hoon

Ram: main tumhare liye kuch mehsoos nahin karta

Priya: tho abhi abhi kya keh rahe the ki aap mujse bahut' aur rukh kyun gaye kitne dino se main intezaar kar rahi thi is pal ka aur aap' aap aisa kyun sochte hai ki aap ke dil ki baat kehne se aap mujhe khodenge aisa nahin hoga main hamesha aap ke saath hoon aur rahungi

Ram felt very happy that Priya too felt the same for him but he didn't want her to know abt his feelings so he turned his face away from her: tum ne kya suna ya kya samjha mujhe nahin pata main tho ye keh raha tha ki main tumse bahut nafrat karta hoon

Priya: agar aap mujse nafrat karte hai tho thik hai and she started to walk out of the room she was unable to walk as it was paining a lot she limped her way to thedoor, Ram had hurt her so much that her heart ached more than her hurted leg. Ram heard the sound of door opening he saw that Priya was going out so he went after her

Ram: Priya ye tum kya kar rahi ho

Priya: aap keh rahe the na ki aap mujse nafrat karte hai tho main aap se durr ja rahi thi

Ram: nahin... tum kahin nahin jaogi

Priya: main kahin bhi jaa sakthi hoon... aap kyun rokhenge mujse aap tho mujse nafrat karte hai na

Ram: tum kahi nahin ja rahi ho... samjhi tum and he carried her to the bed

Priya: mujhe aapse durr jaana hai jab aap mujse nafrat karte hai tho main kyun aapke saath rahu

Ram: tum mujse se durr nahin ja sakthi samjhi tum

Priya: kyun nahin ja sakthi

Ram: kyun ki tum meri biwi ho

Priya: aap hi kehte hai na ki humara samjota ka rishta hai tho phir main kyun aap se durr nahin ja sakthi

Ram: kyun ki main tumse durr nahin reh saktha

Priya: lekin aap tho mujse nafrat karte hai tho phir aap kyun mujse durr nahin reh sakte

Ram: kyun ki main tumse pyaar karte hoon... bahut zyaada pyar karta hoon... apni zindagi se bhi zyaada... main tumse durr nahin reh sakta

Priya: aur na hi main, main kahin nahin jaungi aap ko chodd kar main tho sirf ye dekh na chahti thi ki aap mujse kitna pyar karte hai both hug each other crying their heart out

Ram: mujhe bahut darr lag raha tha main jis se bhi pyar karta hoon who mujse durr chala jaata hai maa, papa, daada ji aur main tumse durr nahin hona chahtha tha

Priya: main aapse kabhi bhi durr nahin jaungi

Ram cupped her face in his hands: I love you and kissed her forehead

Priya lower her eyes: I love you too and hugged him. Both lay down on the bed Ram pulled her close to him she kept her head on his chest he held her hand in his hand and kissed it she snuggled close to him and they went to sleep.


Happy and safe diwali to everyone


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear...
loved it...
finally they confessed...
continue soon dear...

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